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 Serpents
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anyone up for a rp pm me please Im so bored
 Moonfall
10:09:12 Many moons, one me
Black Dawn, you're welcome. I hope whatever's going on gets better for you soon, and you come out of it no worse for wear. If you do come out of it worse for wear, I will give you a drink of your choice at your preferred temperature, and some character bandaids of your choice. It might not help the bigger stuff, but at the very least it should help the soul
 Cascade Falls Meadow
10:05:54 Cascade
Aw Moon that's so sweet!
 Black Dawn Den
10:01:06 Dawn
Moon
Aw thank you. I've been going through a lot and that really helps. Thank you <3
 Moonfall
10:00:22 Many moons, one me
Nevermind, too many letters
 Moonfall
09:59:13 Many moons, one me
Imma put something silly in my chat nicknames lol
 Moonfall
09:57:57 Many moons, one me
And just in case nobody told you today, (for everyone in or stalking chat and through osmosis to everyone on wolfplay)
I'm proud of each and every one of you. You are loved by at least one person (me, and if nobody loves you then I am dead, which is impossible because I'll become immortal so that never happens), and my pms are always open, so if you need a good rant, or even just a good cry, I'm here. Just know that I'm giving virtual hugs (a short caring pat on the shoulder for those who are touch adverse) and you are always cared for even if you don't feel it.
Wild, of course!
Also I am now eclipse. It has been decreed/silly
 Eye of Eternity
09:55:50 tern | they/he
cinn
oh thank goodness im not the only one /silly
photoshop was so much easier than this

i dont know what indesign is and im not sure if i want to know /silly
 Wild Runners
09:55:47 Stalking chat
Cinn,
night!
 Cinnamon Bloom
09:54:09 Cinn / Ace
Wild
of course!

anyway imma go get clean and go to bed
 Wild Runners
09:53:22 Stalking chat
Cinn, Eclipse(If I can call you that Moon)
*sniffle* thank you so much guys/silly
 Cinnamon Bloom
09:52:34 Cinn / Ace
tern
dshfajkdf illustrator my behated
but at least it's not INDESIGN
fuck indesign
all my homies hate indesign (like actually though)
 Eye of Eternity
09:51:40 tern | they/he
photoshop illustrator is such a pain in the ass 😔
 Andypaws
09:50:39 Andy/Kait [he/they]
-Click- all of bingos outfits so far
 Moonfall
09:50:35 Many moons, one me
Serpents
That would be a good question for a therapist. If you ever need to vent I'm always open
Wild, that looks amazing!! (Applause here)
 Cinnamon Bloom
09:49:45 Cinn / Ace
i meant to put a /silly at the end of that oops </3
 Cinnamon Bloom
09:48:23 Cinn / Ace
rdw
how dare you be faster

Wild
yipee!!
 Red River Wolves
09:48:13 Redd Dead
Cinn,
Oof. Good luck. Swamp has too many gators for me
 Cinnamon Bloom
09:48:03 Cinn / Ace
Twist
Apples > Pack Expansions
should be the third on the list
 Moontwisters
09:47:59 
thanks red rivers!!

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 Serpents
10:14:07 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal
anyone up for a rp pm me please Im so bored
 Moonfall
10:09:12 Many moons, one me
Black Dawn, you're welcome. I hope whatever's going on gets better for you soon, and you come out of it no worse for wear. If you do come out of it worse for wear, I will give you a drink of your choice at your preferred temperature, and some character bandaids of your choice. It might not help the bigger stuff, but at the very least it should help the soul
 Cascade Falls Meadow
10:05:54 Cascade
Aw Moon that's so sweet!
 Black Dawn Den
10:01:06 Dawn
Moon
Aw thank you. I've been going through a lot and that really helps. Thank you <3
 Moonfall
10:00:22 Many moons, one me
Nevermind, too many letters
 Moonfall
09:59:13 Many moons, one me
Imma put something silly in my chat nicknames lol
 Moonfall
09:57:57 Many moons, one me
And just in case nobody told you today, (for everyone in or stalking chat and through osmosis to everyone on wolfplay)
I'm proud of each and every one of you. You are loved by at least one person (me, and if nobody loves you then I am dead, which is impossible because I'll become immortal so that never happens), and my pms are always open, so if you need a good rant, or even just a good cry, I'm here. Just know that I'm giving virtual hugs (a short caring pat on the shoulder for those who are touch adverse) and you are always cared for even if you don't feel it.
Wild, of course!
Also I am now eclipse. It has been decreed/silly
 Eye of Eternity
09:55:50 tern | they/he
cinn
oh thank goodness im not the only one /silly
photoshop was so much easier than this

i dont know what indesign is and im not sure if i want to know /silly
 Wild Runners
09:55:47 Stalking chat
Cinn,
night!
 Cinnamon Bloom
09:54:09 Cinn / Ace
Wild
of course!

