Wolf Play : Criticism?

06:15:16 P'Sky/Sky-kun

I'm playing on my phone but I set it to desktop

Kura

06:14:05 Call Me Ryan

This only started happening to me today and I'm not sure what's going on, and if it's a site issue or a me issue

Kura

06:13:28 Call Me Ryan

Anyone on mobile having the issue if you click on something such as "manage wolf" or give character points, nothing happens and you have to turn your screen sideways for the options to show up?

Moonfall

06:12:50 Many moons, one me

Scorpion
As I read "Murica" I heard a red tailed hawk somewhere outside

06:12:04 toe licker

hi wild!

Wild Runners

06:11:55 Stalking chat

I keep finding the generals..but I don't even have a bounty for them..

06:11:55 toe licker

bye NRC!!!!

06:11:46 NRC/Raven

Ok I gotta go I have stuff I wanna do bye!

SouthernScorpion

06:11:13 Scorpion

finally got something other than a bald eagle

06:10:46

Thanks to everyone who has helped me the past few days. I'm trying to find my way around the site ^_^

Akira Fire

06:10:44 AW

I need these event characters to show up in explore. I keep getting quests to kill them but none of them are showing up. Not even the ones I dont need

06:09:18 NRC/Raven

Skylar
Rude

06:07:59 toe licker

owlstar
thanks for your previous comment on my wolf, i didn't see you said something. :)

Ezranian

06:06:42 ezra, he/him

black dawn-
you'll get more if the mother has a higher maternal score

AshenCrow

06:06:05 Ashe, Crow

If she or the male she's bred to have over 60 cp in maternal/charisma, she should have 3! Not sure on the exact numbers for fewer

06:05:54 P'Sky/Sky-kun

I told my boyfriend I tore up my hand, he's told me he was sorry and to rest my hand. Now he's on discord playing games with his friends and it's low-key pissing me off. I just wanted his attention

06:05:22 toe licker

Black Dawn Den
about 1-4

06:04:45

I am so excited! My first wolf is getting close to birth! How do I know how many pups she will have?

06:03:37 NRC/Raven

Youtube*

06:03:28 NRC/Raven

My YT music playlists are a mess hehe

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06:15:16 P'Sky/Sky-kun

I'm playing on my phone but I set it to desktop

Kura

06:14:05 Call Me Ryan

This only started happening to me today and I'm not sure what's going on, and if it's a site issue or a me issue

Kura

06:13:28 Call Me Ryan

Anyone on mobile having the issue if you click on something such as "manage wolf" or give character points, nothing happens and you have to turn your screen sideways for the options to show up?

Moonfall

06:12:50 Many moons, one me

Scorpion
As I read "Murica" I heard a red tailed hawk somewhere outside

06:12:04 toe licker

hi wild!

Wild Runners

06:11:55 Stalking chat

I keep finding the generals..but I don't even have a bounty for them..

06:11:55 toe licker

bye NRC!!!!

06:11:46 NRC/Raven

Ok I gotta go I have stuff I wanna do bye!

SouthernScorpion

06:11:13 Scorpion

finally got something other than a bald eagle

06:10:46

Thanks to everyone who has helped me the past few days. I'm trying to find my way around the site ^_^

Akira Fire

06:10:44 AW

I need these event characters to show up in explore. I keep getting quests to kill them but none of them are showing up. Not even the ones I dont need

06:09:18 NRC/Raven

Skylar
Rude

06:07:59 toe licker

owlstar
thanks for your previous comment on my wolf, i didn't see you said something. :)

Ezranian

06:06:42 ezra, he/him

black dawn-
you'll get more if the mother has a higher maternal score

AshenCrow

06:06:05 Ashe, Crow

If she or the male she's bred to have over 60 cp in maternal/charisma, she should have 3! Not sure on the exact numbers for fewer

06:05:54 P'Sky/Sky-kun

I told my boyfriend I tore up my hand, he's told me he was sorry and to rest my hand. Now he's on discord playing games with his friends and it's low-key pissing me off. I just wanted his attention

06:05:22 toe licker

Black Dawn Den
about 1-4

06:04:45

I am so excited! My first wolf is getting close to birth! How do I know how many pups she will have?

06:03:37 NRC/Raven

Youtube*

06:03:28 NRC/Raven

My YT music playlists are a mess hehe

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January 3, 2018 11:40 PM

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http://preview.ibb.co/gavXBb/image.jpg

I need a little help editing this guy. This is my first hyena drawing~

I'm decent with anatomy, and I've studied up on most things about hyenas, but I haven't got my hands on anything about their faces at the moment. So I'm looking for criticism on the facial structure, how it looks, etc. since I'm not sure on it yet, especially the mouth, jawline, and ears. The flower crown could be commented on as well, although I like it the way it is. It's probably sucky as well >>

So comment any judging below. Keep in mind that there's a border between constructive criticism and being rude, but don't worry, I don't often take offense personally~

Edited at January 3, 2018 11:41 PM by Taboo

January 4, 2018 12:21 AM

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I personally think it could use a bit more shading on the sides of the nose.

January 29, 2018 07:06 PM

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I'm not sure about the jawline, ears, and fur texture... all seem slightly abnormal. But overall, it's nice. :3

January 29, 2018 10:16 PM

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https://s14.postimg.org/8po2knqfz/6_EC7223_B-3695-479_C-9903-764_DCDCBF117.jpg?dl=1

I think the only thing throwing me off is the nose. It could use more shading, and be more 3-dimensional. I sketched a little example on my iPad for you.

I agree with Seaward about the mouth/jaw being a bit weird, but not overly.

I think it looks awesome.

Edited at January 29, 2018 10:18 PM by Deer

January 29, 2018 10:41 PM