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Winter,
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 Feiella
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Winter
I love the hat XD
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Ok I like how he turned out >.> -WP Click-
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Saint
Turn off your phone for a bit?
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Ugh, River's teachers are stressing River out T^T
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 Saint
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It also just uh gave my phone a virus and gave it my location without my permission. I was looking at a palette shop and saw examples there and then like 5 pop ups redirected me and my phone tried to do the protection close thing but it opened a ton of malicious files. So uh... help?
 Sabbath
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I swear sometimes the 400 tiles of an explore level feels like 20 and sometimes it feels like 1000 Dx
Glad to see you back though c:
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Pretty much
 Acornclan
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Not pg 13 ads
 Saint
01:45:56 Is a bee
What was the reason postimg isn't allowed again?
 Saint
01:40:31 Is a bee
Sabbath, I literally thought that when I saw you lol. I'm good, exploring a lot now that I'm back from my break and questioning how I have almost 400 territory level and can't even complete a level in several days
 Sabbath
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Hi Saint. Almost thought I had posted in chat again xD How are you?
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Wild runners #2
 Seiwoo Kivichi
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@[love story] computer glitched on me and also strict teacher/
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Bye Dark
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 Doodle Dragon
01:57:03 He/They pronouns
Winter,
Oo :o
 Feiella
01:56:05 Pack of Sharp Snap
I've become a bed. My cat is laying on my legs
 Black Dawn Den
01:55:59 Dawn (She/her)
Winter
I love the hat XD
 Vax
01:55:53 a rock in your shoe
ashfur
not much
 Ashfur
01:55:44 
hey hey hey chat, whats goin on?
 Winterfell
01:55:29 Winter
Ok I like how he turned out >.> -WP Click-
 Feiella
01:53:32 Pack of Sharp Snap
Saint
Turn off your phone for a bit?
 Doodle Dragon
01:52:24 He/They pronouns
Ugh, River's teachers are stressing River out T^T
 The East Wind
01:52:13 East
Hi
 Saint
01:49:45 Is a bee
It also just uh gave my phone a virus and gave it my location without my permission. I was looking at a palette shop and saw examples there and then like 5 pop ups redirected me and my phone tried to do the protection close thing but it opened a ton of malicious files. So uh... help?
 Sabbath
01:47:19 Rook
Saint
I swear sometimes the 400 tiles of an explore level feels like 20 and sometimes it feels like 1000 Dx
Glad to see you back though c:
 Feiella
01:47:03 Pack of Sharp Snap
Pretty much
 Acornclan
01:46:43 Acorn (She/Her)
Not pg 13 ads
 Saint
01:45:56 Is a bee
What was the reason postimg isn't allowed again?
 Saint
01:40:31 Is a bee
Sabbath, I literally thought that when I saw you lol. I'm good, exploring a lot now that I'm back from my break and questioning how I have almost 400 territory level and can't even complete a level in several days
 Sabbath
01:38:17 Rook
Hi Saint. Almost thought I had posted in chat again xD How are you?
 Seiwoo Kivichi
01:38:04 Starlight
Wild runners #2
 Seiwoo Kivichi
01:37:16 Starlight
@[love story] computer glitched on me and also strict teacher/
 Jester
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Bye Dark
 Master Darkfire
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by chat ima go for a bit




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Thoughts/light criticism ?January 7, 2021 05:54 AM


starwolfs

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Could I get some thoughts on this, first thing though I know the one wing is horrible xD so please look over the detail as best as you can since I know that's wrong and didn't realize that until I was done lol. I was trying to figure out how to use drawing app and this what came out of it , also I've added 2 others that could use some light criticism as well
done on January 7
done on January 26


done on January 25

^ this one I actually really like the concept of and will probably do redraws of to see if I've in proved on my skills ^
( credits belong to me )

Edited at January 28, 2021 07:50 PM by starwolfs
Thoughts/light criticism ?January 13, 2021 12:48 AM


Wisp

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It looks like for the shading you did smudge, but I would recommend using a blending tool. Also, try to have the light coming from the same direction (the horns have shadows going to the left, but the wings have shadows going to the right, and the spikes have the shadows going up).
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I would recommend a deep blue for shading, and a very light yellow for lighting (that's what personally use).
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Since you included lighting in the eyes I'd recommend lighting the rest of the piece
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If the dragon has arms then I would attach the wings to the arms
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I would make the nostrils a little smaller.
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I hope nothing came across as mean, I always feel like I'm being bad when giving constructive criticism.
Thoughts/light criticism ?January 13, 2021 05:47 AM


starwolfs

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Thanks for the constructive criticism all the stuff that you mentioned I didn't realize until you said it, I just knew something didn't look right about it .
Thanks also for the tips on the shading and lighting those are very helpful , first time actually doing digital and I really didn't have a clue how to use anything
don't worry you don't sound mean at all :)
Thoughts/light criticism ?January 28, 2021 07:29 PM


Former Pack

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sorry if any of this seems rude at all XD
I would personally recommend something showing some part of the mouth, because in the current picture, you can't see any of it, and it looks a bit odd.
that is actually my only suggestion, you did an amazing job, all in all!
Thoughts/light criticism ?January 28, 2021 07:42 PM


starwolfs

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Yeah I seam to be struggling with mouths on everything and this was early on ( I think the first thing I actually did was this piece ) so I wasn't even going to try a mouth at the time. I am working on them now but they still need work for me to be comfortable with them
thanks for your input ^^

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