Wolf Play : Constructive Criticism

Song
Not sure about other regional pronunciations or influences but I have German native relatives and when they speak English they pronounce 'wolf' as 'woof'

Serpents

12:06:07 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

i need to sleep.... insted of doing relaxing stuff im making a list of names to use for lore for my newer ocs XD

Snow Song

11:59:36 Song

A guy said Woof instead of wolf
I would have laughed but unfortunately it was not a joke it was a pronunciation thing
Is this a regional thing somewhere or something or...?
I know I'm affected by vowel shift a bit & I say wolf like ol' like in ol' hound dog keeping it short

Serpents

11:14:58 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

anyone up for a ninjago rp pm me Please I know its a long shot but Im dying to rp it and need more to rp with

ZefhyrMaracaibo

11:12:10

if so, please re-send?!

ZefhyrMaracaibo

11:11:56

oops did someone just send me a message?!

Serpents

11:11:45 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

can someone pm me some animals and hair styles please

Serpents

11:11:23 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

dose dune sound cool for my sand elementals subject name
project) or should I do desert's cry
Roaring Sands
(tiger+egale )
or soaring dunes
.....my brain did not forgot how to spell soar... no I can English
Slashing desert as Dune sounds odd next to the others
Searing ion(Viper)
the others( Wishful Gaze
Waking Ghost

TeaBear

10:54:38 Doc/Lucky/Bear/13

Goodnight Pink :)

TeaBear

10:54:25 Doc/Lucky/Bear/13

Pink
11 :)

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So it was the site then. I wonder what happened :o

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Ok I just wanted to know it was possible

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Siku

I know it's still less likely but don't forget the chance of pups inheritance of the crystal pelt

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@wild, they can but it's less likely than common pelts are to inherit.

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12:20:17

Song
Not sure about other regional pronunciations or influences but I have German native relatives and when they speak English they pronounce 'wolf' as 'woof'

Serpents

12:06:07 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

i need to sleep.... insted of doing relaxing stuff im making a list of names to use for lore for my newer ocs XD

Snow Song

11:59:36 Song

Serpents

11:14:58 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

anyone up for a ninjago rp pm me Please I know its a long shot but Im dying to rp it and need more to rp with

ZefhyrMaracaibo

11:12:10

if so, please re-send?!

ZefhyrMaracaibo

11:11:56

oops did someone just send me a message?!

Serpents

11:11:45 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

can someone pm me some animals and hair styles please

Serpents

11:11:23 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

TeaBear

10:54:38 Doc/Lucky/Bear/13

Goodnight Pink :)

TeaBear

10:54:25 Doc/Lucky/Bear/13

Pink
11 :)

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February 24, 2022 12:41 PM

Kortez

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My art has been looking awful lately. I have drawn this character 3 times now, and each attempt looks worse than the last. I need constructive crit, I don't care how brutal you are about it, I won't be hurt.

Feel free to redline!

Attempt 1

Attempt 2

Attempt 3

All (c) 243831/ Me

I have figured it out uwuwu thank you

Edited at March 18, 2022 05:32 PM by Excisus

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February 24, 2022 02:48 PM

Former Pack

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ok so the last attempt looks great!

the head on this first one is good, but what are you trying to do on the body?

the second one looks good but the head is a bit big if its what you want then it looks good also

Edited at February 24, 2022 02:49 PM by LucifersWolves

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February 24, 2022 02:51 PM

Nezachii

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If you are alright with redlining and some tips (With the redline) I'll be up to help you? If not, that's fine. It's your artwork.

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February 24, 2022 02:52 PM

Kortez

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Please do

Nez.ity said:

If you are alright with redlining and some tips (With the redline) I'll be up to help you? If not, that's fine. It's your artwork.

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February 24, 2022 04:53 PM

Nezachii

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Doing attempt one because everything else looks lovely *^*. I do not draw canine, anymore--yes I used to dabble back in the //first joined// ages but hopefully, you can just y'know understand that ;). While I love how you decided to do three different ones, I feel like attempt one could have some touch to it-- in case you're feeling nice and give the commissioner something to stare at; not that you know have to. ANYWAYS!

You have that edgy style, where the fur sticks out the most- as I always say go big or go home-- your attempt one could be the " GO BIG" style;o. I love the side tongue and tight collar idea, so I decided to mimic( With your permission) the style and just went crazy with the fur( Pencil work can be MUCH easier when drawing fur, you should take advantage of this punk style because it's there for YOU to improve and grow, even if you are a chibi artist( Only seen your cheebs art).

In short terms, the eye details are the show and tell, usually, when I look at canine art my eyes land on the eyes, it's the first thing I want to see- the expression, the glare, the look. I know your look is more cartoonish which I can't do but hopefully, it's still helpful.

You can do whatever with this, I only did half the job because I got uncomfortable lol.

I'll slowly add more to this so I don't spam you because again, I'm no canine artist.

Redline: (c)Nezitystudio

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February 24, 2022 04:57 PM

Kortez

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I heavily appreciate your words and your redline! Thank you very much!

That's the thing..i don't want my art to be cartoony.. I'm aiming for a semi realistic style, but I'm clearly far from that

Edited at February 24, 2022 10:53 PM by Excisus

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