anyway imma go get clean and go to bed
 Wild Runners
09:53:22 Stalking chat
Cinn, Eclipse(If I can call you that Moon)
*sniffle* thank you so much guys/silly
 Cinnamon Bloom
09:52:34 Cinn / Ace
tern
dshfajkdf illustrator my behated
but at least it's not INDESIGN
fuck indesign
all my homies hate indesign (like actually though)
 Eye of Eternity
09:51:40 tern | they/he
photoshop illustrator is such a pain in the ass 😔
 Andypaws
09:50:39 Andy/Kait [he/they]
-Click- all of bingos outfits so far
 Moonfall
09:50:35 Many moons, one me
Serpents
That would be a good question for a therapist. If you ever need to vent I'm always open
Wild, that looks amazing!! (Applause here)
 Cinnamon Bloom
09:49:45 Cinn / Ace
i meant to put a /silly at the end of that oops </3
 Cinnamon Bloom
09:48:23 Cinn / Ace
rdw
how dare you be faster

Wild
yipee!!
 Red River Wolves
09:48:13 Redd Dead
Cinn,
Oof. Good luck. Swamp has too many gators for me
 Cinnamon Bloom
09:48:03 Cinn / Ace
Twist
Apples > Pack Expansions
should be the third on the list
 Moontwisters
09:47:59 
thanks red rivers!!




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Constructive CriticismFebruary 24, 2022 12:41 PM


Kortez

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My art has been looking awful lately. I have drawn this character 3 times now, and each attempt looks worse than the last. I need constructive crit, I don't care how brutal you are about it, I won't be hurt.

Feel free to redline!

Attempt 1

Attempt 2

Attempt 3

All (c) 243831/ Me

I have figured it out uwuwu thank you



Edited at March 18, 2022 05:32 PM by Excisus
Constructive CriticismFebruary 24, 2022 02:48 PM


Former Pack

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ok so the last attempt looks great!
the head on this first one is good, but what are you trying to do on the body?
the second one looks good but the head is a bit big if its what you want then it looks good also

Edited at February 24, 2022 02:49 PM by LucifersWolves
Constructive CriticismFebruary 24, 2022 02:51 PM


Nezachii

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If you are alright with redlining and some tips (With the redline) I'll be up to help you? If not, that's fine. It's your artwork.
Constructive CriticismFebruary 24, 2022 02:52 PM


Kortez

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Please do

Nez.ity said:
If you are alright with redlining and some tips (With the redline) I'll be up to help you? If not, that's fine. It's your artwork.


Constructive CriticismFebruary 24, 2022 04:53 PM


Nezachii

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Doing attempt one because everything else looks lovely *^*. I do not draw canine, anymore--yes I used to dabble back in the //first joined// ages but hopefully, you can just y'know understand that ;). While I love how you decided to do three different ones, I feel like attempt one could have some touch to it-- in case you're feeling nice and give the commissioner something to stare at; not that you know have to. ANYWAYS!

You have that edgy style, where the fur sticks out the most- as I always say go big or go home-- your attempt one could be the " GO BIG" style;o. I love the side tongue and tight collar idea, so I decided to mimic( With your permission) the style and just went crazy with the fur( Pencil work can be MUCH easier when drawing fur, you should take advantage of this punk style because it's there for YOU to improve and grow, even if you are a chibi artist( Only seen your cheebs art).

In short terms, the eye details are the show and tell, usually, when I look at canine art my eyes land on the eyes, it's the first thing I want to see- the expression, the glare, the look. I know your look is more cartoonish which I can't do but hopefully, it's still helpful.

You can do whatever with this, I only did half the job because I got uncomfortable lol.

I'll slowly add more to this so I don't spam you because again, I'm no canine artist.

Redline: (c)Nezitystudio

Constructive CriticismFebruary 24, 2022 04:57 PM


Kortez

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I heavily appreciate your words and your redline! Thank you very much!
That's the thing..i don't want my art to be cartoony.. I'm aiming for a semi realistic style, but I'm clearly far from that

Edited at February 24, 2022 10:53 PM by Excisus

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