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he's pretty and has a boost but probably not super useful. if you don't want him i would buy him though!
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Quick question for yall is he a keeper or should he be bones -WP Click-
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Spent 860 mush on explore moves and I'm now back up to 860 mush with a mere 490 moves left :)
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How is a majority of my team excellent at howling, yet are constantly terrible at howling in the druids circle?
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Here ye go >:)
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Lol, thank you.
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it's a good critter, very expressive! i'm just busy failing to do homework lol
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Ugh, my Critter. I don't think I've come across many OCs with Schadenfreude as a ruling character trait. ~w~
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Moon,
Thank you again!
the more I draw the better I get lol
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Looks fluffy!
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 St. Cloverbeast
09:44:30 Will
Does anyone here make frozen coffee?? Or have a good frozen drink liquid to ice ratio? ;^;
 Ezranian
09:40:51 ezra, he/him
snow-
he's pretty and has a boost but probably not super useful. if you don't want him i would buy him though!
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09:40:41 Will
Meep meep
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09:37:16 Kneecap stealer
I just ate angel hair pasta (the whole pot) and I'm stuffed and it makes me tired
 Sleep
09:36:17 Kneecap stealer
Night chat, I was kept awake until 4 in the morning (GT) and had to wake up at 7 for church
 Falling Snow
09:29:44 Snow
Quick question for yall is he a keeper or should he be bones -WP Click-
 Moonfall
09:19:32 Many moons, one me
Spent 860 mush on explore moves and I'm now back up to 860 mush with a mere 490 moves left :)
I love spring
 Moonfall
09:11:45 Many moons, one me
How is a majority of my team excellent at howling, yet are constantly terrible at howling in the druids circle?
 Wild Runners
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Moon,
Yup >:)
 Moonfall
08:45:07 Many moons, one me
Wild
Hehehe chaos kitty 😁
 TheFlyingKitten
08:29:22 Petri Dish/Dert
Crap, now I have the urge to come up with an OC based off the word Schadenfreude.
 Wild Runners
08:28:21 Stalking chat
Moon,
Here ye go >:)
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ezra

Lol, thank you.
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petri-
it's a good critter, very expressive! i'm just busy failing to do homework lol
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08:21:46 Petri Dish/Dert
Damn it, Critter killed Chat. >:c
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Ugh, my Critter. I don't think I've come across many OCs with Schadenfreude as a ruling character trait. ~w~
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Moon,
Thank you again!
the more I draw the better I get lol
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Wild
Looks fluffy!
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Critique?August 8, 2018 02:05 PM


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I'm looking for a critique on this. I made the character for Cun :p
I'm looking for critiques on mostly anatomy, but coloring as well.

https://s15.postimg.cc/p5ekn64l5/sketch1533754368467.png

Edited at August 8, 2018 04:01 PM by Wolf~Song
Critique?August 8, 2018 02:08 PM


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The head is very small as opposed to the body, particularly how thick the legs are, the chest us really large as well, which all makes the head look super small. I recommend looking up references to aid with body proportions.
Critique?August 8, 2018 02:10 PM


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Mistress Nyx said:
The head is very small as opposed to the body, particularly how thick the legs are, the chest us really large as well, which all makes the head look super small. I recommend looking up references to aid with body proportions.

Thank you! This is super helpful because I didn't notice that! I'll use more references next time :3
Critique?August 8, 2018 02:13 PM


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Mistress Nyx said:
The head is very small as opposed to the body, particularly how thick the legs are, the chest us really large as well, which all makes the head look super small. I recommend looking up references to aid with body proportions.

I agree with Nyx. You need to either make the head bigger or size down the chest legs and try to make the neck a tiny bit longer. The big legs could be an acceptance because if she is a strong character it will match.
Critique?August 8, 2018 02:15 PM


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Dragon’s Den said:



Mistress Nyx said:
The head is very small as opposed to the body, particularly how thick the legs are, the chest us really large as well, which all makes the head look super small. I recommend looking up references to aid with body proportions.

I agree with Nyx. You need to either make the head bigger or size down the chest legs and try to make the neck a tiny bit longer. The big legs could be an acceptance because if she is a strong character it will match.

I will next time! Thanks! I just started drawing big cats, so proportions are difficult. She's supposed to be a short and stumpy muscular character, so I did draw the large legs on purpose.
Critique?August 8, 2018 02:33 PM


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Wolf~Song said:


Dragon’s Den said:



Mistress Nyx said:
The head is very small as opposed to the body, particularly how thick the legs are, the chest us really large as well, which all makes the head look super small. I recommend looking up references to aid with body proportions.

I agree with Nyx. You need to either make the head bigger or size down the chest legs and try to make the neck a tiny bit longer. The big legs could be an acceptance because if she is a strong character it will match.

I will next time! Thanks! I just started drawing big cats, so proportions are difficult. She's supposed to be a short and stumpy muscular character, so I did draw the large legs on purpose.

Makes sense to me! Good job on the art tho, I suck at cats.
Critique?August 8, 2018 02:34 PM


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Dragon’s Den said:


Wolf~Song said:


Dragon’s Den said:



Mistress Nyx said:
The head is very small as opposed to the body, particularly how thick the legs are, the chest us really large as well, which all makes the head look super small. I recommend looking up references to aid with body proportions.

I agree with Nyx. You need to either make the head bigger or size down the chest legs and try to make the neck a tiny bit longer. The big legs could be an acceptance because if she is a strong character it will match.

I will next time! Thanks! I just started drawing big cats, so proportions are difficult. She's supposed to be a short and stumpy muscular character, so I did draw the large legs on purpose.

Makes sense to me! Good job on the art tho, I suck at cats.

Thank you! I really appreciate it. I can hardly do domestic cats, so I feel you XD
Critique?August 8, 2018 02:42 PM


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Overall I think you did a good job. c:
Critique?August 8, 2018 02:45 PM


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Cún. said:
Overall I think you did a good job. c:

Thanks! ^.^

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