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03:48:02 Will

@Xy

It's so exciting!!
I talked my sister into driving with me
Her reaction was X'D
Well
It was something lol

"So there will be a dog in the car?"

03:43:41 Caesar

left forest because i kept getting 6 bears, only to be greeted with this:
You spy 6 Grizzly Bears.

fuck you too, rng

03:43:04 Vash | Xy

Will
Yayy :DD thats awesome!! must be exciting!!

03:40:27 Stalking chat

15 mush for one shamrock..is crazy I can understand 10 but 15..

03:38:25 Caesar

looking for shards im missing to craft and prices really went 85 mush, 95 mush, 100 mush, 5 apples??? what the hell is going on with market

03:37:40 Stalking chat

What should I draw :D

03:33:33 Stalking chat

How do you guys think about the drawing?

St. Cloverbeast

03:33:07 Will

Poodle Puppy summer is official guys ;v;

03:30:10 P'Sky/Sky-kun

I'm free from work

03:28:31 Stalking chat

Moon,
-Click-

03:24:14 Vash | Xy

hot chocolate is so good

03:23:32 Many moons, one me

Ya know, I only had about 4 hours of sleep all together last night, Imma take a nap. See ya later

St. Cloverbeast

03:21:24 Will

Omgosh...
puppy ...
Guys I'm vibrating with excitement

03:18:18 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

i need to name wolves keep forgetting to

03:16:33 Caesar

i dipped for a while >.<

sorry psky, doomscroll and edits got me T-T

03:13:20 P'Sky/Sky-kun

Im over working
Im going to tell my boyfriend to let me stay home and he pays the bills 🤣🤣

03:03:28 Stalking chat

Moon,
okay!

03:02:31 Many moons, one me

Wild,
Sorry had to dip for a minute.
What about a duck on a pond?

03:01:37 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

@hugs welcome

03:01:06 Altar 🦌

I need two paws,, please donate your dog feet to a good cause (me)

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St. Cloverbeast

03:48:02 Will

@Xy

It's so exciting!!
I talked my sister into driving with me
Her reaction was X'D
Well
It was something lol

"So there will be a dog in the car?"

03:43:41 Caesar

left forest because i kept getting 6 bears, only to be greeted with this:
You spy 6 Grizzly Bears.

fuck you too, rng

03:43:04 Vash | Xy

Will
Yayy :DD thats awesome!! must be exciting!!

03:40:27 Stalking chat

15 mush for one shamrock..is crazy I can understand 10 but 15..

03:38:25 Caesar

looking for shards im missing to craft and prices really went 85 mush, 95 mush, 100 mush, 5 apples??? what the hell is going on with market

03:37:40 Stalking chat

What should I draw :D

03:33:33 Stalking chat

How do you guys think about the drawing?

St. Cloverbeast

03:33:07 Will

Poodle Puppy summer is official guys ;v;

03:30:10 P'Sky/Sky-kun

I'm free from work

03:28:31 Stalking chat

Moon,
-Click-

03:24:14 Vash | Xy

hot chocolate is so good

03:23:32 Many moons, one me

Ya know, I only had about 4 hours of sleep all together last night, Imma take a nap. See ya later

St. Cloverbeast

03:21:24 Will

Omgosh...
puppy ...
Guys I'm vibrating with excitement

03:18:18 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

i need to name wolves keep forgetting to

03:16:33 Caesar

i dipped for a while >.<

sorry psky, doomscroll and edits got me T-T

03:13:20 P'Sky/Sky-kun

Im over working
Im going to tell my boyfriend to let me stay home and he pays the bills 🤣🤣

03:03:28 Stalking chat

Moon,
okay!

03:02:31 Many moons, one me

Wild,
Sorry had to dip for a minute.
What about a duck on a pond?

03:01:37 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

@hugs welcome

03:01:06 Altar 🦌

I need two paws,, please donate your dog feet to a good cause (me)

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April 16, 2018 09:07 PM

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Here's the image

https://s14.postimg.cc/4h7dmgk29/Random_Galaxy.png

For some reason, something's been really bothering me about this picture and I can't seem to figure out what.

All critiques are appreciated, or just tell me what you wish was changed

Edited at April 16, 2018 09:43 PM by Embers.

April 16, 2018 09:12 PM

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Maybe more stars? We don't really see them

Except for that, I don't see what could be wrong ^^

April 16, 2018 09:37 PM

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DarkCloudClan said:
Maybe more stars? We don't really see them
Except for that, I don't see what could be wrong ^^

Alright, lemme spam the stars and update the picture XD

Edit: UPDATED

Edited at April 16, 2018 09:43 PM by Embers.

April 16, 2018 11:31 PM

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Honestly, I really like it XD Maybe you need some subtle hue shifts in there? For example, since this art seems to be getting warmer the lighter it is, you should make the highlights a bit more red where the purple is brightest, if that makes any sense?

Or maybe it's because of the front? If you look at it some more, it seems to be more like a cloud in front than part of the galaxy because the stars are brighter around the purple. So maybe you can try to make the stars brighter there? I like it a lot (:

April 16, 2018 11:53 PM

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a m b e r said:
Honestly, I really like it XD Maybe you need some subtle hue shifts in there? For example, since this art seems to be getting warmer the lighter it is, you should make the highlights a bit more red where the purple is brightest, if that makes any sense?

Or maybe it's because of the front? If you look at it some more, it seems to be more like a cloud in front than part of the galaxy because the stars are brighter around the purple. So maybe you can try to make the stars brighter there? I like it a lot (:

XD Thanks, let me update it again

April 16, 2018 11:55 PM

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I really like it! Possibly a couple other colors blended? Lighter blues and brighter pinks maybe. Just a subtle change.

April 17, 2018 12:48 AM

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Maybe if you make it a bit lighter?

April 17, 2018 01:48 AM

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I love It! I don't know much about art, but the purple cloud/nebula looks a little on the denser side.

Still, it's really beautiful! :D

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