Wolf Play : Critique on this

01:27:08 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Ok I’m off bye bye y’all

01:24:36 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Oh yeah! Just got my 4th yap trophy

Tangled Moon

01:17:18 Moony

my beautiful wolf Aphrodite died 😭😭😭
-WP Click-

KittyE

12:49:20

Does anyone know of fertility figurine being sold

12:30:27 Kneecap stealer

Can you yell at me to go to sleep please?🥲🥲🥲🥲 One of my old roommates came knocking on the door and woke me up because I put a friends stuff outside (took over an hour she had so much shit) because of some personal stuff she tried to do (kick me out is the main one)

12:28:35 Kneecap stealer

:0 hi eve and yes, thankies it's VERY helpful when you don't have to buy them or find the ingredients to craft them, espically if you have to craft multiple of each

SixBears

12:24:38 evebot

That was the other day. I thought it would be helpful. :)

12:14:08 Kneecap stealer

When did they add the healing pots in market

12:11:29 Kneecap stealer

I swear if I wake up to a labor notification and I have duds imma scream

Vulpixles

11:52:46 Pixie, Vul | ♈

Yeah I definitely missed writing. It's been like 4 years

11:35:25 renee

@Sleep
strange

11:33:20 Kneecap stealer

I was asleep..until someone came Knocking on my back door asking for my boyfriend and now I cannot go back to sleep

11:20:00 renee

@Sleep
go to SLEEP!

11:18:43 Kneecap stealer

Someone yell at me to go to sleep, I gotta get up early tomorrow to visit my boyfriend

11:17:31 Kneecap stealer

I'm breathing so heavy I'm convinced something is wrong

Ninjago Realm

11:09:54 Waterfall,Zane,Nya

Zane Julien chokes on their meal.

Mood: Sheepish well done Zane... How do you choke...

11:01:37 renee

@Lucky Rat
BBQ chips are fire

Spellbound

11:01:16 miss fine dining

go buy some

10:54:34 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

I want some BBQ chips >:( I’ve been craving them all day |:’(

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01:27:08 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Ok I’m off bye bye y’all

01:24:36 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Oh yeah! Just got my 4th yap trophy

Tangled Moon

01:17:18 Moony

my beautiful wolf Aphrodite died 😭😭😭
-WP Click-

KittyE

12:49:20

Does anyone know of fertility figurine being sold

12:30:27 Kneecap stealer

12:28:35 Kneecap stealer

:0 hi eve and yes, thankies it's VERY helpful when you don't have to buy them or find the ingredients to craft them, espically if you have to craft multiple of each

SixBears

12:24:38 evebot

That was the other day. I thought it would be helpful. :)

12:14:08 Kneecap stealer

When did they add the healing pots in market

12:11:29 Kneecap stealer

I swear if I wake up to a labor notification and I have duds imma scream

Vulpixles

11:52:46 Pixie, Vul | ♈

Yeah I definitely missed writing. It's been like 4 years

11:35:25 renee

@Sleep
strange

11:33:20 Kneecap stealer

I was asleep..until someone came Knocking on my back door asking for my boyfriend and now I cannot go back to sleep

11:20:00 renee

@Sleep
go to SLEEP!

11:18:43 Kneecap stealer

Someone yell at me to go to sleep, I gotta get up early tomorrow to visit my boyfriend

11:17:31 Kneecap stealer

I'm breathing so heavy I'm convinced something is wrong

Ninjago Realm

11:09:54 Waterfall,Zane,Nya

Zane Julien chokes on their meal.

Mood: Sheepish well done Zane... How do you choke...

11:01:37 renee

@Lucky Rat
BBQ chips are fire

Spellbound

11:01:16 miss fine dining

go buy some

10:54:34 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

I want some BBQ chips >:( I’ve been craving them all day |:’(

Nekros

10:54:19 Kros

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May 15, 2018 02:12 PM

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https://s9.postimg.cc/u0o0j78j3/Untitled412.png

Any improvements I can make? :/

Edited at May 15, 2018 02:13 PM by Cún.

May 16, 2018 12:44 AM

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The tail and back leg are extremely strange and I can't quite figure out what's going on there. XD

Also, instead of two sitting poses, I'd add one that clearly shows a side view.

Edited at May 16, 2018 12:45 AM by Lykotia

May 16, 2018 01:57 AM

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Lykotia said:
The tail and back leg are extremely strange and I can't quite figure out what's going on there. XD

Also, instead of two sitting poses, I'd add one that clearly shows a side view.

I haven't a clue what I did either. It's so cringy for other players to notice :')

Thanks for the help. :D

May 20, 2018 12:26 PM

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Um... maybe make the lower jaw line up a bit more with the upper jaw. Otherwise it kinda looks like an overbite. Hope that helps a bit.

May 20, 2018 12:27 PM

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Hunters said:
Um... maybe make the lower jaw line up a bit more with the upper jaw. Otherwise it kinda looks like an overbite. Hope that helps a bit.

Thanks, anything is helpful x'D

May 20, 2018 08:40 PM

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I think it looks really good, but the head looks a tad big for the body, and didnt quite flow well into it. Other than that, awesome job!

May 21, 2018 01:52 AM

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Cutting Edge said:
I think it looks really good, but the head looks a tad big for the body, and didn't quite flow well into it. Other than that, awesome job!

>.< Thanks!

May 21, 2018 02:28 AM

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The back legs are a bit too stretched out to be a natural position, and it looks like the tail is coming off of the back leg. A line there to separate the tail from the leg would help it look less off. ^^

Edited at May 21, 2018 02:29 AM by Evee4ever228

May 21, 2018 09:53 AM