Wolf Play : Critique?

12:50:41 Kneecap stealer

Hehehehehe 100 mush down the drain let's hope for something good

12:50:02 Kneecap stealer

I screamed the second I saw I got triplets that day

Andypaws

12:49:37 Andy/Kait [he/they]

Did i show off my bald pup yet

12:49:34 Kneecap stealer

I hardly go for talents- mars son looks EXACTLY like his daddy and rivere's son (need a new name for him) looks exactly like his mom

12:48:28 Many moons, one me

And on triplets no less

12:48:12 Many moons, one me

Sleepy kitty, I believe Sapphire and her siblings would beg to differ... 1k talents aren't too shabby

12:46:58 Kneecap stealer

Time to go for 5k mush

12:46:12 Kneecap stealer

After 8 litters she FINALLY makes me proud

12:45:37 Many moons, one me

Pink kitty
Awww that's amazing!

bloodevolver

12:45:36

Is Panda markings a head marking?

12:45:12 Many moons, one me

Andy, that is nightmare fuel for almost 2 in the morning (for me at least)

12:44:46 Kneecap stealer

-WP Click-
He looks like his mon

12:44:21 Many moons, one me

Hello pink kitty, what's up?

Andypaws

12:42:10 Andy/Kait [he/they]

Leopard seals scare me so much

-Click-

12:41:18 Many moons, one me

Sleep well

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Serpents
Lol

Serpents

12:31:22 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

okay Im off as its late I need to start just drawing or something then head off to sleep

Serpents

12:28:17 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

@Moon im everwhere im even in your walls im all over the place so yah its how I drain power for my energy and life /lighthearted /joking XD

12:26:51 Many moons, one me

Wishing Flame feels something odd and snake-like touch them, and scrambles to their paws.

Mood: Wary
Serpents, have you been near my pack? /Silly

Serpents

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July 30, 2018 05:59 AM

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I was just messing around and I made this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/yhul59mm5/dog_2_red_merle.png

And this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/qaowjlu99/horsem.png

If anyone can't see^ that's a horse on a dark green and black background

I'm just looking for advice and stuff.

Edited at July 30, 2018 06:00 AM by Diggie

July 30, 2018 02:36 PM

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Horse

I can't see it

But the D ring for your bit is way too big

And the rest of the bridle is way to small

July 30, 2018 02:46 PM

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Well,for the leopard I would have added more details. The lines look straight, maybe fluff thru up a bit with some fur. For the paws, you could try something like this.

https://s15.postimg.cc/petz174uz/beach.png

https://s15.postimg.cc/5wzblbsij/1532979343133.png

(Lineart by Kekeywolf. Devianart. com)

Then you could go in and give the leopard cartoon like eyes, sorta like the wolf above. Black dots make it look extremely basic and simple.

For the horse:

Well, first, try a lighter background. The animal is extremely hard to see,even with full brightness.

Try fixing the ear. Keep horse atomony in memory. Swoop the ear forward a bit. And the chin needs fixed a bit. Here..just look at this:

https://s15.postimg.cc/q6wn0glxn/1532979820954.png

I would possibly work on mane a bit too.

There is a strip of white by the chin that you should finish coloring in.

However, despite this all,I love your work! I can see great things coming from you in the future ^^

Edited at July 30, 2018 02:47 PM by Astrophel°^°

July 30, 2018 03:58 PM

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Thanks Astro and Midnight!

The top one is a red merle Amercian Staffordshire though, which is why the eyes are black

I'll change the toes a bit, maybe make the horse's background lighter.

I'll also change the chin, but currently I'm trying to decide what to work on next XD

July 30, 2018 06:33 PM