Wolf Play : Criticism Needed

Song
Not sure about other regional pronunciations or influences but I have German native relatives and when they speak English they pronounce 'wolf' as 'woof'

Serpents

12:06:07 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

i need to sleep.... insted of doing relaxing stuff im making a list of names to use for lore for my newer ocs XD

Snow Song

11:59:36 Song

A guy said Woof instead of wolf
I would have laughed but unfortunately it was not a joke it was a pronunciation thing
Is this a regional thing somewhere or something or...?
I know I'm affected by vowel shift a bit & I say wolf like ol' like in ol' hound dog keeping it short

Serpents

11:14:58 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

anyone up for a ninjago rp pm me Please I know its a long shot but Im dying to rp it and need more to rp with

ZefhyrMaracaibo

11:12:10

if so, please re-send?!

ZefhyrMaracaibo

11:11:56

oops did someone just send me a message?!

Serpents

11:11:45 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

can someone pm me some animals and hair styles please

Serpents

11:11:23 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

dose dune sound cool for my sand elementals subject name
project) or should I do desert's cry
Roaring Sands
(tiger+egale )
or soaring dunes
.....my brain did not forgot how to spell soar... no I can English
Slashing desert as Dune sounds odd next to the others
Searing ion(Viper)
the others( Wishful Gaze
Waking Ghost

TeaBear

10:54:38 Doc/Lucky/Bear/13

Goodnight Pink :)

TeaBear

10:54:25 Doc/Lucky/Bear/13

Pink
11 :)

Pink kitty🐈

10:54:14 Kneecap stealer

Anyway, night peeps and pups! (Not saying it in a weird way)

ZefhyrMaracaibo

10:54:07

harharhar guffaw!

Pink kitty🐈

10:51:34 Kneecap stealer

So if a raffle is 2 mush to enter and I have 22 mush, how many tickets can I buy

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02:16:07 Kneecap stealer

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Dawn

01:05:36

-WP Click- Raffle :)

Wildhowler04

12:48:00

Ok I just wanted to know it was possible

Pink kitty🐈

12:46:58 Kneecap stealer

Siku

I know it's still less likely but don't forget the chance of pups inheritance of the crystal pelt

Pink kitty🐈

12:45:50 Kneecap stealer

Midnight donuts taste so much better and more powder

Siku of Kinapak

12:40:25 Siku

@wild, they can but it's less likely than common pelts are to inherit.

Wildhowler04

12:34:08

Can pups inherit the firefly coat or not? Since it's exclusive

Regal

12:20:17

Song
Not sure about other regional pronunciations or influences but I have German native relatives and when they speak English they pronounce 'wolf' as 'woof'

Serpents

12:06:07 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

i need to sleep.... insted of doing relaxing stuff im making a list of names to use for lore for my newer ocs XD

Snow Song

11:59:36 Song

Serpents

11:14:58 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

anyone up for a ninjago rp pm me Please I know its a long shot but Im dying to rp it and need more to rp with

ZefhyrMaracaibo

11:12:10

if so, please re-send?!

ZefhyrMaracaibo

11:11:56

oops did someone just send me a message?!

Serpents

11:11:45 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

can someone pm me some animals and hair styles please

Serpents

11:11:23 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

TeaBear

10:54:38 Doc/Lucky/Bear/13

Goodnight Pink :)

TeaBear

10:54:25 Doc/Lucky/Bear/13

Pink
11 :)

Pink kitty🐈

10:54:14 Kneecap stealer

Anyway, night peeps and pups! (Not saying it in a weird way)

ZefhyrMaracaibo

10:54:07

harharhar guffaw!

Pink kitty🐈

10:51:34 Kneecap stealer

So if a raffle is 2 mush to enter and I have 22 mush, how many tickets can I buy

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November 9, 2017 10:25 PM

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https://s2.postimg.org/cm6tysat5/Screen_Shot_2017-11-09_at_11.21.15_PM.png

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Edited at November 9, 2017 10:28 PM by Aphmau clan

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November 9, 2017 10:28 PM

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Not bad (\^-^/)

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November 9, 2017 10:29 PM

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It's not really that bad in all honesty.

The tail and maybe the front leg on the side we're viewing could use a little work maybe, though the tail could actually depend on the breed of cat the drawing is of.

But overall it's pretty good

Edited at November 9, 2017 10:30 PM by Destinations End

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November 10, 2017 01:28 AM

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The drawing style is cute! I love the anime-style eyes!

I do feel the anatomy could use a bit work. The hocks are too high, and the chest shouldn't be sticking out. Also, given the position of the cat's head, both ears should be facing forwards.

Here's a simple redline:

https://orig00.deviantart.net/8103/f/2017/313/d/4/cat_by_siarczek-dbtagw6.png

I suggest practicing to draw cats by using photos for references- it helps a ton, and over time you'll begin to see improvement in your work through lots of practice.

Keep it up! c:

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January 1, 2018 09:11 PM

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Siarczek said:
The drawing style is cute! I love the anime-style eyes!

I do feel the anatomy could use a bit work. The hocks are too high, and the chest shouldn't be sticking out. Also, given the position of the cat's head, both ears should be facing forwards.

Here's a simple redline:
https://orig00.deviantart.net/8103/f/2017/313/d/4/cat_by_siarczek-dbtagw6.png

I suggest practicing to draw cats by using photos for references- it helps a ton, and over time you'll begin to see improvement in your work through lots of practice.

Keep it up! c:

This helps me out! Thank you

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January 3, 2018 03:49 AM

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Aww so cool!

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