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Does anyone know of fertility figurine being sold

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:0 hi eve and yes, thankies it's VERY helpful when you don't have to buy them or find the ingredients to craft them, espically if you have to craft multiple of each

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That was the other day. I thought it would be helpful. :)

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strange

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@Sleep
go to SLEEP!

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Zane Julien chokes on their meal.

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@Lucky Rat
BBQ chips are fire

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go buy some

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01:27:08 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Ok I’m off bye bye y’all

01:24:36 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Oh yeah! Just got my 4th yap trophy

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01:17:18 Moony

my beautiful wolf Aphrodite died 😭😭😭
-WP Click-

KittyE

12:49:20

Does anyone know of fertility figurine being sold

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12:28:35 Kneecap stealer

:0 hi eve and yes, thankies it's VERY helpful when you don't have to buy them or find the ingredients to craft them, espically if you have to craft multiple of each

SixBears

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That was the other day. I thought it would be helpful. :)

12:14:08 Kneecap stealer

When did they add the healing pots in market

12:11:29 Kneecap stealer

I swear if I wake up to a labor notification and I have duds imma scream

Vulpixles

11:52:46 Pixie, Vul | ♈

Yeah I definitely missed writing. It's been like 4 years

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@Sleep
strange

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I was asleep..until someone came Knocking on my back door asking for my boyfriend and now I cannot go back to sleep

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@Sleep
go to SLEEP!

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Someone yell at me to go to sleep, I gotta get up early tomorrow to visit my boyfriend

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I'm breathing so heavy I'm convinced something is wrong

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Zane Julien chokes on their meal.

Mood: Sheepish well done Zane... How do you choke...

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@Lucky Rat
BBQ chips are fire

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11:01:16 miss fine dining

go buy some

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I want some BBQ chips >:( I’ve been craving them all day |:’(

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July 30, 2018 05:59 AM

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I was just messing around and I made this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/yhul59mm5/dog_2_red_merle.png

And this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/qaowjlu99/horsem.png

If anyone can't see^ that's a horse on a dark green and black background

I'm just looking for advice and stuff.

Edited at July 30, 2018 06:00 AM by Diggie

July 30, 2018 02:36 PM

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Horse

I can't see it

But the D ring for your bit is way too big

And the rest of the bridle is way to small

July 30, 2018 02:46 PM

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Well,for the leopard I would have added more details. The lines look straight, maybe fluff thru up a bit with some fur. For the paws, you could try something like this.

https://s15.postimg.cc/petz174uz/beach.png

https://s15.postimg.cc/5wzblbsij/1532979343133.png

(Lineart by Kekeywolf. Devianart. com)

Then you could go in and give the leopard cartoon like eyes, sorta like the wolf above. Black dots make it look extremely basic and simple.

For the horse:

Well, first, try a lighter background. The animal is extremely hard to see,even with full brightness.

Try fixing the ear. Keep horse atomony in memory. Swoop the ear forward a bit. And the chin needs fixed a bit. Here..just look at this:

https://s15.postimg.cc/q6wn0glxn/1532979820954.png

I would possibly work on mane a bit too.

There is a strip of white by the chin that you should finish coloring in.

However, despite this all,I love your work! I can see great things coming from you in the future ^^

Edited at July 30, 2018 02:47 PM by Astrophel°^°

July 30, 2018 03:58 PM

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Thanks Astro and Midnight!

The top one is a red merle Amercian Staffordshire though, which is why the eyes are black

I'll change the toes a bit, maybe make the horse's background lighter.

I'll also change the chin, but currently I'm trying to decide what to work on next XD

July 30, 2018 06:33 PM