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05:29:39 Winter

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I think that's the ancestral one

05:29:28 Kneecap stealer

Along with the few other FMC boosts we have no one wants unless it's time for FMC

05:29:21 Red

otherwise pretty good wolf

05:29:17 Winter

Pink
I haven't a scooby lol think it helps with pups

05:29:01 Red

yea it is

05:28:50 Winter

Red
Yes crap boost

05:28:44 Kneecap stealer

Isn't that boost only good for like FMC

05:28:15 Red

oof, matron's blessings?

05:27:50 Winter

Hmm hw hero boost -WP Click- crap boost though

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05:27:20 NRC/Night/Raven

Hello

Master Darkfire

05:27:05 Dark/fire/ice

No thanks I got 2 reverse bonfires now ^^

05:27:02 Kneecap stealer

He's... interesting

05:26:31 Kneecap stealer

I swear to God if I wake up and I have like a million messages from people about this new song-

05:25:58 Winter

Master
Do you want this thing ? 59r hero hw -WP Click-

Master Darkfire

05:25:31 Dark/fire/ice

All got a lil bit o something ^^

Master Darkfire

05:25:05 Dark/fire/ice

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Crooked tail

-WP Click- Celestial prosperity

05:24:51 Red

pretty good stats too!

05:24:33 Red

awww he's cute!!!

Master Darkfire

05:23:55 Dark/fire/ice

-WP Click- This is what my HH and reverse bonfire gave me!!

05:22:59 Winter

Ew yuck I got a wolverine wolf from WP ;-;

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05:29:39 Winter

Pink
I think that's the ancestral one

05:29:28 Kneecap stealer

Along with the few other FMC boosts we have no one wants unless it's time for FMC

05:29:21 Red

otherwise pretty good wolf

05:29:17 Winter

Pink
I haven't a scooby lol think it helps with pups

05:29:01 Red

yea it is

05:28:50 Winter

Red
Yes crap boost

05:28:44 Kneecap stealer

Isn't that boost only good for like FMC

05:28:15 Red

oof, matron's blessings?

05:27:50 Winter

Hmm hw hero boost -WP Click- crap boost though

Night Raven College

05:27:20 NRC/Night/Raven

Hello

Master Darkfire

05:27:05 Dark/fire/ice

No thanks I got 2 reverse bonfires now ^^

05:27:02 Kneecap stealer

He's... interesting

05:26:31 Kneecap stealer

I swear to God if I wake up and I have like a million messages from people about this new song-

05:25:58 Winter

Master
Do you want this thing ? 59r hero hw -WP Click-

Master Darkfire

05:25:31 Dark/fire/ice

All got a lil bit o something ^^

Master Darkfire

05:25:05 Dark/fire/ice

-WP Click-
Crooked tail

-WP Click- Celestial prosperity

05:24:51 Red

pretty good stats too!

05:24:33 Red

awww he's cute!!!

Master Darkfire

05:23:55 Dark/fire/ice

-WP Click- This is what my HH and reverse bonfire gave me!!

05:22:59 Winter

Ew yuck I got a wolverine wolf from WP ;-;

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May 15, 2018 02:12 PM

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https://s9.postimg.cc/u0o0j78j3/Untitled412.png

Any improvements I can make? :/

Edited at May 15, 2018 02:13 PM by Cún.

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May 16, 2018 12:44 AM

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The tail and back leg are extremely strange and I can't quite figure out what's going on there. XD

Also, instead of two sitting poses, I'd add one that clearly shows a side view.

Edited at May 16, 2018 12:45 AM by Lykotia

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May 16, 2018 01:57 AM

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Lykotia said:
The tail and back leg are extremely strange and I can't quite figure out what's going on there. XD

Also, instead of two sitting poses, I'd add one that clearly shows a side view.

I haven't a clue what I did either. It's so cringy for other players to notice :')

Thanks for the help. :D

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May 20, 2018 12:26 PM

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Um... maybe make the lower jaw line up a bit more with the upper jaw. Otherwise it kinda looks like an overbite. Hope that helps a bit.

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May 20, 2018 12:27 PM

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Hunters said:
Um... maybe make the lower jaw line up a bit more with the upper jaw. Otherwise it kinda looks like an overbite. Hope that helps a bit.

Thanks, anything is helpful x'D

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May 20, 2018 08:40 PM

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I think it looks really good, but the head looks a tad big for the body, and didnt quite flow well into it. Other than that, awesome job!

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May 21, 2018 01:52 AM

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Cutting Edge said:
I think it looks really good, but the head looks a tad big for the body, and didn't quite flow well into it. Other than that, awesome job!

>.< Thanks!

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May 21, 2018 02:28 AM

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The back legs are a bit too stretched out to be a natural position, and it looks like the tail is coming off of the back leg. A line there to separate the tail from the leg would help it look less off. ^^

Edited at May 21, 2018 02:29 AM by Evee4ever228

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May 21, 2018 09:53 AM

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Evee4ever228 said:
The back legs are a bit too stretched out to be a natural position, and it looks like the tail is coming off of the back leg. A line there to separate the tail from the leg would help it look less off. ^^

Thanks a lot ^-^

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