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12:11:37 Asteroid, Poet

Husky
you were very good for her and I'm sure she was happy to be with you during that <3

Vax

12:11:18 a rock in your shoe

wait

Vax

12:10:56 a rock in your shoe

husky
I will bless you with the crochet rat

12:09:08 Husky

Vax
Thank you.
Im just happy I got to be there for her in here final moments

12:08:11 Vash | Xy

Xan
Cause my closest friend Is now busy with life and we won't be able to play games together anymore :( and we rarely talk now even but yeah

Vax

12:08:04 a rock in your shoe

husky
RIP guinea pig
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how do you get apples? I joined a while back and I play HEE. I am beginning to play this now and have NO idea

Tallula

12:06:07

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Chat check what generation she is lol

12:04:41 Husky

Vax
That's great to hear ^^
Im pretty good except still sad and missing my guinea pig

Asteroid
Yummy

Xanthius

12:03:58 Xan

Vash
whys that?

12:01:53 Asteroid, Poet

Husky
im alive

Hurry

12:01:33

"Forest Guard (Viti4) ExH A tries to impress Speckled Gladiator (Vitiligo4) by bringing them a bone." so cute, new and old Viti boys are bonding :3

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12:00:00 a rock in your shoe

husky
I'm doing well, how about you?

11:58:42 Vash | Xy

Xan
Yay I'm glad to hear your good!! :D
Eh I'm okay just a bit sad

Vax
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Aww they sound cute

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12:14:36 a rock in your shoe

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12:11:37 Asteroid, Poet

Husky
you were very good for her and I'm sure she was happy to be with you during that <3

Vax

12:11:18 a rock in your shoe

wait

Vax

12:10:56 a rock in your shoe

husky
I will bless you with the crochet rat

12:09:08 Husky

Vax
Thank you.
Im just happy I got to be there for her in here final moments

12:08:11 Vash | Xy

Xan
Cause my closest friend Is now busy with life and we won't be able to play games together anymore :( and we rarely talk now even but yeah

Vax

12:08:04 a rock in your shoe

husky
RIP guinea pig
the loss of a pet is hard, so if you want to vent, my pms are open!

12:07:41 Husky

Jewel
Apples can be bought with real money, bought from other players, earned through contests, earned from events like the FMC, or earned from referring new players

Sweet Valley

12:06:35 Anna/Jewel

how do you get apples? I joined a while back and I play HEE. I am beginning to play this now and have NO idea

Tallula

12:06:07

-WP Click-
Chat check what generation she is lol

12:04:41 Husky

Vax
That's great to hear ^^
Im pretty good except still sad and missing my guinea pig

Asteroid
Yummy

Xanthius

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Vash
whys that?

12:01:53 Asteroid, Poet

Husky
im alive

Hurry

12:01:33

"Forest Guard (Viti4) ExH A tries to impress Speckled Gladiator (Vitiligo4) by bringing them a bone." so cute, new and old Viti boys are bonding :3

Vax

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I'm doing well, how about you?

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Xan
Yay I'm glad to hear your good!! :D
Eh I'm okay just a bit sad

Vax
I'm glad to hear your doing good!
Aww they sound cute

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I feel like I don't talk here enough.
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July 6, 2018 02:35 AM

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Just trying out some semi-realistic fur practice

Critiques on lighting, blending, etc. are greatly appreciated. If you have suggestions on how to make it look more realistic, that's also greatly appreciated

https://s33.postimg.cc/6dgalc133/Fur_Practice.png

July 7, 2018 05:36 PM

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So excellent! I love the detail in it all, especially the Black and brown!

Such amazing work!

Some Tips?

1. Shadows

I see you have some of your basic shadows, but also make darker hairs that even go through the light areas to build depth, especially on lighter colors like white and grey. It helps even give a greater realistic look

2. Color

Dont be afraid to add color to your fur strokes! It gives it more realism! If you look at real canines, you'll notice a high variety of colors and shades in a single spot!

July 7, 2018 05:51 PM

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Dragon's Fire said:
So excellent! I love the detail in it all, especially the Black and brown!
Such amazing work!

Some Tips?

1. Shadows
I see you have some of your basic shadows, but also make darker hairs that even go through the light areas to build depth, especially on lighter colors like white and grey. It helps even give a greater realistic look

2. Color
Dont be afraid to add color to your fur strokes! It gives it more realism! If you look at real canines, you'll notice a high variety of colors and shades in a single spot!

I agree with both! For fur, I personally think that the most important thing is edge variation. Have very stark contrast as well, as right now, you have a lot of softer edges.

For color, instead of shading with black and white, try changing your hue variation! For wolves with white fur, try blue-tinted gray, cream, anything. For wolves with cream fur, try shading with a reddish-brown. Of course, these are only like two in a billion examples lol

Another thing I think is important with fur is fur direction. Look at real wolves and see how their fur grows in like ten different directions.

These are only my personal observations on drawing fur. I like what you have going so far, you can do it!

July 7, 2018 08:12 PM

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Honestly I have no critique but this is awesome.On a real animal I think the color would be a little more varied though but I under stand you might have not added it because of it being practice.

July 7, 2018 10:18 PM