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01:10:17 Pack of Sharp Snap

Do not discuss it in PMs please as talking about others is not allowed.

01:10:12 Winter

Doodle
May I ask are you river xD

01:09:29 He/They pronouns

Cinn,
River can explain in dm

01:08:52 Cinn / Ace

^
Was not here during the Love Story thing
Would like DD to explain perhaps
Or anyone
But one person

01:08:28 He/They pronouns

Winter,
River can probably :3

01:07:40 Winter

Does anyone want to do me a massive favour and make me a 59r ac custom coat :D

01:07:21 Pack of Sharp Snap

don't worry Darkfire

01:06:46 a rock in your shoe

dark
i see
i swear on the soul of my father, domingo montoya/ref

01:06:24 He/They pronouns

Darkfire,
River suggests blocking love story :p

Master Darkfire

01:06:03 Dark/fire/ice

vax the thing love story was talking about...it is my less that prefered topic that makes me uncomfterble

01:05:40 The Yeeter

Anyway I gotta go for a bit, have fun y'all. Your wolves are gorgeous.

01:05:22 He/They pronouns

Darkfire,
Huh?

01:05:19 a rock in your shoe

dark
i think i missed something-

01:05:12 The Yeeter

Your laptop is being evil

Master Darkfire

01:05:01 Dark/fire/ice

cinn lol

Master Darkfire

01:04:51 Dark/fire/ice

can yall please make a promise to me? to not say that word? (for my sanity)

01:04:38 Cinn / Ace

cinn is very mad at cinn's laptop
why did cinn's laptop restart again
cinn just restarted it 15 minutes ago

01:04:26 The Yeeter

A good excuse to name a wolf after a character of mine named MistFall so

01:03:41 The Yeeter

I almost yeeted her but the mist base coat is pretty and the weather vitals are awesome.

01:03:19 He/They pronouns

Ugh, River hates drawing perspectives >:(

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01:10:17 Pack of Sharp Snap

Do not discuss it in PMs please as talking about others is not allowed.

01:10:12 Winter

Doodle
May I ask are you river xD

01:09:29 He/They pronouns

Cinn,
River can explain in dm

01:08:52 Cinn / Ace

^
Was not here during the Love Story thing
Would like DD to explain perhaps
Or anyone
But one person

01:08:28 He/They pronouns

Winter,
River can probably :3

01:07:40 Winter

Does anyone want to do me a massive favour and make me a 59r ac custom coat :D

01:07:21 Pack of Sharp Snap

don't worry Darkfire

01:06:46 a rock in your shoe

dark
i see
i swear on the soul of my father, domingo montoya/ref

01:06:24 He/They pronouns

Darkfire,
River suggests blocking love story :p

Master Darkfire

01:06:03 Dark/fire/ice

vax the thing love story was talking about...it is my less that prefered topic that makes me uncomfterble

01:05:40 The Yeeter

Anyway I gotta go for a bit, have fun y'all. Your wolves are gorgeous.

01:05:22 He/They pronouns

Darkfire,
Huh?

01:05:19 a rock in your shoe

dark
i think i missed something-

01:05:12 The Yeeter

Your laptop is being evil

Master Darkfire

01:05:01 Dark/fire/ice

cinn lol

Master Darkfire

01:04:51 Dark/fire/ice

can yall please make a promise to me? to not say that word? (for my sanity)

01:04:38 Cinn / Ace

cinn is very mad at cinn's laptop
why did cinn's laptop restart again
cinn just restarted it 15 minutes ago

01:04:26 The Yeeter

A good excuse to name a wolf after a character of mine named MistFall so

01:03:41 The Yeeter

I almost yeeted her but the mist base coat is pretty and the weather vitals are awesome.

01:03:19 He/They pronouns

Ugh, River hates drawing perspectives >:(

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June 17, 2018 01:25 PM

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#753472
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Heya, I was hoping for some critique on this!
https://image.ibb.co/my78pd/04_B80_E15_8317_4_AFD_A3_CC_39_B9_AB3_ACB6_C.png

June 17, 2018 01:30 PM

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It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

June 17, 2018 01:31 PM

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ThunderousSymphonies said:
It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

Thanks! I'm fixing now!

June 17, 2018 01:39 PM

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https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

June 17, 2018 01:54 PM

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It is gorgeous, but to make it more eye catching, I would recommend more shadow and more light.

The shading is very dull, but that can be easily fixed!!!

Other than that, it is a stunning piece of artwork!

June 21, 2018 05:37 PM

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I would make the eyes larger and with a slightly more defined shape, along with the nose, and make the muzzle and ears a little sharper and the chin a little bigger.

https://image.ibb.co/nq4oVT/advice.png

https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

By the way, I love your colouring! I can't colour for anything!

June 22, 2018 11:30 PM

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#766096
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I would just say work a little with the direction the fur flows in, and the lighting on the snout is a little askew (I would suggest a slightly sharper angle]

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