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 Doodle Dragon
08:03:16 He/They pronouns
Ravenpaw,
Aww! I love sheep :D
I'm doing pretty good ^^
 Master Darkfire
08:03:14 Dark/fire/ice
doodle when i see spider i scream at it until it dies because im just too loud
 Night Raven College
08:02:42 NRC/Night/Raven
Doodle,
I'm good(: One of our sheep had a baby yesterday and the lamb is so cute and it's a girl. Then I stayed up till after 10 last night finishing my OC and reading. How about you?
 Doodle Dragon
08:01:38 He/They pronouns
Ravenpaw,
How are ya? :3
 Night Raven College
08:01:18 NRC/Night/Raven
Hi Doodle
 Doodle Dragon
08:01:00 He/They pronouns
Ravenpaw,
Hiya!
 Doodle Dragon
08:00:52 He/They pronouns
Darkfire,
I'm gonna chase you /silly
I hope the spiders don't get you
 Night Raven College
08:00:50 NRC/Night/Raven
Sorry I keep poofing....
 Master Darkfire
07:58:50 Dark/fire/ice
khaos just stole more of my food...ok doodle im still in your closet
 Winterfell
07:57:41 Winter
I need to get my act together and start breeding wolves worthy of staying in my pack
 Doodle Dragon
07:57:39 He/They pronouns
Lurking,
Get out from our beds
 Lurking shadows
07:57:06 
Jester im under ur bed
 CB's Sanctuary
07:55:24 Cinn / Rody / Ace
DD
yippee :DD
 Doodle Dragon
07:54:43 He/They pronouns
Cinn,
I got you more gum wrapper ^^
 CB's Sanctuary
07:53:37 Cinn / Rody / Ace
-WP Click-
pointing and screaming!! a dyschrom!!

i knew turritella and val's kids would be good
 SoulEaters
07:53:11 
Sup, brother Soul!
 Winterfell
07:52:34 Winter
Shame he'd 3rd gen :,) -WP Click-
 Soul
07:52:00 Rody / Ace
the two kids that look like seraphina are kinda ass </3
 Jester
07:50:44 
Yeah
 Doodle Dragon
07:50:05 He/They pronouns
Oh, chat is kinda asleep

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 Doodle Dragon
08:03:16 He/They pronouns
Ravenpaw,
Aww! I love sheep :D
I'm doing pretty good ^^
 Master Darkfire
08:03:14 Dark/fire/ice
doodle when i see spider i scream at it until it dies because im just too loud
 Night Raven College
08:02:42 NRC/Night/Raven
Doodle,
I'm good(: One of our sheep had a baby yesterday and the lamb is so cute and it's a girl. Then I stayed up till after 10 last night finishing my OC and reading. How about you?
 Doodle Dragon
08:01:38 He/They pronouns
Ravenpaw,
How are ya? :3
 Night Raven College
08:01:18 NRC/Night/Raven
Hi Doodle
 Doodle Dragon
08:01:00 He/They pronouns
Ravenpaw,
Hiya!
 Doodle Dragon
08:00:52 He/They pronouns
Darkfire,
I'm gonna chase you /silly
I hope the spiders don't get you
 Night Raven College
08:00:50 NRC/Night/Raven
Sorry I keep poofing....
 Master Darkfire
07:58:50 Dark/fire/ice
khaos just stole more of my food...ok doodle im still in your closet
 Winterfell
07:57:41 Winter
I need to get my act together and start breeding wolves worthy of staying in my pack
 Doodle Dragon
07:57:39 He/They pronouns
Lurking,
Get out from our beds
 Lurking shadows
07:57:06 
Jester im under ur bed
 CB's Sanctuary
07:55:24 Cinn / Rody / Ace
DD
yippee :DD
 Doodle Dragon
07:54:43 He/They pronouns
Cinn,
I got you more gum wrapper ^^
 CB's Sanctuary
07:53:37 Cinn / Rody / Ace
-WP Click-
pointing and screaming!! a dyschrom!!

