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 GreatestAxolotl
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I use my teeth to whistle
 Vax
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petri
oh
i can’t whistle ever
 TheFlyingKitten
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Vax

No, I used to be able to! I now cannot!
 Vax
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petri
me neither
 SouthernScorpion
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how do i use my relic to stagger dom?
 TheFlyingKitten
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Chat, it's an emergency! I can't whistle! D:
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thank you! I was so excited for them and it looks like it payed off!
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Oleander
They're gorgeous!!
 Oleander Kiss
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yeah! I just popper her! apparently i shouldve theatened her like 13 hours ago when she hit 80
 Moonfall
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Oleander,
I think threatening worked, she's in labor when I clicked on her
 SouthernScorpion
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messaged eve and evergreen, waiting on a response
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 Sikoa
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WP mods are very good
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Evergreen is a mod and online
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Scorpion,

Oh, then you might want to message Eve. She is more likely able to do something about it
 SouthernScorpion
10:06:30 Scorpion
it involves real money so I'm mildly panicking
 Burning Roses
10:06:00 Your local therapist
Ah, they could be doing other things at the moment, I'm sure they'll get back to you soon
 Burning Roses
10:05:25 Your local therapist
It seems Evergreen is on at the moment, might be a good idea to PM them your issue
 SouthernScorpion
10:04:51 Scorpion
I pm'd the only one online
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 GreatestAxolotl
10:37:21 
I use my teeth to whistle
 Vax
10:33:34 a rock in your shoe
petri
oh
i can’t whistle ever
 TheFlyingKitten
10:33:04 Petri Dish/ENA Mum
Vax

No, I used to be able to! I now cannot!
 Vax
10:32:13 a rock in your shoe
petri
me neither
 SouthernScorpion
10:32:07 Scorpion
how do i use my relic to stagger dom?
 TheFlyingKitten
10:29:16 Petri Dish/ENA Mum
Chat, it's an emergency! I can't whistle! D:
 Oleander Kiss
10:24:36 Cervo
moon
thank you! I was so excited for them and it looks like it payed off!
 Moonfall
10:22:10 Many moons, one me
Oleander
They're gorgeous!!
 Oleander Kiss
10:20:51 Cervo
Moon
yeah! I just popper her! apparently i shouldve theatened her like 13 hours ago when she hit 80
 Moonfall
10:20:12 Many moons, one me
Oleander,
I think threatening worked, she's in labor when I clicked on her
 SouthernScorpion
10:15:53 Scorpion
messaged eve and evergreen, waiting on a response
 Xanthius
10:11:38 Xan
Ello chat
 Sikoa
10:08:35 
WP mods are very good
 Sikoa
10:07:14 
Evergreen is a mod and online
 Dagger Pack
10:07:03 Zuko/Legacy
Scorpion,

Oh, then you might want to message Eve. She is more likely able to do something about it
 SouthernScorpion
10:06:30 Scorpion
it involves real money so I'm mildly panicking
 Burning Roses
10:06:00 Your local therapist
Ah, they could be doing other things at the moment, I'm sure they'll get back to you soon
 Burning Roses
10:05:25 Your local therapist
It seems Evergreen is on at the moment, might be a good idea to PM them your issue
 SouthernScorpion
10:04:51 Scorpion
I pm'd the only one online
 Dagger Pack
10:03:30 Zuko/Legacy
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Critique?August 8, 2018 02:05 PM


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I'm looking for a critique on this. I made the character for Cun :p
I'm looking for critiques on mostly anatomy, but coloring as well.

https://s15.postimg.cc/p5ekn64l5/sketch1533754368467.png

Edited at August 8, 2018 04:01 PM by Wolf~Song
Critique?August 8, 2018 02:08 PM


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The head is very small as opposed to the body, particularly how thick the legs are, the chest us really large as well, which all makes the head look super small. I recommend looking up references to aid with body proportions.
Critique?August 8, 2018 02:10 PM


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Mistress Nyx said:
The head is very small as opposed to the body, particularly how thick the legs are, the chest us really large as well, which all makes the head look super small. I recommend looking up references to aid with body proportions.

Thank you! This is super helpful because I didn't notice that! I'll use more references next time :3
Critique?August 8, 2018 02:13 PM


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Mistress Nyx said:
The head is very small as opposed to the body, particularly how thick the legs are, the chest us really large as well, which all makes the head look super small. I recommend looking up references to aid with body proportions.

I agree with Nyx. You need to either make the head bigger or size down the chest legs and try to make the neck a tiny bit longer. The big legs could be an acceptance because if she is a strong character it will match.
Critique?August 8, 2018 02:15 PM


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Dragon’s Den said:



Mistress Nyx said:
The head is very small as opposed to the body, particularly how thick the legs are, the chest us really large as well, which all makes the head look super small. I recommend looking up references to aid with body proportions.

I agree with Nyx. You need to either make the head bigger or size down the chest legs and try to make the neck a tiny bit longer. The big legs could be an acceptance because if she is a strong character it will match.

I will next time! Thanks! I just started drawing big cats, so proportions are difficult. She's supposed to be a short and stumpy muscular character, so I did draw the large legs on purpose.
Critique?August 8, 2018 02:33 PM


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Wolf~Song said:


Dragon’s Den said:



Mistress Nyx said:
The head is very small as opposed to the body, particularly how thick the legs are, the chest us really large as well, which all makes the head look super small. I recommend looking up references to aid with body proportions.

I agree with Nyx. You need to either make the head bigger or size down the chest legs and try to make the neck a tiny bit longer. The big legs could be an acceptance because if she is a strong character it will match.

I will next time! Thanks! I just started drawing big cats, so proportions are difficult. She's supposed to be a short and stumpy muscular character, so I did draw the large legs on purpose.

Makes sense to me! Good job on the art tho, I suck at cats.
Critique?August 8, 2018 02:34 PM


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Dragon’s Den said:


Wolf~Song said:


Dragon’s Den said:



Mistress Nyx said:
The head is very small as opposed to the body, particularly how thick the legs are, the chest us really large as well, which all makes the head look super small. I recommend looking up references to aid with body proportions.

I agree with Nyx. You need to either make the head bigger or size down the chest legs and try to make the neck a tiny bit longer. The big legs could be an acceptance because if she is a strong character it will match.

I will next time! Thanks! I just started drawing big cats, so proportions are difficult. She's supposed to be a short and stumpy muscular character, so I did draw the large legs on purpose.

Makes sense to me! Good job on the art tho, I suck at cats.

Thank you! I really appreciate it. I can hardly do domestic cats, so I feel you XD
Critique?August 8, 2018 02:42 PM


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Overall I think you did a good job. c:
Critique?August 8, 2018 02:45 PM


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Cún. said:
Overall I think you did a good job. c:

Thanks! ^.^

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