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What?? XD
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I have a 10 stashed in my inventory heheh
 the sunset pack
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anyone want to date
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and chest pain
 love story
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im having a panic attack
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I'm hoping for (if not an apple) than a toucan feather. I need em bad haha
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55 tickets..
I might go insane
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can you help me with me panic attacs
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My raffles nearly done if any of you entered in it good luck <3
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Not necessarily. I don't have a license. I don't have to be a therapist to work there XD
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so you are a theripest
 Black Dawn Den
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Love
I work at an equine therapy place. I'm pretty much their barn manager so I keep up with lessons, horses, bills, and maintenance.
 love story
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Dawn
what do you mean by run
 Black Dawn Den
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Bye Moon
 Black Dawn Den
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Moon and Love
I run an equine therapy barn and the amount of people who get helped just by being around gentle Giants is amazing. Even if you aren't riding them, just petting them and being around them helps people calm down.
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she in hospital
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Ok, gotta poof, and byeeeeee
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my sis cant go on today

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 Black Dawn Den
11:55:03 Dawn (She/her)
Sunset
What?? XD
 Winterfell
11:55:02 Winter
Dawn
I have a 10 stashed in my inventory heheh
 the sunset pack
11:54:34 
anyone want to date
 Black Dawn Den
11:52:45 Dawn (She/her)
Love
moves to PMs
 love story
11:50:56 
Dawn
and chest pain
 love story
11:50:45 
Dawn
im having a panic attack
 Black Dawn Den
11:50:11 Dawn (She/her)
Love
What do you mean?
 Black Dawn Den
11:49:52 Dawn (She/her)
Winter
I'm hoping for (if not an apple) than a toucan feather. I need em bad haha
 Wild Runners
11:49:52 Stalking chat
55 tickets..
I might go insane
 love story
11:49:07 
Dawn
can you help me with me panic attacs
 Winterfell
11:48:35 Winter
My raffles nearly done if any of you entered in it good luck <3
 Black Dawn Den
11:48:34 Dawn (She/her)
Love
Not necessarily. I don't have a license. I don't have to be a therapist to work there XD
 love story
11:47:18 
Dawn
so you are a theripest
 Black Dawn Den
11:46:39 Dawn (She/her)
Love
I work at an equine therapy place. I'm pretty much their barn manager so I keep up with lessons, horses, bills, and maintenance.
 love story
11:45:16 
Dawn
what do you mean by run
 Black Dawn Den
11:44:25 Dawn (She/her)
Bye Moon
 Black Dawn Den
11:44:12 Dawn (She/her)
Moon and Love
I run an equine therapy barn and the amount of people who get helped just by being around gentle Giants is amazing. Even if you aren't riding them, just petting them and being around them helps people calm down.
 love story
11:43:33 
Moonfall
she in hospital
 Moonfall
11:43:11 Many moons, one me
Ok, gotta poof, and byeeeeee
 love story
11:43:08 
Moonfall
my sis cant go on today




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Criticism?January 3, 2018 11:40 PM


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http://preview.ibb.co/gavXBb/image.jpg

I need a little help editing this guy. This is my first hyena drawing~

I'm decent with anatomy, and I've studied up on most things about hyenas, but I haven't got my hands on anything about their faces at the moment. So I'm looking for criticism on the facial structure, how it looks, etc. since I'm not sure on it yet, especially the mouth, jawline, and ears. The flower crown could be commented on as well, although I like it the way it is. It's probably sucky as well >>

So comment any judging below. Keep in mind that there's a border between constructive criticism and being rude, but don't worry, I don't often take offense personally~

Edited at January 3, 2018 11:41 PM by Taboo
Criticism?January 4, 2018 12:21 AM


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I personally think it could use a bit more shading on the sides of the nose.
Criticism?January 29, 2018 07:06 PM


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I'm not sure about the jawline, ears, and fur texture... all seem slightly abnormal. But overall, it's nice. :3
Criticism?January 29, 2018 10:16 PM


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https://s14.postimg.org/8po2knqfz/6_EC7223_B-3695-479_C-9903-764_DCDCBF117.jpg?dl=1

I think the only thing throwing me off is the nose. It could use more shading, and be more 3-dimensional. I sketched a little example on my iPad for you.

I agree with Seaward about the mouth/jaw being a bit weird, but not overly.

I think it looks awesome.

Edited at January 29, 2018 10:18 PM by Deer
Criticism?January 29, 2018 10:41 PM


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https://s14.postimg.org/58m0hfjld/AF6002_C1-6436-43_C1-_AF8_D-99_E26_C324792.jpg
Here I was just scrolling through google images of hyenas and jotting down/sketching my observations. Hope this helps. :)

I know nothing about hyenas, this is simply what I noticed while scrolling through images.

Edited at January 29, 2018 10:44 PM by Deer

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