Need some criticism
https://xxwolfdawgxx.deviantart.com/art/A-commission-720774114
I used sketch.io and DA.Muro (blending)
Spring Month: 3 
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Flood | Chatbox |
| Feiella |
| I placed bags to block the hallway entry so my cat jumps over them. Her reactions to first seeing the bags blocking the hallway to now is interesting. |
| Serpents |
| as I dont have a tiger oc yet got a part lion one(was going to be Just lion+dragon then I added fox to them as well, (as the crystal element made me think of the vulptex from starwars... so um yah XD |
| Doodle Dragon |
| Fei, Aw, that's alright, everyone runs out of inspiration at some point, you'll find some soon ^^ Cinn, two of them, Shadow and Moth, and I think Nightpelt is a little chunky too |
| Feiella |
| Dragon I'm out of inspiration to write poems. Haven't written any for a while. |
| Cinnamon Bloom |
| one of my cats is also fat DD's used to be, so i still call him fat because it's funny he's so lazy and such a bigback i don't know how he isnt fat anymore |
| Serpents |
| @Cinn thanks XD now I can make more as I need to make ash, glass and and magma as well, |
| Cinnamon Bloom |
| I had to force DD to get their fat cat off of me so i could do my chore earlier |
| Serpents |
| dose a tiger egale sound cool for a elemental master of sand? as Im thinking ill either make one of mine be unpowered or ash( unsure, will exlapin morw if anyone cares... ) |
| Master Darkfire |
| Fei my cat did that once. I wanted to put my stuff away but he was just so cute and snuggley and he kinda stole the cord to my earbuds so I couldn’t exactly get up. |
| Doodle Dragon |
| Fei, Aw, silly kitty :3 also I suggest getting rest before writing the poems that way you don't fall asleep while writing ^^ |
| Quests |
| Alliance Battles |
| Challenges |
 | Bobcat : -5 |
| Copperhead : 0 |
| Black Bear : +2 |
| Chatbox |
| Feiella |
| I placed bags to block the hallway entry so my cat jumps over them. Her reactions to first seeing the bags blocking the hallway to now is interesting. |
| Serpents |
| as I dont have a tiger oc yet got a part lion one(was going to be Just lion+dragon then I added fox to them as well, (as the crystal element made me think of the vulptex from starwars... so um yah XD |
| Doodle Dragon |
| Fei, Aw, that's alright, everyone runs out of inspiration at some point, you'll find some soon ^^ Cinn, two of them, Shadow and Moth, and I think Nightpelt is a little chunky too |
| Feiella |
| Dragon I'm out of inspiration to write poems. Haven't written any for a while. |
| Cinnamon Bloom |
| one of my cats is also fat DD's used to be, so i still call him fat because it's funny he's so lazy and such a bigback i don't know how he isnt fat anymore |
| Serpents |
| @Cinn thanks XD now I can make more as I need to make ash, glass and and magma as well, |
| Cinnamon Bloom |
| I had to force DD to get their fat cat off of me so i could do my chore earlier |
| Serpents |
| dose a tiger egale sound cool for a elemental master of sand? as Im thinking ill either make one of mine be unpowered or ash( unsure, will exlapin morw if anyone cares... ) |
| Master Darkfire |
| Fei my cat did that once. I wanted to put my stuff away but he was just so cute and snuggley and he kinda stole the cord to my earbuds so I couldn’t exactly get up. |
| Doodle Dragon |
| Fei, Aw, silly kitty :3 also I suggest getting rest before writing the poems that way you don't fall asleep while writing ^^ |
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