Wolf Play : Critique

01:27:08 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Ok I’m off bye bye y’all

01:24:36 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Oh yeah! Just got my 4th yap trophy

Tangled Moon

01:17:18 Moony

my beautiful wolf Aphrodite died 😭😭😭
-WP Click-

KittyE

12:49:20

Does anyone know of fertility figurine being sold

12:30:27 Kneecap stealer

Can you yell at me to go to sleep please?🥲🥲🥲🥲 One of my old roommates came knocking on the door and woke me up because I put a friends stuff outside (took over an hour she had so much shit) because of some personal stuff she tried to do (kick me out is the main one)

12:28:35 Kneecap stealer

:0 hi eve and yes, thankies it's VERY helpful when you don't have to buy them or find the ingredients to craft them, espically if you have to craft multiple of each

SixBears

12:24:38 evebot

That was the other day. I thought it would be helpful. :)

12:14:08 Kneecap stealer

When did they add the healing pots in market

12:11:29 Kneecap stealer

I swear if I wake up to a labor notification and I have duds imma scream

Vulpixles

11:52:46 Pixie, Vul | ♈

Yeah I definitely missed writing. It's been like 4 years

11:35:25 renee

@Sleep
strange

11:33:20 Kneecap stealer

I was asleep..until someone came Knocking on my back door asking for my boyfriend and now I cannot go back to sleep

11:20:00 renee

@Sleep
go to SLEEP!

11:18:43 Kneecap stealer

Someone yell at me to go to sleep, I gotta get up early tomorrow to visit my boyfriend

11:17:31 Kneecap stealer

I'm breathing so heavy I'm convinced something is wrong

Ninjago Realm

11:09:54 Waterfall,Zane,Nya

Zane Julien chokes on their meal.

Mood: Sheepish well done Zane... How do you choke...

11:01:37 renee

@Lucky Rat
BBQ chips are fire

Spellbound

11:01:16 miss fine dining

go buy some

10:54:34 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

I want some BBQ chips >:( I’ve been craving them all day |:’(

Nekros

10:54:19 Kros

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01:27:08 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Ok I’m off bye bye y’all

01:24:36 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Oh yeah! Just got my 4th yap trophy

Tangled Moon

01:17:18 Moony

my beautiful wolf Aphrodite died 😭😭😭
-WP Click-

KittyE

12:49:20

Does anyone know of fertility figurine being sold

12:30:27 Kneecap stealer

12:28:35 Kneecap stealer

:0 hi eve and yes, thankies it's VERY helpful when you don't have to buy them or find the ingredients to craft them, espically if you have to craft multiple of each

SixBears

12:24:38 evebot

That was the other day. I thought it would be helpful. :)

12:14:08 Kneecap stealer

When did they add the healing pots in market

12:11:29 Kneecap stealer

I swear if I wake up to a labor notification and I have duds imma scream

Vulpixles

11:52:46 Pixie, Vul | ♈

Yeah I definitely missed writing. It's been like 4 years

11:35:25 renee

@Sleep
strange

11:33:20 Kneecap stealer

I was asleep..until someone came Knocking on my back door asking for my boyfriend and now I cannot go back to sleep

11:20:00 renee

@Sleep
go to SLEEP!

11:18:43 Kneecap stealer

Someone yell at me to go to sleep, I gotta get up early tomorrow to visit my boyfriend

11:17:31 Kneecap stealer

I'm breathing so heavy I'm convinced something is wrong

Ninjago Realm

11:09:54 Waterfall,Zane,Nya

Zane Julien chokes on their meal.

Mood: Sheepish well done Zane... How do you choke...

11:01:37 renee

@Lucky Rat
BBQ chips are fire

Spellbound

11:01:16 miss fine dining

go buy some

10:54:34 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

I want some BBQ chips >:( I’ve been craving them all day |:’(

Nekros

10:54:19 Kros

RP anybody? PM me!

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September 18, 2018 05:13 PM

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So I'm looking for critique of my art

When posting pleade state what peice of art your posting for

Thank you

Huge wolf project [sketch]

https://i.postimg.cc/pXQvpwCQ/Untitled124.png

Hide and Seek [HEE contest]

http://oi66.tinypic.com/rlgox5.jpg

Edited at September 18, 2018 06:54 PM by Moonshire Pack

September 18, 2018 06:54 PM

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new artz added

September 18, 2018 06:59 PM

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Um they both look fine to me xD

September 18, 2018 07:32 PM

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The wolf looks great, but maybe make the belly "bigger" when it gets to its hind legs.

September 19, 2018 03:31 AM

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Thank you :D

September 19, 2018 05:07 AM

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Agreeing with Damian. The body/ belly lines should move down a little or else the legs would look too big, hind legs mostly but front legs too.

Round out the ears a little?

The back hind leg looks a bit off, perhaps move it forward a bit and add a bit of an angle so it doesn't look so straight? Or perhaps it was just the paw.

I can't help on the photo manipulation though. Sorry!

September 19, 2018 08:25 AM

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the belly should be a little bigger near the back, and the nose/snout is quite pointed, I would round it out a little for a more realistic look. Other than that it looks great! Did you use a reference?

September 19, 2018 09:15 AM