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01:50:04 NRC/Raven

You said polar bear tundra is the only place I could think would have polar bears

01:48:56 Many moons, one me

NRC
Yep! How'd you know?

01:46:55 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

anyone up for an rp pm me im bored and need something to do
if anyone has shifter ideas or hybrid ideas pm me

Night Raven College

01:46:40 NRC/Raven

Moon
In tundra?

01:46:04 Many moons, one me

And somehow I survived

01:44:48 Many moons, one me

First I find 6 grizzlies and now I've found 5 polar bears

Eye of Eternity

01:44:12 tern | they/he

moonfall
ooh maybe ill do that on the second one

01:43:51 Sith Happens

Now to go get shamrocks!

01:42:19 Sith Happens

I'm done with it for today, I'm happy woth what I got

01:40:54 Caesar

bro keeps winning jackpot after jackpot

01:40:43 Many moons, one me

I follow a few archery magazines and there's always a "new equipment to buy" page and also tips and tricks maybe?

01:38:50 Sith Happens

-WP Click-

Ooh.

Eye of Eternity

01:38:47 tern | they/he

moonfall
i cant its for an assignment </3 basically ive got this -Click- and i need a few more of those 'this article on page whatever' things

01:37:38 Many moons, one me

Wild, yes!
Learn from me, I went to breed to a stud I liked and turns out DS had claimed him and my litter was the only one he'd had

01:36:03 Many moons, one me

Eye
You could call it The daily bark? Maybe put random tidbits in there

Night Raven College

01:35:55 NRC/Raven

I'll show you guys once he's completely done

Night Raven College

01:35:37 NRC/Raven

Ok now my OC looks better. Now I just gotta outline, color and I'll be done.(:

Eye of Eternity

01:34:32 tern | they/he

why is coming up with fake magazine articles so difficult

01:32:11 Andy [he/they]

my chud dog has learned that if he smashes his head onto my keyboard, i'll pay attention to him

01:31:31 Many moons, one me

I'm considering bringing my boy back home, but I'm proud of how expensive he is 😁
-WP Click-

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Night Raven College

01:50:04 NRC/Raven

You said polar bear tundra is the only place I could think would have polar bears

01:48:56 Many moons, one me

NRC
Yep! How'd you know?

01:46:55 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

anyone up for an rp pm me im bored and need something to do
if anyone has shifter ideas or hybrid ideas pm me

Night Raven College

01:46:40 NRC/Raven

Moon
In tundra?

01:46:04 Many moons, one me

And somehow I survived

01:44:48 Many moons, one me

First I find 6 grizzlies and now I've found 5 polar bears

Eye of Eternity

01:44:12 tern | they/he

moonfall
ooh maybe ill do that on the second one

01:43:51 Sith Happens

Now to go get shamrocks!

01:42:19 Sith Happens

I'm done with it for today, I'm happy woth what I got

01:40:54 Caesar

bro keeps winning jackpot after jackpot

01:40:43 Many moons, one me

I follow a few archery magazines and there's always a "new equipment to buy" page and also tips and tricks maybe?

01:38:50 Sith Happens

-WP Click-

Ooh.

Eye of Eternity

01:38:47 tern | they/he

moonfall
i cant its for an assignment </3 basically ive got this -Click- and i need a few more of those 'this article on page whatever' things

01:37:38 Many moons, one me

Wild, yes!
Learn from me, I went to breed to a stud I liked and turns out DS had claimed him and my litter was the only one he'd had

01:36:03 Many moons, one me

Eye
You could call it The daily bark? Maybe put random tidbits in there

Night Raven College

01:35:55 NRC/Raven

I'll show you guys once he's completely done

Night Raven College

01:35:37 NRC/Raven

Ok now my OC looks better. Now I just gotta outline, color and I'll be done.(:

Eye of Eternity

01:34:32 tern | they/he

why is coming up with fake magazine articles so difficult

01:32:11 Andy [he/they]

my chud dog has learned that if he smashes his head onto my keyboard, i'll pay attention to him

01:31:31 Many moons, one me

I'm considering bringing my boy back home, but I'm proud of how expensive he is 😁
-WP Click-

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September 18, 2018 05:13 PM

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So I'm looking for critique of my art

When posting pleade state what peice of art your posting for

Thank you

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Huge wolf project [sketch]

https://i.postimg.cc/pXQvpwCQ/Untitled124.png

#2

Hide and Seek [HEE contest]

http://oi66.tinypic.com/rlgox5.jpg

Edited at September 18, 2018 06:54 PM by Moonshire Pack

September 18, 2018 06:54 PM

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new artz added

September 18, 2018 06:59 PM

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Um they both look fine to me xD

September 18, 2018 07:32 PM

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The wolf looks great, but maybe make the belly "bigger" when it gets to its hind legs.

September 19, 2018 03:31 AM

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Thank you :D

September 19, 2018 05:07 AM

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Agreeing with Damian. The body/ belly lines should move down a little or else the legs would look too big, hind legs mostly but front legs too.

Round out the ears a little?

The back hind leg looks a bit off, perhaps move it forward a bit and add a bit of an angle so it doesn't look so straight? Or perhaps it was just the paw.

I can't help on the photo manipulation though. Sorry!

September 19, 2018 08:25 AM

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the belly should be a little bigger near the back, and the nose/snout is quite pointed, I would round it out a little for a more realistic look. Other than that it looks great! Did you use a reference?

September 19, 2018 09:15 AM

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Thanks every for the critique

Currantly eveyone thinks my arts only work 100-200 mush so I'm Tring to improve

And I didn't use a ref however I was studying wnatomy for hours yesterday

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