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Critique?August 8, 2018 02:05 PM


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I'm looking for a critique on this. I made the character for Cun :p
I'm looking for critiques on mostly anatomy, but coloring as well.

https://s15.postimg.cc/p5ekn64l5/sketch1533754368467.png

Edited at August 8, 2018 04:01 PM by Wolf~Song
Critique?August 8, 2018 02:08 PM


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The head is very small as opposed to the body, particularly how thick the legs are, the chest us really large as well, which all makes the head look super small. I recommend looking up references to aid with body proportions.
Critique?August 8, 2018 02:10 PM


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Mistress Nyx said:
The head is very small as opposed to the body, particularly how thick the legs are, the chest us really large as well, which all makes the head look super small. I recommend looking up references to aid with body proportions.

Thank you! This is super helpful because I didn't notice that! I'll use more references next time :3
Critique?August 8, 2018 02:13 PM


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Mistress Nyx said:
The head is very small as opposed to the body, particularly how thick the legs are, the chest us really large as well, which all makes the head look super small. I recommend looking up references to aid with body proportions.

I agree with Nyx. You need to either make the head bigger or size down the chest legs and try to make the neck a tiny bit longer. The big legs could be an acceptance because if she is a strong character it will match.
Critique?August 8, 2018 02:15 PM


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Dragon’s Den said:



Mistress Nyx said:
The head is very small as opposed to the body, particularly how thick the legs are, the chest us really large as well, which all makes the head look super small. I recommend looking up references to aid with body proportions.

I agree with Nyx. You need to either make the head bigger or size down the chest legs and try to make the neck a tiny bit longer. The big legs could be an acceptance because if she is a strong character it will match.

I will next time! Thanks! I just started drawing big cats, so proportions are difficult. She's supposed to be a short and stumpy muscular character, so I did draw the large legs on purpose.
Critique?August 8, 2018 02:33 PM


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Wolf~Song said:


Dragon’s Den said:



Mistress Nyx said:
The head is very small as opposed to the body, particularly how thick the legs are, the chest us really large as well, which all makes the head look super small. I recommend looking up references to aid with body proportions.

I agree with Nyx. You need to either make the head bigger or size down the chest legs and try to make the neck a tiny bit longer. The big legs could be an acceptance because if she is a strong character it will match.

I will next time! Thanks! I just started drawing big cats, so proportions are difficult. She's supposed to be a short and stumpy muscular character, so I did draw the large legs on purpose.

Makes sense to me! Good job on the art tho, I suck at cats.
Critique?August 8, 2018 02:34 PM


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Dragon’s Den said:


Wolf~Song said:


Dragon’s Den said:



Mistress Nyx said:
The head is very small as opposed to the body, particularly how thick the legs are, the chest us really large as well, which all makes the head look super small. I recommend looking up references to aid with body proportions.

I agree with Nyx. You need to either make the head bigger or size down the chest legs and try to make the neck a tiny bit longer. The big legs could be an acceptance because if she is a strong character it will match.

I will next time! Thanks! I just started drawing big cats, so proportions are difficult. She's supposed to be a short and stumpy muscular character, so I did draw the large legs on purpose.

Makes sense to me! Good job on the art tho, I suck at cats.

Thank you! I really appreciate it. I can hardly do domestic cats, so I feel you XD
Critique?August 8, 2018 02:42 PM


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Overall I think you did a good job. c:
Critique?August 8, 2018 02:45 PM


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Cún. said:
Overall I think you did a good job. c:

Thanks! ^.^

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