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11:36:22 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

im not im saying I wish I had the fucking will to explore?

11:34:17 Eas

This is my battle boy in training, ive been slacking but working on it.
I also love that hes thrown me some great pups too
-WP Click-

Flightless Nesters

11:32:20

i'm so proud of my girl! she's about to hit the goal of 500 before 21th
-WP Click-

11:29:17 Eas

Speaking of cats, we got a turtle today and my cat will NOT leave it alone

11:27:56

That's adorable, I have 4 cats myself, 2 of which are still kittens

11:26:40 Medicinally Autistic

They're both just my kitties.

11:26:00

I just wanted to say I really love your pfp Apothecary, It gives Warrior Cats in the best ways

Flightless Nesters

11:23:24

oop-

11:22:25 Medicinally Autistic

I really wish we didn't subliminally beg in main chat.

11:22:05

It would be interesting if it did have effects like it does in real life but it's nice to know it doesn't

Red River Wolves

11:20:18 Redd Dead

Wildhowler,
No, IB vs CL is just a player preference. It doesn't affect the game

Flightless Nesters

11:19:22

i see that under BL that i does show something with inbreeding, but idk if it has effects?

11:16:54

Does it actually even matter if a wolf is inbred? Does it actually do anything? Like have any actually effect on genetics?

11:11:17 Medicinally Autistic

I've used 3 elderberries, and 3 dandelions, and gotten 1 divine health :/ this is lowkey bogus ;-;

11:03:26 Eas

Dawn
I also do not have a toucan feather, but im about to go to sleep anyways. Just got the baby fown so I should go too (,:

10:56:25 Dawn

Eas
I get that. My wolf won't pop. I don't have a toucan feather though so I have to wait :(

10:55:10 Eas

Pop already would you ;-;
-WP Click-

Cascade Falls Meadow

10:54:29 Cascade

Growls

Cascade Falls Meadow

10:54:11 Cascade

Growers not trowels

Cascade Falls Meadow

10:53:59 Cascade

Shadow trowel at her own shadow, why did I have to name you Shadow

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11:36:22 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

im not im saying I wish I had the fucking will to explore?

11:34:17 Eas

This is my battle boy in training, ive been slacking but working on it.
I also love that hes thrown me some great pups too
-WP Click-

Flightless Nesters

11:32:20

i'm so proud of my girl! she's about to hit the goal of 500 before 21th
-WP Click-

11:29:17 Eas

Speaking of cats, we got a turtle today and my cat will NOT leave it alone

11:27:56

That's adorable, I have 4 cats myself, 2 of which are still kittens

11:26:40 Medicinally Autistic

They're both just my kitties.

11:26:00

I just wanted to say I really love your pfp Apothecary, It gives Warrior Cats in the best ways

Flightless Nesters

11:23:24

oop-

11:22:25 Medicinally Autistic

I really wish we didn't subliminally beg in main chat.

11:22:05

It would be interesting if it did have effects like it does in real life but it's nice to know it doesn't

Red River Wolves

11:20:18 Redd Dead

Wildhowler,
No, IB vs CL is just a player preference. It doesn't affect the game

Flightless Nesters

11:19:22

i see that under BL that i does show something with inbreeding, but idk if it has effects?

11:16:54

Does it actually even matter if a wolf is inbred? Does it actually do anything? Like have any actually effect on genetics?

11:11:17 Medicinally Autistic

I've used 3 elderberries, and 3 dandelions, and gotten 1 divine health :/ this is lowkey bogus ;-;

11:03:26 Eas

Dawn
I also do not have a toucan feather, but im about to go to sleep anyways. Just got the baby fown so I should go too (,:

10:56:25 Dawn

Eas
I get that. My wolf won't pop. I don't have a toucan feather though so I have to wait :(

10:55:10 Eas

Pop already would you ;-;
-WP Click-

Cascade Falls Meadow

10:54:29 Cascade

Growls

Cascade Falls Meadow

10:54:11 Cascade

Growers not trowels

Cascade Falls Meadow

10:53:59 Cascade

Shadow trowel at her own shadow, why did I have to name you Shadow

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June 17, 2018 01:25 PM

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Heya, I was hoping for some critique on this!
https://image.ibb.co/my78pd/04_B80_E15_8317_4_AFD_A3_CC_39_B9_AB3_ACB6_C.png

June 17, 2018 01:30 PM

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It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

June 17, 2018 01:31 PM

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ThunderousSymphonies said:
It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

Thanks! I'm fixing now!

June 17, 2018 01:39 PM

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https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

June 17, 2018 01:54 PM

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It is gorgeous, but to make it more eye catching, I would recommend more shadow and more light.

The shading is very dull, but that can be easily fixed!!!

Other than that, it is a stunning piece of artwork!

June 21, 2018 05:37 PM

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I would make the eyes larger and with a slightly more defined shape, along with the nose, and make the muzzle and ears a little sharper and the chin a little bigger.

https://image.ibb.co/nq4oVT/advice.png

https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

By the way, I love your colouring! I can't colour for anything!

June 22, 2018 11:30 PM

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I would just say work a little with the direction the fur flows in, and the lighting on the snout is a little askew (I would suggest a slightly sharper angle]

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