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12:26:03 a rock in your shoe

my throat hurts

12:24:58

That's a good achievement, Bug!

12:24:21 Juicy Arm Boy

Lmao

12:24:07

Oof I'd feel bad if some of my German penpals played WP then xD

12:24:00 Shadz (he/him)

Buggo
Alrighty :3

12:23:55 Juicy Arm Boy

I know Russian too, but I’m not that fluent in it, just know some common phrases lol

12:23:24 Lucky Ladybug

Sow
Same! I ended up in honor society. I got bronze on the national german exam xD my proudest acheivement

12:23:14

But I also know Mandarin Chinese, Russian and a bit of Japanese

12:22:51 Many moons, one me

I just need 3 more and I've got a new team to train

12:22:49 Lucky Ladybug

Andy
we aren't supposed to since the mods can't mod other languages

12:22:18

You'd be fine I took German in Highschool, Buggy.

12:21:49 Lucky Ladybug

Hi Shadez! My class ends soon so I'll be poofing for a bit. I'll be back on in like maybe an hour?

12:21:38 Juicy Arm Boy

Sowelu
Dunno lol

12:21:32 Many moons, one me

I've gotten 3 obedient heroes this year,

12:21:26

True that, Moon

12:21:09 Lucky Ladybug

Sowelu
I can read and speak it, but my listening skills are poor xD So if I ever visit Germany they would have to write everything down for me lol

12:20:59 Juicy Arm Boy

Andy
We cant

12:20:08 Shadz (he/him)

Hi Buggo :0

12:20:03 Andy/Kait [he/they]

I dont think we can speak other languages in the chats (?)

12:19:59 Shadz (he/him)

Kitty
Mhm :3

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12:26:03 a rock in your shoe

my throat hurts

12:24:58

That's a good achievement, Bug!

12:24:21 Juicy Arm Boy

Lmao

12:24:07

Oof I'd feel bad if some of my German penpals played WP then xD

12:24:00 Shadz (he/him)

Buggo
Alrighty :3

12:23:55 Juicy Arm Boy

I know Russian too, but I’m not that fluent in it, just know some common phrases lol

12:23:24 Lucky Ladybug

Sow
Same! I ended up in honor society. I got bronze on the national german exam xD my proudest acheivement

12:23:14

But I also know Mandarin Chinese, Russian and a bit of Japanese

12:22:51 Many moons, one me

I just need 3 more and I've got a new team to train

12:22:49 Lucky Ladybug

Andy
we aren't supposed to since the mods can't mod other languages

12:22:18

You'd be fine I took German in Highschool, Buggy.

12:21:49 Lucky Ladybug

Hi Shadez! My class ends soon so I'll be poofing for a bit. I'll be back on in like maybe an hour?

12:21:38 Juicy Arm Boy

Sowelu
Dunno lol

12:21:32 Many moons, one me

I've gotten 3 obedient heroes this year,

12:21:26

True that, Moon

12:21:09 Lucky Ladybug

Sowelu
I can read and speak it, but my listening skills are poor xD So if I ever visit Germany they would have to write everything down for me lol

12:20:59 Juicy Arm Boy

Andy
We cant

12:20:08 Shadz (he/him)

Hi Buggo :0

12:20:03 Andy/Kait [he/they]

I dont think we can speak other languages in the chats (?)

12:19:59 Shadz (he/him)

Kitty
Mhm :3

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July 30, 2018 05:59 AM

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I was just messing around and I made this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/yhul59mm5/dog_2_red_merle.png

And this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/qaowjlu99/horsem.png

If anyone can't see^ that's a horse on a dark green and black background

I'm just looking for advice and stuff.

Edited at July 30, 2018 06:00 AM by Diggie

July 30, 2018 02:36 PM

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Horse

I can't see it

But the D ring for your bit is way too big

And the rest of the bridle is way to small

July 30, 2018 02:46 PM

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Well,for the leopard I would have added more details. The lines look straight, maybe fluff thru up a bit with some fur. For the paws, you could try something like this.

https://s15.postimg.cc/petz174uz/beach.png

Or

https://s15.postimg.cc/5wzblbsij/1532979343133.png

(Lineart by Kekeywolf. Devianart. com)

Then you could go in and give the leopard cartoon like eyes, sorta like the wolf above. Black dots make it look extremely basic and simple.

For the horse:

Well, first, try a lighter background. The animal is extremely hard to see,even with full brightness.

Try fixing the ear. Keep horse atomony in memory. Swoop the ear forward a bit. And the chin needs fixed a bit. Here..just look at this:

https://s15.postimg.cc/q6wn0glxn/1532979820954.png

I would possibly work on mane a bit too.

There is a strip of white by the chin that you should finish coloring in.

However, despite this all,I love your work! I can see great things coming from you in the future ^^

Edited at July 30, 2018 02:47 PM by Astrophel°^°

July 30, 2018 03:58 PM

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Thanks Astro and Midnight!

The top one is a red merle Amercian Staffordshire though, which is why the eyes are black

I'll change the toes a bit, maybe make the horse's background lighter.

I'll also change the chin, but currently I'm trying to decide what to work on next XD

July 30, 2018 06:33 PM

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Sorry if I sound rude but... I can't see the horse lol! The dogs paws could use some work, but other than that it looks super cute! Great Job!

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