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07:57:49 Waterfall,Zane,Nya

off to eat,

07:55:48 ezra, he/him

aw-
nice!

07:55:31 Stalking chat

Moon,
Yes it truly is
I love it though, Its adorable!!
and may I ask AGAIN what I should draw

07:55:24 AW

No way my trainees just defeated eve with zero damage

07:54:03 Many moons, one me

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Tongue blep is always a must

07:51:03

Yay, new palette. So dark. ♥︎

07:48:02 AW

kind of what I was thinking. I forgot that got a bit of an update since I last played too

07:47:20 ezra, he/him

aw-
you could just wait a couple minutes for their health to regen over 100

07:46:37 AW

I'm trying to decide if its worth putting health potions on my DH wolves that have 98 and 100 points before fighting her lol

07:44:35 Stalking chat

AW,
100

07:44:21 AW

Does Eve hit for 90 or 100? I dont remember

07:44:11 Stalking chat

-Click-

tounge blep :p
How do we think?

Eye of Eternity

07:36:29 tern | they/he

never mind

Eye of Eternity

07:33:23 tern | they/he

hey chat pose 1 or pose 2

Eye of Eternity

07:27:57 tern | they/he

moonfall
no problem ^^

07:22:33 Many moons, one me

Aww, thanks Eye 😁

07:22:29 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

anyone up for an rp pm me im bored or a chat

07:17:26 Many moons, one me

902 total moves and praying tundra is generous... Will I have to sacrifice a pup to appease the wp gods? Only time will tell

07:17:25 ezra, he/him

-WP Click- to be fair to me though he's a dh

Night Raven College

07:17:03 NRC/Raven

Well off I go to try and pay attention to my show now, bye

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07:57:49 Waterfall,Zane,Nya

off to eat,

07:55:48 ezra, he/him

aw-
nice!

07:55:31 Stalking chat

Moon,
Yes it truly is
I love it though, Its adorable!!
and may I ask AGAIN what I should draw

07:55:24 AW

No way my trainees just defeated eve with zero damage

07:54:03 Many moons, one me

Wild
Tongue blep is always a must

07:51:03

Yay, new palette. So dark. ♥︎

07:48:02 AW

kind of what I was thinking. I forgot that got a bit of an update since I last played too

07:47:20 ezra, he/him

aw-
you could just wait a couple minutes for their health to regen over 100

07:46:37 AW

I'm trying to decide if its worth putting health potions on my DH wolves that have 98 and 100 points before fighting her lol

07:44:35 Stalking chat

AW,
100

07:44:21 AW

Does Eve hit for 90 or 100? I dont remember

07:44:11 Stalking chat

-Click-

tounge blep :p
How do we think?

Eye of Eternity

07:36:29 tern | they/he

never mind

Eye of Eternity

07:33:23 tern | they/he

hey chat pose 1 or pose 2

Eye of Eternity

07:27:57 tern | they/he

moonfall
no problem ^^

07:22:33 Many moons, one me

Aww, thanks Eye 😁

07:22:29 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

anyone up for an rp pm me im bored or a chat

07:17:26 Many moons, one me

902 total moves and praying tundra is generous... Will I have to sacrifice a pup to appease the wp gods? Only time will tell

07:17:25 ezra, he/him

-WP Click- to be fair to me though he's a dh

Night Raven College

07:17:03 NRC/Raven

Well off I go to try and pay attention to my show now, bye

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July 30, 2018 05:59 AM

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I was just messing around and I made this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/yhul59mm5/dog_2_red_merle.png

And this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/qaowjlu99/horsem.png

If anyone can't see^ that's a horse on a dark green and black background

I'm just looking for advice and stuff.

Edited at July 30, 2018 06:00 AM by Diggie

July 30, 2018 02:36 PM

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Horse

I can't see it

But the D ring for your bit is way too big

And the rest of the bridle is way to small

July 30, 2018 02:46 PM

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Well,for the leopard I would have added more details. The lines look straight, maybe fluff thru up a bit with some fur. For the paws, you could try something like this.

https://s15.postimg.cc/petz174uz/beach.png

Or

https://s15.postimg.cc/5wzblbsij/1532979343133.png

(Lineart by Kekeywolf. Devianart. com)

Then you could go in and give the leopard cartoon like eyes, sorta like the wolf above. Black dots make it look extremely basic and simple.

For the horse:

Well, first, try a lighter background. The animal is extremely hard to see,even with full brightness.

Try fixing the ear. Keep horse atomony in memory. Swoop the ear forward a bit. And the chin needs fixed a bit. Here..just look at this:

https://s15.postimg.cc/q6wn0glxn/1532979820954.png

I would possibly work on mane a bit too.

There is a strip of white by the chin that you should finish coloring in.

However, despite this all,I love your work! I can see great things coming from you in the future ^^

Edited at July 30, 2018 02:47 PM by Astrophel°^°

July 30, 2018 03:58 PM

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Thanks Astro and Midnight!

The top one is a red merle Amercian Staffordshire though, which is why the eyes are black

I'll change the toes a bit, maybe make the horse's background lighter.

I'll also change the chin, but currently I'm trying to decide what to work on next XD

July 30, 2018 06:33 PM

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Sorry if I sound rude but... I can't see the horse lol! The dogs paws could use some work, but other than that it looks super cute! Great Job!

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