Wolf Play : Critique on this

11:21:12 Scorpion

I have several "free wolf from the wolf party" token but somehow it still costs me mush?

11:20:01

@Eye
that is also very old

11:16:44 tern | they/he

dear god she was 29 wp years old

11:13:57 Lucky Ladybug

Scorpion
oh that's kinda weird

11:12:51 Scorpion

oh i meant i clicked because I have 10 points to give to a newbie and none of thier wolves had any allowed cp

11:11:44 Lucky Ladybug

Scorpion
some people do it for certain attribute or certain wolves of theirs, so that if you wanna donate point to them you have to do it for a certain wolf/attribute, Many people keep dominance turned off so that it doesn't mess up pack happiness if someone donates on it

11:10:45 tern | they/he

mossy, imladris
thanks

lupins
yeah im trying to calculate how many wp years old one of my wolves is (she was stoned so the age it shows isnt accurate)

11:08:55 Scorpion

is there a reason for not allowing someone to give your wolves points?

11:08:18

@Imladris
Thanks, that's good to know.

Imladris

11:07:21

One year is 12 days yes. 3 days for each season

11:06:05

@Eye
Wasn't that yesterday?

Vax

11:05:41 a rock in your shoe

cyclops
yuh

11:04:36 tern | they/he

how many days is a full wp year? 12, right?

STS

11:03:26 TS, Speckles

Lupins. Yeah, its just odd

Scorpion. I didnt know that, thank you

11:02:43 Scorpion

when they're on the oldest wolves leaderboard i think they have less of a chance of dying

11:02:36

@STS
He is also 5th among the oldest wolves! He is really cool.

STS

11:01:29 TS, Speckles

Lupins.
-WP Click-

11:00:48

That is really old!

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11:21:38 tiger\Owl|she\her

Very old indeed

11:21:12 Scorpion

I have several "free wolf from the wolf party" token but somehow it still costs me mush?

11:20:01

@Eye
that is also very old

11:16:44 tern | they/he

dear god she was 29 wp years old

11:13:57 Lucky Ladybug

Scorpion
oh that's kinda weird

11:12:51 Scorpion

oh i meant i clicked because I have 10 points to give to a newbie and none of thier wolves had any allowed cp

11:11:44 Lucky Ladybug

11:10:45 tern | they/he

mossy, imladris
thanks

lupins
yeah im trying to calculate how many wp years old one of my wolves is (she was stoned so the age it shows isnt accurate)

11:08:55 Scorpion

is there a reason for not allowing someone to give your wolves points?

11:08:18

@Imladris
Thanks, that's good to know.

Imladris

11:07:21

One year is 12 days yes. 3 days for each season

11:06:05

@Eye
Wasn't that yesterday?

Vax

11:05:41 a rock in your shoe

cyclops
yuh

11:04:36 tern | they/he

how many days is a full wp year? 12, right?

STS

11:03:26 TS, Speckles

Lupins. Yeah, its just odd

Scorpion. I didnt know that, thank you

11:02:43 Scorpion

when they're on the oldest wolves leaderboard i think they have less of a chance of dying

11:02:36

@STS
He is also 5th among the oldest wolves! He is really cool.

STS

11:01:29 TS, Speckles

Lupins.
-WP Click-

11:00:48

That is really old!

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May 15, 2018 02:12 PM

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https://s9.postimg.cc/u0o0j78j3/Untitled412.png

Any improvements I can make? :/

Edited at May 15, 2018 02:13 PM by Cún.

May 16, 2018 12:44 AM

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The tail and back leg are extremely strange and I can't quite figure out what's going on there. XD

Also, instead of two sitting poses, I'd add one that clearly shows a side view.

Edited at May 16, 2018 12:45 AM by Lykotia

May 16, 2018 01:57 AM

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Lykotia said:
The tail and back leg are extremely strange and I can't quite figure out what's going on there. XD

Also, instead of two sitting poses, I'd add one that clearly shows a side view.

I haven't a clue what I did either. It's so cringy for other players to notice :')

Thanks for the help. :D

May 20, 2018 12:26 PM

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Um... maybe make the lower jaw line up a bit more with the upper jaw. Otherwise it kinda looks like an overbite. Hope that helps a bit.

May 20, 2018 12:27 PM

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Hunters said:
Um... maybe make the lower jaw line up a bit more with the upper jaw. Otherwise it kinda looks like an overbite. Hope that helps a bit.

Thanks, anything is helpful x'D

May 20, 2018 08:40 PM

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I think it looks really good, but the head looks a tad big for the body, and didnt quite flow well into it. Other than that, awesome job!

May 21, 2018 01:52 AM

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Cutting Edge said:
I think it looks really good, but the head looks a tad big for the body, and didn't quite flow well into it. Other than that, awesome job!

>.< Thanks!

May 21, 2018 02:28 AM

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The back legs are a bit too stretched out to be a natural position, and it looks like the tail is coming off of the back leg. A line there to separate the tail from the leg would help it look less off. ^^

Edited at May 21, 2018 02:29 AM by Evee4ever228

May 21, 2018 09:53 AM