Wolf Play : Galaxy Help

04:24:07 The Howling Shrek

what was Eves this year april fools day like?

04:23:42 The Howling Shrek

boop a very random and quick hello, to anyone who remembers me. im still MIA but hello

starrii-featherz

04:19:17 starrii, Lucida, Hex

Waiting for Margo to go into labor so I can see if there's any decent pups to keep or not, I need to know since I'm drawing her and Lune together right now

-WP Click-

Winterfell

03:34:29 Winter

My raffle isn't doing well this time round and I wonder why I added better stuff >.>

Smilecat

03:24:52 Anthony // He/they

just finished reading a piece of fiction so good it made me cry and i cant talk about it irl because it was fanfic
anyway, good night chatters

02:40:04 Axan hoarder

Also thank you. She loved them too.

02:39:36 Axan hoarder

Oh. Have fun at church

02:38:33 Vash | Xy

Cy
Church
And I absolutely love those :00 they're so cute I love em
I'll definitely dm you about art sometime<33

02:35:04 Axan hoarder

Xyxy
Whats starting?

02:34:40 Axan hoarder

Xyxy
I dont remember if I showed you or not but these are 2 tattoo designs I made for one of my coworkers cause she asked me to design her a tattoo. She said she is gonna get both
-Click-
-Click-

02:34:29 Vash | Xy

I gotta go it's starting hope to catch you sometime again xx

02:34:14 Vash | Xy

Hey
Cycy<33 yes I do🤭

02:32:23 Axan hoarder

Xyxy
Hey. You know i love doing art.

02:25:41 Vash | Xy

I should get more art >:)

02:20:01 Vash | Xy

Heyy

02:05:17 Axan hoarder

Omgim so happy. They were super nice and understanding. I got my axanthic back. Im so happy 😊

Collar

02:02:35 Altar 🦌

I see my partner in 48 minutes. So freaking hyped ohh my god

The Rat Lord

01:58:38 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

I’m back (sorry I kinda sidetracked lol that what you get with an ADHD brain)

01:53:36 Axan hoarder

Yall im praying this pack will be nice and let me have my axanthic back. I boarded with another pack for a couple days and they put him up for 5 mush for me to pick up and did it when I was offline. Im o sad. 😭

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04:30:00 Carpal Tunnel

It was squirrels this year.

04:24:07 The Howling Shrek

what was Eves this year april fools day like?

04:23:42 The Howling Shrek

boop a very random and quick hello, to anyone who remembers me. im still MIA but hello

starrii-featherz

04:19:17 starrii, Lucida, Hex

Waiting for Margo to go into labor so I can see if there's any decent pups to keep or not, I need to know since I'm drawing her and Lune together right now

-WP Click-

Winterfell

03:34:29 Winter

My raffle isn't doing well this time round and I wonder why I added better stuff >.>

Smilecat

03:24:52 Anthony // He/they

just finished reading a piece of fiction so good it made me cry and i cant talk about it irl because it was fanfic
anyway, good night chatters

02:40:04 Axan hoarder

Also thank you. She loved them too.

02:39:36 Axan hoarder

Oh. Have fun at church

02:38:33 Vash | Xy

Cy
Church
And I absolutely love those :00 they're so cute I love em
I'll definitely dm you about art sometime<33

02:35:04 Axan hoarder

Xyxy
Whats starting?

02:34:40 Axan hoarder

Xyxy
I dont remember if I showed you or not but these are 2 tattoo designs I made for one of my coworkers cause she asked me to design her a tattoo. She said she is gonna get both
-Click-
-Click-

02:34:29 Vash | Xy

I gotta go it's starting hope to catch you sometime again xx

02:34:14 Vash | Xy

Hey
Cycy<33 yes I do🤭

02:32:23 Axan hoarder

Xyxy
Hey. You know i love doing art.

02:25:41 Vash | Xy

I should get more art >:)

02:20:01 Vash | Xy

Heyy

02:05:17 Axan hoarder

Omgim so happy. They were super nice and understanding. I got my axanthic back. Im so happy 😊

Collar

02:02:35 Altar 🦌

I see my partner in 48 minutes. So freaking hyped ohh my god

The Rat Lord

01:58:38 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

I’m back (sorry I kinda sidetracked lol that what you get with an ADHD brain)

01:53:36 Axan hoarder

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April 16, 2018 09:07 PM

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Here's the image

https://s14.postimg.cc/4h7dmgk29/Random_Galaxy.png

For some reason, something's been really bothering me about this picture and I can't seem to figure out what.

All critiques are appreciated, or just tell me what you wish was changed

Edited at April 16, 2018 09:43 PM by Embers.

April 16, 2018 09:12 PM

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Maybe more stars? We don't really see them

Except for that, I don't see what could be wrong ^^

April 16, 2018 09:37 PM

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DarkCloudClan said:
Maybe more stars? We don't really see them
Except for that, I don't see what could be wrong ^^

Alright, lemme spam the stars and update the picture XD

Edit: UPDATED

Edited at April 16, 2018 09:43 PM by Embers.

April 16, 2018 11:31 PM

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Honestly, I really like it XD Maybe you need some subtle hue shifts in there? For example, since this art seems to be getting warmer the lighter it is, you should make the highlights a bit more red where the purple is brightest, if that makes any sense?

Or maybe it's because of the front? If you look at it some more, it seems to be more like a cloud in front than part of the galaxy because the stars are brighter around the purple. So maybe you can try to make the stars brighter there? I like it a lot (:

April 16, 2018 11:53 PM

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a m b e r said:
Honestly, I really like it XD Maybe you need some subtle hue shifts in there? For example, since this art seems to be getting warmer the lighter it is, you should make the highlights a bit more red where the purple is brightest, if that makes any sense?

Or maybe it's because of the front? If you look at it some more, it seems to be more like a cloud in front than part of the galaxy because the stars are brighter around the purple. So maybe you can try to make the stars brighter there? I like it a lot (:

XD Thanks, let me update it again