Wolf Play : Critique?

06:02:30 Many moons, one me

That launch was epic, I learned I could prance in excitement lol

SixBears

06:01:14 evebot

The launch was amazeballs. Those astronauts are very brave strapping themselves to that rocket.

Continental Wolves

05:54:20 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf

I have no clue what I should make for dinner ;-;
Made fried ravioli for lunch but have no idea what should be for dinner

05:52:58 Ace

Collar
It was absolutely amazing, I've never been so emotional over a livefeed xD

Tern
They sent 4 astronauts into space to circle the moon! FIrst time in my life we've sent people out that far

Eye of Eternity

05:51:42 tern | they/he

ace
ooh was there a rocket launch?

Collar

05:50:33 Altar 🦌

Ace
:0 some pals were talking about it!!

05:47:03 Ace

Anybody else watch Artemis II takeoff? Absolutely incredible.

05:46:29

Owl
lol they're incredibly bad.
I wish you the best with the art.
I want to start but really don't know if I'll have enough focus. I move too much.

05:41:22 tiger\Owl|she\her

Please pm me

05:35:58 tiger\Owl|she\her

Ok so I am thinking about selling art right? And I am really bored right now and doing nothing so I thought that I would let 5 people ask me to draw something for them for free.

05:33:45 tiger\Owl|she\her

Dam. Those are the absolute WORST vitals I’ve ever seen In my very short time here

Akira Fire

05:23:54 AW

Excuse me just kill the little bitch already
⚔️Granite DH admires the muscles of Squirrel 1, especially their thighs.

05:20:25 Many moons, one me

Dex
The squirrels really tie it together /silly
Seriously though, she looks awesome!

05:20:20

Ok.
Like worst wolf maybe?
R0. -59 vitals. Like absolutely opposite of hero.
But someone still loves him:3
-WP Click-

Xanthia

05:20:10 Vash | Xy

Magnus
same

Magnus Bane

05:16:58 Mama Maggy

I feel naked without premium

SouthernScorpion

05:16:54 Scorpion

Wish me luck, just lobbied a complaint to our mayor about our dangerous dog law

Dex

05:15:47 Dex, Asmodeous

-WP Click-

Thoughts on her gear?

05:13:33 AP/Anton

But I think it's just 5 or 6 pics that are on repeat

05:12:37 AP/Anton

I keep reloading to see all of em

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06:02:30 Many moons, one me

That launch was epic, I learned I could prance in excitement lol

SixBears

06:01:14 evebot

The launch was amazeballs. Those astronauts are very brave strapping themselves to that rocket.

Continental Wolves

05:54:20 Emmet , Spoopy Wolf

I have no clue what I should make for dinner ;-;
Made fried ravioli for lunch but have no idea what should be for dinner

05:52:58 Ace

Collar
It was absolutely amazing, I've never been so emotional over a livefeed xD

Tern
They sent 4 astronauts into space to circle the moon! FIrst time in my life we've sent people out that far

Eye of Eternity

05:51:42 tern | they/he

ace
ooh was there a rocket launch?

Collar

05:50:33 Altar 🦌

Ace
:0 some pals were talking about it!!

05:47:03 Ace

Anybody else watch Artemis II takeoff? Absolutely incredible.

05:46:29

Owl
lol they're incredibly bad.
I wish you the best with the art.
I want to start but really don't know if I'll have enough focus. I move too much.

05:41:22 tiger\Owl|she\her

Please pm me

05:35:58 tiger\Owl|she\her

Ok so I am thinking about selling art right? And I am really bored right now and doing nothing so I thought that I would let 5 people ask me to draw something for them for free.

05:33:45 tiger\Owl|she\her

Dam. Those are the absolute WORST vitals I’ve ever seen In my very short time here

Akira Fire

05:23:54 AW

Excuse me just kill the little bitch already
⚔️Granite DH admires the muscles of Squirrel 1, especially their thighs.

05:20:25 Many moons, one me

Dex
The squirrels really tie it together /silly
Seriously though, she looks awesome!

05:20:20

Ok.
Like worst wolf maybe?
R0. -59 vitals. Like absolutely opposite of hero.
But someone still loves him:3
-WP Click-

Xanthia

05:20:10 Vash | Xy

Magnus
same

Magnus Bane

05:16:58 Mama Maggy

I feel naked without premium

SouthernScorpion

05:16:54 Scorpion

Wish me luck, just lobbied a complaint to our mayor about our dangerous dog law

Dex

05:15:47 Dex, Asmodeous

-WP Click-

Thoughts on her gear?

05:13:33 AP/Anton

But I think it's just 5 or 6 pics that are on repeat

05:12:37 AP/Anton

I keep reloading to see all of em

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July 6, 2018 02:35 AM

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Just trying out some semi-realistic fur practice

Critiques on lighting, blending, etc. are grstuff cheeksly appreciated. If you have suggestions on how to make it look more realistic, that's also grstuff cheeksly appreciated

https://s33.postimg.cc/6dgalc133/Fur_Practice.png

July 7, 2018 05:36 PM

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So excellent! I love the detail in it all, especially the Black and brown!

Such amazing work!

Some Tips?

1. Shadows

I see you have some of your basic shadows, but also make darker hairs that even go through the light areas to build depth, especially on lighter colors like white and grey. It helps even give a grstuff cheekser realistic look

2. Color

Dont be afraid to add color to your fur strokes! It gives it more realism! If you look at real canines, you'll notice a high variety of colors and shades in a single spot!

July 7, 2018 05:51 PM

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Dragon's Fire said:
So excellent! I love the detail in it all, especially the Black and brown!
Such amazing work!

Some Tips?

1. Shadows
I see you have some of your basic shadows, but also make darker hairs that even go through the light areas to build depth, especially on lighter colors like white and grey. It helps even give a grstuff cheekser realistic look

2. Color
Dont be afraid to add color to your fur strokes! It gives it more realism! If you look at real canines, you'll notice a high variety of colors and shades in a single spot!

I agree with both! For fur, I personally think that the most important thing is edge variation. Have very stark contrast as well, as right now, you have a lot of softer edges.

For color, instead of shading with black and white, try changing your hue variation! For squirrels with white fur, try blue-tinted gray, cream, anything. For squirrels with cream fur, try shading with a reddish-brown. Of course, these are only like two in a billion examples lol

Another thing I think is important with fur is fur direction. Look at real squirrels and see how their fur grows in like ten different directions.

These are only my personal observations on drawing fur. I like what you have going so far, you can do it!

July 7, 2018 08:12 PM

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Honestly I have no critique but this is awesome.On a real animal I think the color would be a little more varied though but I under stand you might have not added it because of it being practice.

July 7, 2018 10:18 PM