Wolf Play : Constructive Criticism

03:21:10 Scorpion

wrong chat

03:21:03 Scorpion

-WP Click-
Need them gone by tomorrow. priced to sell. females bred to high R high T sire.

Winterfell

03:20:54 Winter

Ew I got an es and a sv yuck

St. Cloverbeast

03:19:42 Will

Nothing quite like being nominated on the last possibly day, and hour, for senior awards 😂😭

I had to speed run my resume, examples, and statement loll

03:03:37 tiger\Owl|she\her

Yo i was just doing a bit of exploring and I found a pack from WoW that I never attacked. Probably because my wolves had low hp

03:02:16 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

EoE
Lol stop copying me/joking

03:01:50 tern | they/he

anyway back to class

Misaki

03:00:50 Miss | Misa | Halt

Goodness it's been a while! So many new faces online today!

03:00:39 tern | they/he

rat lord
no way i was trying to look at collar's too /silly

03:00:05 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

EoE
Same I was going to look at collars but I was so confused of why their pictures changed so much, then figured out what was going on after I went on my den page

03:00:03 tiger\Owl|she\her

If I was at school I would text my friend and I would have them pretend I was home sick and then I would jump out at them from the bathroom

02:59:23 Many moons, one me

Scorpion, I started with 23 and now I'm at 34 lol I've gained a whole 11 eggs

02:59:17 tiger\Owl|she\her

I’m just to lazy to pull pranks

02:58:43 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Moonfall
Yeah, it’s funny because every year I do that prank but they still fall for it lol I guess they really are fools 😂

02:58:20 tern | they/he

i went to go look at someone's avatar because they changed it i forgot theyre all squirrels 😔

02:57:52 tiger\Owl|she\her

-WP Click- Just read the nickname XDDDD

02:56:56 Scorpion

I've explored for hours and i have 10 lol

02:55:48 Many moons, one me

Owl
Wolf bowling sounds interesting actually

02:55:09 Many moons, one me

Lucky, I haven't done any pranks since I was about 14 and did the food coloring on bread before making a sandwich... My mother didn't react well and I got in trouble. She does now agree it was one of my better pranks

02:54:00 tiger\Owl|she\her

Howling*

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03:21:10 Scorpion

wrong chat

03:21:03 Scorpion

-WP Click-
Need them gone by tomorrow. priced to sell. females bred to high R high T sire.

Winterfell

03:20:54 Winter

Ew I got an es and a sv yuck

St. Cloverbeast

03:19:42 Will

Nothing quite like being nominated on the last possibly day, and hour, for senior awards 😂😭

I had to speed run my resume, examples, and statement loll

03:03:37 tiger\Owl|she\her

Yo i was just doing a bit of exploring and I found a pack from WoW that I never attacked. Probably because my wolves had low hp

03:02:16 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

EoE
Lol stop copying me/joking

03:01:50 tern | they/he

anyway back to class

Misaki

03:00:50 Miss | Misa | Halt

Goodness it's been a while! So many new faces online today!

03:00:39 tern | they/he

rat lord
no way i was trying to look at collar's too /silly

03:00:05 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

EoE
Same I was going to look at collars but I was so confused of why their pictures changed so much, then figured out what was going on after I went on my den page

03:00:03 tiger\Owl|she\her

If I was at school I would text my friend and I would have them pretend I was home sick and then I would jump out at them from the bathroom

02:59:23 Many moons, one me

Scorpion, I started with 23 and now I'm at 34 lol I've gained a whole 11 eggs

02:59:17 tiger\Owl|she\her

I’m just to lazy to pull pranks

02:58:43 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Moonfall
Yeah, it’s funny because every year I do that prank but they still fall for it lol I guess they really are fools 😂

02:58:20 tern | they/he

i went to go look at someone's avatar because they changed it i forgot theyre all squirrels 😔

02:57:52 tiger\Owl|she\her

-WP Click- Just read the nickname XDDDD

02:56:56 Scorpion

I've explored for hours and i have 10 lol

02:55:48 Many moons, one me

Owl
Wolf bowling sounds interesting actually

02:55:09 Many moons, one me

02:54:00 tiger\Owl|she\her

Howling*

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February 24, 2022 12:41 PM

Kortez

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My art has been looking awful lately. I have drawn this character 3 times now, and each attempt looks worse than the last. I need constructive crit, I don't care how brutal you are about it, I won't be hurt.

Feel free to redline!

Attempt 1

Attempt 2

Attempt 3

All (c) 243831/ Me

I have figured it out uwuwu thank you

Edited at March 18, 2022 05:32 PM by Excisus

February 24, 2022 02:48 PM

Former Pack

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ok so the last attempt looks grstuff cheeks!

the head on this first one is good, but what are you trying to do on the body?

the second one looks good but the head is a bit big if its what you want then it looks good also

Edited at February 24, 2022 02:49 PM by LucifersWolves

February 24, 2022 02:51 PM

Nezachii

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If you are alright with redlining and some tips (With the redline) I'll be up to help you? If not, that's fine. It's your artwork.

February 24, 2022 02:52 PM

Kortez

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Please do

Nez.ity said:

If you are alright with redlining and some tips (With the redline) I'll be up to help you? If not, that's fine. It's your artwork.

February 24, 2022 04:53 PM

Nezachii

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Doing attempt one because everything else looks lovely *^*. I do not draw canine, anymore--yes I used to dabble back in the //first joined// ages but hopefully, you can just y'know understand that ;). While I love how you decided to do three different ones, I feel like attempt one could have some touch to it-- in case you're feeling nice and give the commissioner something to stare at; not that you know have to. ANYWAYS!

You have that edgy style, where the fur sticks out the most- as I always say go big or go home-- your attempt one could be the " GO BIG" style;o. I love the side tongue and tight collar idea, so I decided to mimic( With your permission) the style and just went crazy with the fur( Pencil work can be MUCH easier when drawing fur, you should take advantage of this punk style because it's there for YOU to improve and grow, even if you are a chibi artist( Only seen your cheebs art).

In short terms, the eye details are the show and tell, usually, when I look at canine art my eyes land on the eyes, it's the first thing I want to see- the expression, the glare, the look. I know your look is more cartoonish which I can't do but hopefully, it's still helpful.

You can do whatever with this, I only did half the job because I got uncomfortable lol.

I'll slowly add more to this so I don't spam you because again, I'm no canine artist.

Redline: (c)Nezitystudio