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11:36:22 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

im not im saying I wish I had the fucking will to explore?

11:34:17 Eas

This is my battle boy in training, ive been slacking but working on it.
I also love that hes thrown me some great pups too
-WP Click-

Flightless Nesters

11:32:20

i'm so proud of my girl! she's about to hit the goal of 500 before 21th
-WP Click-

11:29:17 Eas

Speaking of cats, we got a turtle today and my cat will NOT leave it alone

11:27:56

That's adorable, I have 4 cats myself, 2 of which are still kittens

11:26:40 Medicinally Autistic

They're both just my kitties.

11:26:00

I just wanted to say I really love your pfp Apothecary, It gives Warrior Cats in the best ways

Flightless Nesters

11:23:24

oop-

11:22:25 Medicinally Autistic

I really wish we didn't subliminally beg in main chat.

11:22:05

It would be interesting if it did have effects like it does in real life but it's nice to know it doesn't

Red River Wolves

11:20:18 Redd Dead

Wildhowler,
No, IB vs CL is just a player preference. It doesn't affect the game

Flightless Nesters

11:19:22

i see that under BL that i does show something with inbreeding, but idk if it has effects?

11:16:54

Does it actually even matter if a wolf is inbred? Does it actually do anything? Like have any actually effect on genetics?

11:11:17 Medicinally Autistic

I've used 3 elderberries, and 3 dandelions, and gotten 1 divine health :/ this is lowkey bogus ;-;

11:03:26 Eas

Dawn
I also do not have a toucan feather, but im about to go to sleep anyways. Just got the baby fown so I should go too (,:

10:56:25 Dawn

Eas
I get that. My wolf won't pop. I don't have a toucan feather though so I have to wait :(

10:55:10 Eas

Pop already would you ;-;
-WP Click-

Cascade Falls Meadow

10:54:29 Cascade

Growls

Cascade Falls Meadow

10:54:11 Cascade

Growers not trowels

Cascade Falls Meadow

10:53:59 Cascade

Shadow trowel at her own shadow, why did I have to name you Shadow

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11:36:22 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

im not im saying I wish I had the fucking will to explore?

11:34:17 Eas

This is my battle boy in training, ive been slacking but working on it.
I also love that hes thrown me some great pups too
-WP Click-

Flightless Nesters

11:32:20

i'm so proud of my girl! she's about to hit the goal of 500 before 21th
-WP Click-

11:29:17 Eas

Speaking of cats, we got a turtle today and my cat will NOT leave it alone

11:27:56

That's adorable, I have 4 cats myself, 2 of which are still kittens

11:26:40 Medicinally Autistic

They're both just my kitties.

11:26:00

I just wanted to say I really love your pfp Apothecary, It gives Warrior Cats in the best ways

Flightless Nesters

11:23:24

oop-

11:22:25 Medicinally Autistic

I really wish we didn't subliminally beg in main chat.

11:22:05

It would be interesting if it did have effects like it does in real life but it's nice to know it doesn't

Red River Wolves

11:20:18 Redd Dead

Wildhowler,
No, IB vs CL is just a player preference. It doesn't affect the game

Flightless Nesters

11:19:22

i see that under BL that i does show something with inbreeding, but idk if it has effects?

11:16:54

Does it actually even matter if a wolf is inbred? Does it actually do anything? Like have any actually effect on genetics?

11:11:17 Medicinally Autistic

I've used 3 elderberries, and 3 dandelions, and gotten 1 divine health :/ this is lowkey bogus ;-;

11:03:26 Eas

Dawn
I also do not have a toucan feather, but im about to go to sleep anyways. Just got the baby fown so I should go too (,:

10:56:25 Dawn

Eas
I get that. My wolf won't pop. I don't have a toucan feather though so I have to wait :(

10:55:10 Eas

Pop already would you ;-;
-WP Click-

Cascade Falls Meadow

10:54:29 Cascade

Growls

Cascade Falls Meadow

10:54:11 Cascade

Growers not trowels

Cascade Falls Meadow

10:53:59 Cascade

Shadow trowel at her own shadow, why did I have to name you Shadow

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September 18, 2018 05:13 PM

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So I'm looking for critique of my art

When posting pleade state what peice of art your posting for

Thank you

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Huge wolf project [sketch]

https://i.postimg.cc/pXQvpwCQ/Untitled124.png

#2

Hide and Seek [HEE contest]

http://oi66.tinypic.com/rlgox5.jpg

Edited at September 18, 2018 06:54 PM by Moonshire Pack

September 18, 2018 06:54 PM

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new artz added

September 18, 2018 06:59 PM

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Um they both look fine to me xD

September 18, 2018 07:32 PM

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The wolf looks great, but maybe make the belly "bigger" when it gets to its hind legs.

September 19, 2018 03:31 AM

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Thank you :D

September 19, 2018 05:07 AM

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Agreeing with Damian. The body/ belly lines should move down a little or else the legs would look too big, hind legs mostly but front legs too.

Round out the ears a little?

The back hind leg looks a bit off, perhaps move it forward a bit and add a bit of an angle so it doesn't look so straight? Or perhaps it was just the paw.

I can't help on the photo manipulation though. Sorry!

September 19, 2018 08:25 AM

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the belly should be a little bigger near the back, and the nose/snout is quite pointed, I would round it out a little for a more realistic look. Other than that it looks great! Did you use a reference?

September 19, 2018 09:15 AM

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Thanks every for the critique

Currantly eveyone thinks my arts only work 100-200 mush so I'm Tring to improve

And I didn't use a ref however I was studying wnatomy for hours yesterday

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