i knew turritella and val's kids would be good
 SoulEaters
07:53:11 
Sup, brother Soul!
 Winterfell
07:52:34 Winter
Shame he'd 3rd gen :,) -WP Click-
 Soul
07:52:00 Rody / Ace
the two kids that look like seraphina are kinda ass </3
 Jester
07:50:44 
Yeah
 Doodle Dragon
07:50:05 He/They pronouns
Oh, chat is kinda asleep




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Critique?August 8, 2018 02:05 PM


Grimm

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I'm looking for a critique on this. I made the character for Cun :p
I'm looking for critiques on mostly anatomy, but coloring as well.

https://s15.postimg.cc/p5ekn64l5/sketch1533754368467.png

Edited at August 8, 2018 04:01 PM by Wolf~Song
Critique?August 8, 2018 02:08 PM


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The head is very small as opposed to the body, particularly how thick the legs are, the chest us really large as well, which all makes the head look super small. I recommend looking up references to aid with body proportions.
Critique?August 8, 2018 02:10 PM


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Mistress Nyx said:
The head is very small as opposed to the body, particularly how thick the legs are, the chest us really large as well, which all makes the head look super small. I recommend looking up references to aid with body proportions.

Thank you! This is super helpful because I didn't notice that! I'll use more references next time :3
Critique?August 8, 2018 02:13 PM


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Mistress Nyx said:
The head is very small as opposed to the body, particularly how thick the legs are, the chest us really large as well, which all makes the head look super small. I recommend looking up references to aid with body proportions.

I agree with Nyx. You need to either make the head bigger or size down the chest legs and try to make the neck a tiny bit longer. The big legs could be an acceptance because if she is a strong character it will match.
Critique?August 8, 2018 02:15 PM


Grimm

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Dragon’s Den said:



Mistress Nyx said:
The head is very small as opposed to the body, particularly how thick the legs are, the chest us really large as well, which all makes the head look super small. I recommend looking up references to aid with body proportions.

I agree with Nyx. You need to either make the head bigger or size down the chest legs and try to make the neck a tiny bit longer. The big legs could be an acceptance because if she is a strong character it will match.

I will next time! Thanks! I just started drawing big cats, so proportions are difficult. She's supposed to be a short and stumpy muscular character, so I did draw the large legs on purpose.
Critique?August 8, 2018 02:33 PM


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Wolf~Song said:


Dragon’s Den said:



Mistress Nyx said:
The head is very small as opposed to the body, particularly how thick the legs are, the chest us really large as well, which all makes the head look super small. I recommend looking up references to aid with body proportions.

I agree with Nyx. You need to either make the head bigger or size down the chest legs and try to make the neck a tiny bit longer. The big legs could be an acceptance because if she is a strong character it will match.

I will next time! Thanks! I just started drawing big cats, so proportions are difficult. She's supposed to be a short and stumpy muscular character, so I did draw the large legs on purpose.

Makes sense to me! Good job on the art tho, I suck at cats.
Critique?August 8, 2018 02:34 PM


Grimm

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Dragon’s Den said:


Wolf~Song said:


Dragon’s Den said:



Mistress Nyx said:
The head is very small as opposed to the body, particularly how thick the legs are, the chest us really large as well, which all makes the head look super small. I recommend looking up references to aid with body proportions.

I agree with Nyx. You need to either make the head bigger or size down the chest legs and try to make the neck a tiny bit longer. The big legs could be an acceptance because if she is a strong character it will match.

I will next time! Thanks! I just started drawing big cats, so proportions are difficult. She's supposed to be a short and stumpy muscular character, so I did draw the large legs on purpose.

Makes sense to me! Good job on the art tho, I suck at cats.

Thank you! I really appreciate it. I can hardly do domestic cats, so I feel you XD
Critique?August 8, 2018 02:42 PM


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Overall I think you did a good job. c:
Critique?August 8, 2018 02:45 PM


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Cún. said:
Overall I think you did a good job. c:

Thanks! ^.^

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