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12:51:14 Lucky Ladybug

my cat stole my waffle :<

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Cloud, I sent you a green bead, but I don't have an orange one x')

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Should I change the head?

12:43:16 cloud (he/they)

T-T this sucks i still need a green bead and orange bead for this nechlace for my quest

12:41:25 Stalking chat

Should I try to make a dragon?

12:40:35 katy | beetle

actually, this 8th gen grandbaby has the closest stats to my starter yet. she's a AvW instead of ExW though, sadly.

12:39:29 katy | beetle

wild,
i know! i was so shocked. that's why i kept her bloodline going; but none of her pups have had quite as good of stats.

12:38:52 Stalking chat

Katy,
Surprising for a starter wolf, obedient+ExH+ExW

12:37:40 katy | beetle

wild,
the first wolf i posted was my starter alpha female, yeah :)

12:36:18 Stalking chat

advice*

12:36:04 Stalking chat

Katy,
Was that your alpha female?
If so that is crazy

12:34:54 Stalking chat

Katy,
Thanks for the advise!

12:34:31 katy | beetle

-WP Click-
eight gens into the bloodline, i'm just finally starting to use her grandbabies for explore again lol.

12:33:43 Caesar

buying 12 warriors stones felt exactly like taking 12 bullets right in the heart

12:33:24 katy | beetle

wild,
pricing questions generally do better in sales chat

12:33:12 katy | beetle

-WP Click-
there's a reason i keep her bloodline around xD she's just pixels yet i still love her.

12:32:33 Stalking chat

should I lower the price?

12:32:25 Stalking chat

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truly I hope someone breeds to him and not just myself

12:30:11 katy | beetle

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not exactly what i was breeding for, lol

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12:53:28

Smart cat :P

12:51:14 Lucky Ladybug

my cat stole my waffle :<

12:51:09

Cloud, I sent you a green bead, but I don't have an orange one x')

12:43:28 Stalking chat

-Click-

Should I change the head?

12:43:16 cloud (he/they)

T-T this sucks i still need a green bead and orange bead for this nechlace for my quest

12:41:25 Stalking chat

Should I try to make a dragon?

12:40:35 katy | beetle

actually, this 8th gen grandbaby has the closest stats to my starter yet. she's a AvW instead of ExW though, sadly.

12:39:29 katy | beetle

wild,
i know! i was so shocked. that's why i kept her bloodline going; but none of her pups have had quite as good of stats.

12:38:52 Stalking chat

Katy,
Surprising for a starter wolf, obedient+ExH+ExW

12:37:40 katy | beetle

wild,
the first wolf i posted was my starter alpha female, yeah :)

12:36:18 Stalking chat

advice*

12:36:04 Stalking chat

Katy,
Was that your alpha female?
If so that is crazy

12:34:54 Stalking chat

Katy,
Thanks for the advise!

12:34:31 katy | beetle

-WP Click-
eight gens into the bloodline, i'm just finally starting to use her grandbabies for explore again lol.

12:33:43 Caesar

buying 12 warriors stones felt exactly like taking 12 bullets right in the heart

12:33:24 katy | beetle

wild,
pricing questions generally do better in sales chat

12:33:12 katy | beetle

-WP Click-
there's a reason i keep her bloodline around xD she's just pixels yet i still love her.

12:32:33 Stalking chat

should I lower the price?

12:32:25 Stalking chat

-WP Click-

truly I hope someone breeds to him and not just myself

12:30:11 katy | beetle

-WP Click-
not exactly what i was breeding for, lol

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July 30, 2018 05:59 AM

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I was just messing around and I made this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/yhul59mm5/dog_2_red_merle.png

And this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/qaowjlu99/horsem.png

If anyone can't see^ that's a horse on a dark green and black background

I'm just looking for advice and stuff.

Edited at July 30, 2018 06:00 AM by Diggie

July 30, 2018 02:36 PM

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Horse

I can't see it

But the D ring for your bit is way too big

And the rest of the bridle is way to small

July 30, 2018 02:46 PM

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Well,for the leopard I would have added more details. The lines look straight, maybe fluff thru up a bit with some fur. For the paws, you could try something like this.

https://s15.postimg.cc/petz174uz/beach.png

Or

https://s15.postimg.cc/5wzblbsij/1532979343133.png

(Lineart by Kekeywolf. Devianart. com)

Then you could go in and give the leopard cartoon like eyes, sorta like the wolf above. Black dots make it look extremely basic and simple.

For the horse:

Well, first, try a lighter background. The animal is extremely hard to see,even with full brightness.

Try fixing the ear. Keep horse atomony in memory. Swoop the ear forward a bit. And the chin needs fixed a bit. Here..just look at this:

https://s15.postimg.cc/q6wn0glxn/1532979820954.png

I would possibly work on mane a bit too.

There is a strip of white by the chin that you should finish coloring in.

However, despite this all,I love your work! I can see great things coming from you in the future ^^

Edited at July 30, 2018 02:47 PM by Astrophel°^°

July 30, 2018 03:58 PM

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Thanks Astro and Midnight!

The top one is a red merle Amercian Staffordshire though, which is why the eyes are black

I'll change the toes a bit, maybe make the horse's background lighter.

I'll also change the chin, but currently I'm trying to decide what to work on next XD

July 30, 2018 06:33 PM

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Sorry if I sound rude but... I can't see the horse lol! The dogs paws could use some work, but other than that it looks super cute! Great Job!

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