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07:14:54 Andy [he/they]

Thanks Wild^^

07:13:37 Stalking chat

Andy,
Aw thats adorable!!

TheFlyingKitten

07:12:53 Petri Dish/ENA Mum

I... never want to find myself in one of those restaurants where you get a bowl filled with water just so you can wash your hands at the table.

07:12:13 Vash | Xy

Love not sleeping like I don't need to be awake in 4 hours >.<

07:11:56 Vash | Xy

Heyy

07:05:25 tiger\Owl|she\her

For some reason I was chanting beat mush game In my head and I won mushies in mush huntXDDD

07:04:24 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

anyone up for an rp pm me im bored

07:03:40 tiger\Owl|she\her

Floofly Chad!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

07:01:45 Andy [he/they]

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06:55:20 Anthony // He/they

Why can't I draw my ocs the same way I draw fanart T0T

The Silmaril Pack

06:54:39

Moonfall
And the other pup makes me think of the name Shallow Waters

The Silmaril Pack

06:53:14

Moonfall
Brookite for pup 56?

06:44:34 tiger\Owl|she\her

Moon I would help but I’m really bad with names

06:33:07 Stalking chat

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really just a test draw, but should I keep this headshot?

06:30:51 Many moons, one me

Name ideas?
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The Silmaril Pack

06:17:25

Sleep
Thanks for the help^^

06:15:16 Juicy Arm Boy

Wild
X3

06:15:07 Stalking chat

Ever,
Okay!

06:14:59 Juicy Arm Boy

Wild
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06:14:47 Kneecap stealer

No you wouldn't need to if it's an exclusive coat

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07:14:54 Andy [he/they]

Thanks Wild^^

07:13:37 Stalking chat

Andy,
Aw thats adorable!!

TheFlyingKitten

07:12:53 Petri Dish/ENA Mum

I... never want to find myself in one of those restaurants where you get a bowl filled with water just so you can wash your hands at the table.

07:12:13 Vash | Xy

Love not sleeping like I don't need to be awake in 4 hours >.<

07:11:56 Vash | Xy

Heyy

07:05:25 tiger\Owl|she\her

For some reason I was chanting beat mush game In my head and I won mushies in mush huntXDDD

07:04:24 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

anyone up for an rp pm me im bored

07:03:40 tiger\Owl|she\her

Floofly Chad!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

07:01:45 Andy [he/they]

-Click- cat

06:55:20 Anthony // He/they

Why can't I draw my ocs the same way I draw fanart T0T

The Silmaril Pack

06:54:39

Moonfall
And the other pup makes me think of the name Shallow Waters

The Silmaril Pack

06:53:14

Moonfall
Brookite for pup 56?

06:44:34 tiger\Owl|she\her

Moon I would help but I’m really bad with names

06:33:07 Stalking chat

-Click-

really just a test draw, but should I keep this headshot?

06:30:51 Many moons, one me

Name ideas?
-WP Click-
-WP Click-

The Silmaril Pack

06:17:25

Sleep
Thanks for the help^^

06:15:16 Juicy Arm Boy

Wild
X3

06:15:07 Stalking chat

Ever,
Okay!

06:14:59 Juicy Arm Boy

Wild
Full
Body

06:14:47 Kneecap stealer

No you wouldn't need to if it's an exclusive coat

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June 17, 2018 01:25 PM

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Heya, I was hoping for some critique on this!
https://image.ibb.co/my78pd/04_B80_E15_8317_4_AFD_A3_CC_39_B9_AB3_ACB6_C.png

June 17, 2018 01:30 PM

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It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

June 17, 2018 01:31 PM

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ThunderousSymphonies said:
It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

Thanks! I'm fixing now!

June 17, 2018 01:39 PM

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https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

June 17, 2018 01:54 PM

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It is gorgeous, but to make it more eye catching, I would recommend more shadow and more light.

The shading is very dull, but that can be easily fixed!!!

Other than that, it is a stunning piece of artwork!

June 21, 2018 05:37 PM

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I would make the eyes larger and with a slightly more defined shape, along with the nose, and make the muzzle and ears a little sharper and the chin a little bigger.

https://image.ibb.co/nq4oVT/advice.png

https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

By the way, I love your colouring! I can't colour for anything!

June 22, 2018 11:30 PM

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I would just say work a little with the direction the fur flows in, and the lighting on the snout is a little askew (I would suggest a slightly sharper angle]

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