Wolf Play : Critique?

dose dune sound cool for my sand elementals subject name
project) or should I do desert's cry
Roaring Sands
(tiger+egale )
or soaring dunes
.....my brain did not forgot how to spell soar... no I can English
Slashing desert as Dune sounds odd next to the others
Searing ion(Viper)
the others XD

Easnem

11:40:52 Eas

I had to check their apple prices </3 I saw it’s a lot

Pink kitty🐈

11:40:33 Kneecap stealer

Would it possibly be eve

Apothecary

11:40:23 Medicinally Autistic

Please watch your language, no need to get upset.

Pink kitty🐈

11:40:15 Kneecap stealer

Apo doesn't have anything in their MD

The Silmaril Pack

11:39:56

Eas
You maybe, possibly, are slightly close to the answer xD

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Easnem

11:51:07 Eas

I see, I do have another who is at 89 and not in labor. Shes 17 years old though. Im surprised she made it through today

Pink kitty🐈

11:50:17 Kneecap stealer

Sometimes it's like that with me but I wasn't expecting her to go into popping mode until tomorrow

Easnem

11:50:10 Eas

89 hours and in labor*

Easnem

11:49:36 Eas

Pink Kitty (i dont know what your like to be called :,)
too early? I have one whose pretty far in labor who just won’t pop >_>

Pink kitty🐈

11:48:30 Kneecap stealer

Rivere is in labor at 83 hours! Too early!

The Silmaril Pack

11:47:29

Understood! *salutes

Pink kitty🐈

11:45:54 Kneecap stealer

Oh I'm on the hunt now, I shall not stop grinding

Pink kitty🐈

11:45:06 Kneecap stealer

Apo

You officially scare me XD

Apothecary

11:44:15 Medicinally Autistic

Main chat isn't the place and I'm able to advertise for myself in the correct chat :)

Pink kitty🐈

11:43:43 Kneecap stealer

Apo

May I possibly ask what is with the almost 100 apples😭😭😭😭

Serpents

11:42:59 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

also does Glissinging earth sound crystally or should I change it to something as its all I could think off....

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11:42:26

Apo
My bad. Just giving you a shout out, but I won't bring it up again, lol.

Pink kitty🐈

11:41:53 Kneecap stealer

We're guessing who has the 91 apples trying to sell lmao

Apothecary

11:41:16 Medicinally Autistic

Lets keep the sales talk out of main please :)

Serpents

11:41:11 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

Easnem

11:40:52 Eas

I had to check their apple prices </3 I saw it’s a lot

Pink kitty🐈

11:40:33 Kneecap stealer

Would it possibly be eve

Apothecary

11:40:23 Medicinally Autistic

Please watch your language, no need to get upset.

Pink kitty🐈

11:40:15 Kneecap stealer

Apo doesn't have anything in their MD

The Silmaril Pack

11:39:56

Eas
You maybe, possibly, are slightly close to the answer xD

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Critique?

July 6, 2018 02:35 AM

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Just trying out some semi-realistic fur practice

Critiques on lighting, blending, etc. are greatly appreciated. If you have suggestions on how to make it look more realistic, that's also greatly appreciated

https://s33.postimg.cc/6dgalc133/Fur_Practice.png

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July 7, 2018 05:36 PM

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So excellent! I love the detail in it all, especially the Black and brown!

Such amazing work!

Some Tips?

1. Shadows

I see you have some of your basic shadows, but also make darker hairs that even go through the light areas to build depth, especially on lighter colors like white and grey. It helps even give a greater realistic look

2. Color

Dont be afraid to add color to your fur strokes! It gives it more realism! If you look at real canines, you'll notice a high variety of colors and shades in a single spot!

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July 7, 2018 05:51 PM

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Dragon's Fire said:
So excellent! I love the detail in it all, especially the Black and brown!
Such amazing work!

Some Tips?

1. Shadows
I see you have some of your basic shadows, but also make darker hairs that even go through the light areas to build depth, especially on lighter colors like white and grey. It helps even give a greater realistic look

2. Color
Dont be afraid to add color to your fur strokes! It gives it more realism! If you look at real canines, you'll notice a high variety of colors and shades in a single spot!

I agree with both! For fur, I personally think that the most important thing is edge variation. Have very stark contrast as well, as right now, you have a lot of softer edges.

For color, instead of shading with black and white, try changing your hue variation! For wolves with white fur, try blue-tinted gray, cream, anything. For wolves with cream fur, try shading with a reddish-brown. Of course, these are only like two in a billion examples lol

Another thing I think is important with fur is fur direction. Look at real wolves and see how their fur grows in like ten different directions.

These are only my personal observations on drawing fur. I like what you have going so far, you can do it!

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July 7, 2018 08:12 PM

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Honestly I have no critique but this is awesome.On a real animal I think the color would be a little more varied though but I under stand you might have not added it because of it being practice.

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July 7, 2018 10:18 PM

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x3 I haven't tried putting colored edges on a practice, I might just do that. Thanks guys >^<

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