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09:01:15 Andy/Kait [he/they]

that's really unfortunate. america sucks right now

Eye of Eternity

09:00:33 tern | they/he

hyunjin
ohhhh that sucks :(

09:00:28 Kneecap stealer

Both

09:00:07 Juicy Arm Boy

Huh

09:00:04 Andy/Kait [he/they]

detention center as in jail or immigrations

08:58:49 Kneecap stealer

Detention center actually

08:58:38 Kneecap stealer

It's a jail

Eye of Eternity

08:58:00 tern | they/he

hyunjin
i have no idea what that means but okay :'3

08:54:29 Kneecap stealer

Eye

Kay county, newkirk
That's all I can say

Eye of Eternity

08:40:22 tern | they/he

somebody better not take my topic while im working on it ill be so mad

08:35:57

Sleep,
Congratulations on your engagement!

Eye of Eternity

08:35:01 tern | they/he

eer
youre welcomeee :3

08:33:50 Juicy Arm Boy

Eyeguy
Thank youu <33

Eye of Eternity

08:33:29 tern | they/he

hyunjin
picked up?

eer
oooh but it looks cool :0

08:31:25 Juicy Arm Boy

So tired that I cant even render properly -Click-

08:30:03 Kneecap stealer

He'll be home on the 20th

08:29:50 Kneecap stealer

He proposed the day before he was picked up

Eye of Eternity

08:20:01 tern | they/he

hyunjin
ooooh epic :000 congratulationss :3

08:18:42 Kneecap stealer

I had become engaged :0 I shall become married soon

Eye of Eternity

08:16:46 tern | they/he

hyunjin
what? :0

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09:01:15 Andy/Kait [he/they]

that's really unfortunate. america sucks right now

Eye of Eternity

09:00:33 tern | they/he

hyunjin
ohhhh that sucks :(

09:00:28 Kneecap stealer

Both

09:00:07 Juicy Arm Boy

Huh

09:00:04 Andy/Kait [he/they]

detention center as in jail or immigrations

08:58:49 Kneecap stealer

Detention center actually

08:58:38 Kneecap stealer

It's a jail

Eye of Eternity

08:58:00 tern | they/he

hyunjin
i have no idea what that means but okay :'3

08:54:29 Kneecap stealer

Eye

Kay county, newkirk
That's all I can say

Eye of Eternity

08:40:22 tern | they/he

somebody better not take my topic while im working on it ill be so mad

08:35:57

Sleep,
Congratulations on your engagement!

Eye of Eternity

08:35:01 tern | they/he

eer
youre welcomeee :3

08:33:50 Juicy Arm Boy

Eyeguy
Thank youu <33

Eye of Eternity

08:33:29 tern | they/he

hyunjin
picked up?

eer
oooh but it looks cool :0

08:31:25 Juicy Arm Boy

So tired that I cant even render properly -Click-

08:30:03 Kneecap stealer

He'll be home on the 20th

08:29:50 Kneecap stealer

He proposed the day before he was picked up

Eye of Eternity

08:20:01 tern | they/he

hyunjin
ooooh epic :000 congratulationss :3

08:18:42 Kneecap stealer

I had become engaged :0 I shall become married soon

Eye of Eternity

08:16:46 tern | they/he

hyunjin
what? :0

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October 15, 2020 10:00 AM

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I need advice on how good this is because 
I don't know what to think I mean to me 
it looks bad and I should work more on 
it but then I think it's good and I 
should stop working on it.

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after

How does this look?

Edited at October 15, 2020 02:37 PM by Rose_Petal

October 15, 2020 10:10 AM

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I can't click on the link.

October 15, 2020 10:10 AM

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link doesn't work..

October 15, 2020 10:11 AM

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I fixed the problem

Edited at October 15, 2020 10:24 AM by Rose_Petal

October 15, 2020 10:24 AM

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I like it, your art looks great!

October 15, 2020 10:24 AM

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the blood could use a little more detail

October 15, 2020 10:25 AM

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Work on two layers (: if your not already.

lineart on top, coloring below. If you Change the refrence layer on bucket to the lineart, fill should still work(:

and blur the blood(:

overall, pretty nice ^^ good job

October 15, 2020 10:25 AM

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It's really pretty. I like it.

October 15, 2020 10:27 AM

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If you know how, you could try adding some shading and hilight to give it some extra detail ^^

October 15, 2020 10:28 AM

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I don't know a lot about art but I really like it! In my opinion I think a little bit more detail on the blood around the mouth would be nice :)

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