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Scorpion,

Oh, then you might want to message Eve. She is more likely able to do something about it
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it involves real money so I'm mildly panicking
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Ah, they could be doing other things at the moment, I'm sure they'll get back to you soon
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It seems Evergreen is on at the moment, might be a good idea to PM them your issue
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I pm'd the only one online
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Your*
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Scorpion,

You're best bet is to PM one

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 Vax
10:33:34 a rock in your shoe
petri
oh
i can’t whistle ever
 TheFlyingKitten
10:33:04 Petri Dish/ENA Mum
Vax

No, I used to be able to! I now cannot!
 Vax
10:32:13 a rock in your shoe
petri
me neither
 SouthernScorpion
10:32:07 Scorpion
how do i use my relic to stagger dom?
 TheFlyingKitten
10:29:16 Petri Dish/ENA Mum
Chat, it's an emergency! I can't whistle! D:
 Oleander Kiss
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moon
thank you! I was so excited for them and it looks like it payed off!
 Moonfall
10:22:10 Many moons, one me
Oleander
They're gorgeous!!
 Oleander Kiss
10:20:51 Cervo
Moon
yeah! I just popper her! apparently i shouldve theatened her like 13 hours ago when she hit 80
 Moonfall
10:20:12 Many moons, one me
Oleander,
I think threatening worked, she's in labor when I clicked on her
 SouthernScorpion
10:15:53 Scorpion
messaged eve and evergreen, waiting on a response
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Ello chat
 Sikoa
10:08:35 
WP mods are very good
 Sikoa
10:07:14 
Evergreen is a mod and online
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10:07:03 Zuko/Legacy
Scorpion,

Oh, then you might want to message Eve. She is more likely able to do something about it
 SouthernScorpion
10:06:30 Scorpion
it involves real money so I'm mildly panicking
 Burning Roses
10:06:00 Your local therapist
Ah, they could be doing other things at the moment, I'm sure they'll get back to you soon
 Burning Roses
10:05:25 Your local therapist
It seems Evergreen is on at the moment, might be a good idea to PM them your issue
 SouthernScorpion
10:04:51 Scorpion
I pm'd the only one online
 Dagger Pack
10:03:30 Zuko/Legacy
Your*
 Dagger Pack
10:03:15 Zuko/Legacy
Scorpion,

You're best bet is to PM one




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Critique?July 30, 2018 05:59 AM


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I was just messing around and I made this:
https://s20.postimg.cc/yhul59mm5/dog_2_red_merle.png
And this:
https://s20.postimg.cc/qaowjlu99/horsem.png
If anyone can't see^ that's a horse on a dark green and black background
I'm just looking for advice and stuff.

Edited at July 30, 2018 06:00 AM by Diggie
Critique?July 30, 2018 02:36 PM


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Horse
I can't see it
But the D ring for your bit is way too big
And the rest of the bridle is way to small
Critique?July 30, 2018 02:46 PM


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Well,for the leopard I would have added more details. The lines look straight, maybe fluff thru up a bit with some fur. For the paws, you could try something like this.
https://s15.postimg.cc/petz174uz/beach.png

Or
https://s15.postimg.cc/5wzblbsij/1532979343133.png
(Lineart by Kekeywolf. Devianart. com)

Then you could go in and give the leopard cartoon like eyes, sorta like the wolf above. Black dots make it look extremely basic and simple.

For the horse:
Well, first, try a lighter background. The animal is extremely hard to see,even with full brightness.

Try fixing the ear. Keep horse atomony in memory. Swoop the ear forward a bit. And the chin needs fixed a bit. Here..just look at this:
https://s15.postimg.cc/q6wn0glxn/1532979820954.png

I would possibly work on mane a bit too.
There is a strip of white by the chin that you should finish coloring in.

However, despite this all,I love your work! I can see great things coming from you in the future ^^

Edited at July 30, 2018 02:47 PM by Astrophel°^°
Critique?July 30, 2018 03:58 PM


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Thanks Astro and Midnight!
The top one is a red merle Amercian Staffordshire though, which is why the eyes are black
I'll change the toes a bit, maybe make the horse's background lighter.
I'll also change the chin, but currently I'm trying to decide what to work on next XD
Critique?July 30, 2018 06:33 PM


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Sorry if I sound rude but... I can't see the horse lol! The dogs paws could use some work, but other than that it looks super cute! Great Job!

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