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04:06:12 Exist / Kuskyn

Ghoulish, It's best buying or using wolf party till you get a boost/defect, as a wolf has to have one/or both before being customized ^^;

04:06:11 Rook

paws? :3
-WP Click-

04:05:18 Altar 🦌

dont worry Pink, i take any chance to advertise my works. now give me paws.

04:05:08

Existence
……. Bro I’m blind I’m just gonna go crash out now

04:00:20 Rook

the bonfire decor is so fucking big omg LMAO

04:00:13 Kneecap stealer

And the cheapest infa is 2k mush

03:59:54 Exist / Kuskyn

It states at the bottom of the custom pack "Defects and Boosts cannot be applied."

03:58:57 Exist / Kuskyn

Ghoulish, you can't customise a boost or defect onto a wolf, you can only View them to see how they look.

03:57:37

Brooo I’m so annoyed I made and PAID for a custom wolf with infatuation and I went to my den it’s basic no boost ZERO I made sure to double check before I bought it to I know it had the boost

03:57:35 Kneecap stealer

Is that existence :0

03:56:00 Exist / Kuskyn

Collar man, tasty noodles thank you xD

03:49:10 Kneecap stealer

I appreciate the thought and love I can clearly see you put into this art <3 but I'm not too much of an artsy fan

03:48:16 Kneecap stealer

Sabbath

I'll take them all, one by one >:) make them into soup, plus it distracts me from the pain

03:42:55 Altar 🦌

-Click-

😔 offering you some art in these trying times, Pink Kitty. Hope you feel better soon :(

03:41:32 Rook

Not until the morning/afternoon

03:41:12 Kneecap stealer

-WP Click-

Go into labor so I can pop you and sleep already

03:40:52 Kneecap stealer

Oh by the way you got any duds for the dud Souper (me)

03:38:46 Rook

Kitty
That all sounds like a lot to deal with :( I'm sorry you're having to deal with that alone. Dogs are hard work, even more so when they're puppies.

03:25:37 Kneecap stealer

So I'm stressed

03:25:14 Kneecap stealer

And this is while I'm taking care of myself, the cat, our other dog, bella, the house, and trying to make sure my husband comes home on the 20th

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04:06:12 Exist / Kuskyn

Ghoulish, It's best buying or using wolf party till you get a boost/defect, as a wolf has to have one/or both before being customized ^^;

04:06:11 Rook

paws? :3
-WP Click-

04:05:18 Altar 🦌

dont worry Pink, i take any chance to advertise my works. now give me paws.

04:05:08

Existence
……. Bro I’m blind I’m just gonna go crash out now

04:00:20 Rook

the bonfire decor is so fucking big omg LMAO

04:00:13 Kneecap stealer

And the cheapest infa is 2k mush

03:59:54 Exist / Kuskyn

It states at the bottom of the custom pack "Defects and Boosts cannot be applied."

03:58:57 Exist / Kuskyn

Ghoulish, you can't customise a boost or defect onto a wolf, you can only View them to see how they look.

03:57:37

Brooo I’m so annoyed I made and PAID for a custom wolf with infatuation and I went to my den it’s basic no boost ZERO I made sure to double check before I bought it to I know it had the boost

03:57:35 Kneecap stealer

Is that existence :0

03:56:00 Exist / Kuskyn

Collar man, tasty noodles thank you xD

03:49:10 Kneecap stealer

I appreciate the thought and love I can clearly see you put into this art <3 but I'm not too much of an artsy fan

03:48:16 Kneecap stealer

Sabbath

I'll take them all, one by one >:) make them into soup, plus it distracts me from the pain

03:42:55 Altar 🦌

-Click-

😔 offering you some art in these trying times, Pink Kitty. Hope you feel better soon :(

03:41:32 Rook

Not until the morning/afternoon

03:41:12 Kneecap stealer

-WP Click-

Go into labor so I can pop you and sleep already

03:40:52 Kneecap stealer

Oh by the way you got any duds for the dud Souper (me)

03:38:46 Rook

Kitty
That all sounds like a lot to deal with :( I'm sorry you're having to deal with that alone. Dogs are hard work, even more so when they're puppies.

03:25:37 Kneecap stealer

So I'm stressed

03:25:14 Kneecap stealer

And this is while I'm taking care of myself, the cat, our other dog, bella, the house, and trying to make sure my husband comes home on the 20th

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January 9, 2022 09:40 PM

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I just need to know of anything I can improve on!
Older, non fixed, version.

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Improved version.

Edited at January 10, 2022 11:15 PM by SUCCUBUS

January 9, 2022 10:14 PM

los campesinos!

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i think the hair lacks form. it does just look like squiggles rather than actual curled hair

i think the calf is too small considering the size of their thighs

and the nose is a lil eh

January 10, 2022 09:41 AM

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los campesinos! said:

i think the hair lacks form. it does just look like squiggles rather than actual curled hair

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i think the calf is too small considering the size of their thighs

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and the nose is a lil eh

I was saying the same for the calves and the hair 🥲

What's wrong with the nose? I NEEDA KNOW NOW- 🥺

January 10, 2022 11:43 AM

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I think the nose just blend's in too much.

January 10, 2022 11:44 AM

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Revenge Full Of Lust said:

I think the nose just blend's in too much.

Thank you! I'll add more dark lines by it, it is harder with her dark skin tone.

January 10, 2022 11:48 AM

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I'd recommend adding more highlights if you want something to stand out with darker tones! :0
It's so easy to highlight darker tones so I'd focus more on the highlighting over the shading!

The colour choice and the glow effects are great, but I think Campe is right about the hair. I'd look up some tutorials on how to draw coily/kinky hair as there's a whole load out there which are super helpful when it comes to drawing and defining different hair types.

Personally I think if you just add a couple of highlights it'll really pop!

January 10, 2022 12:27 PM

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Eternity said:

I'd recommend adding more highlights if you want something to stand out with darker tones! :0
It's so easy to highlight darker tones so I'd focus more on the highlighting over the shading!

The colour choice and the glow effects are great, but I think Campe is right about the hair. I'd look up some tutorials on how to draw coily/kinky hair as there's a whole load out there which are super helpful when it comes to drawing and defining different hair types.

Personally I think if you just add a couple of highlights it'll really pop!

Thank you!

I mainly draw humanoids on paper, its so much easier to draw kinky hair on paper-

January 10, 2022 11:09 PM