Wolf Play : Criticism Needed

07:50:54 toe licker

DaMeows
just talking about gas prices. and how their to DAMN high.

07:50:04 tern | they/he

petri
no i fear not it's a drawfee episode
applebob seedbag is a headless horseman with an apple for a head

DaMeows

07:49:49

uhh im kinda new to this game what's going on?

07:49:20 tern | they/he

petri
ahh yeah gauze will probably help
though if your scabs arent already sealed over there is the chance the gauze might get sealed into the scabs :'0 trust me thats really bad

07:49:02 toe licker

TheFlyingKitten
lol...hhhhh but hey! he got my first letter! :D

07:48:27 Petri Dish/ENA Mum

Hunters
Wishful thinking gives me hope. We know it'd probably be shredded before it even got to the White House, lol.

07:47:58 Petri Dish/ENA Mum

tern
I dunno why, but you saying "applebob seedbag" made me think of that one SpongeBob episode where he gets a splinter in his thumb...

07:47:03 toe licker

TheFlyingKitten
lmao! XD we shall make a letter protest!! XD

07:46:38 Petri Dish/ENA Mum

Hunters
I believe in you and support the cause! XD

tern
Good ideas! I go to the doctor tomorrow and it's likely she might put gauze on my face then send me to CBT. ~_~

07:44:54 tern | they/he

oh god i just got viscerally reminded of applebob seedbag
i might have to rewatch that episode

petri
it really is
try either trimming your nails so they cant catch on anything, or wrapping cloth/paper towels around the tips of your fingers so they wont catch on your scabs?

07:44:52 toe licker

TheFlyingKitten
yeah, actually I'm currently writing a letter to the president about horse round-ups, and imm add some of the gas prices in there to, mwhehehehe

07:43:53 Petri Dish/ENA Mum

Hunters

I would really like to have prices go back down to a quarter and some raspberries. That would be lovely.

07:42:53 Petri Dish/ENA Mum

tern

Nine bucks is wack. And trust me, I know, but it's this thing I can't control. I scratch at an itch, and my nail gets caught on a loose edge and I can't stop myself from fixating on the loose end until it's gone. :(

07:42:02 toe licker

TheFlyingKitten
yeah! same!! my friend said that she paid one hundred forty something for a full tank as well! i swear my jaw was nearly through the ground!

07:41:09 tern | they/he

petri
same here
i saw on the news that its 9 bucks somewhere out there

hey so you shouldnt do that

07:40:42 Petri Dish/ENA Mum

Hunters

Friend of mine spend $149 for what I assume was a full tank. Crazy shit, crazy.

Lucky Rat

07:40:40 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Stupid
True, but like Th/h said I do mention that I am an inpatient person and if you don’t answer at least tell me that you’ll be busy or something

Wild Runners

07:39:49 Stalking chat

Th/h
I suppose

07:39:24 toe licker

TheFlyingKitten
me to!! I was going to mention that!

Tartarus

07:38:21 Husky

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07:50:54 toe licker

DaMeows
just talking about gas prices. and how their to DAMN high.

07:50:04 tern | they/he

petri
no i fear not it's a drawfee episode
applebob seedbag is a headless horseman with an apple for a head

DaMeows

07:49:49

uhh im kinda new to this game what's going on?

07:49:20 tern | they/he

petri
ahh yeah gauze will probably help
though if your scabs arent already sealed over there is the chance the gauze might get sealed into the scabs :'0 trust me thats really bad

07:49:02 toe licker

TheFlyingKitten
lol...hhhhh but hey! he got my first letter! :D

07:48:27 Petri Dish/ENA Mum

Hunters
Wishful thinking gives me hope. We know it'd probably be shredded before it even got to the White House, lol.

07:47:58 Petri Dish/ENA Mum

tern
I dunno why, but you saying "applebob seedbag" made me think of that one SpongeBob episode where he gets a splinter in his thumb...

07:47:03 toe licker

TheFlyingKitten
lmao! XD we shall make a letter protest!! XD

07:46:38 Petri Dish/ENA Mum

Hunters
I believe in you and support the cause! XD

tern
Good ideas! I go to the doctor tomorrow and it's likely she might put gauze on my face then send me to CBT. ~_~

07:44:54 tern | they/he

07:44:52 toe licker

TheFlyingKitten
yeah, actually I'm currently writing a letter to the president about horse round-ups, and imm add some of the gas prices in there to, mwhehehehe

07:43:53 Petri Dish/ENA Mum

Hunters

I would really like to have prices go back down to a quarter and some raspberries. That would be lovely.

07:42:53 Petri Dish/ENA Mum

07:42:02 toe licker

TheFlyingKitten
yeah! same!! my friend said that she paid one hundred forty something for a full tank as well! i swear my jaw was nearly through the ground!

07:41:09 tern | they/he

petri
same here
i saw on the news that its 9 bucks somewhere out there

hey so you shouldnt do that

07:40:42 Petri Dish/ENA Mum

Hunters

Friend of mine spend $149 for what I assume was a full tank. Crazy shit, crazy.

Lucky Rat

07:40:40 Rat/spooky/(he/him)

Stupid
True, but like Th/h said I do mention that I am an inpatient person and if you don’t answer at least tell me that you’ll be busy or something

Wild Runners

07:39:49 Stalking chat

Th/h
I suppose

07:39:24 toe licker

TheFlyingKitten
me to!! I was going to mention that!

Tartarus

07:38:21 Husky

Eye of Eternity
Thank you ^^

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November 9, 2017 10:25 PM

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https://s2.postimg.org/cm6tysat5/Screen_Shot_2017-11-09_at_11.21.15_PM.png

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Edited at November 9, 2017 10:28 PM by Aphmau clan

November 9, 2017 10:28 PM

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Not bad (\^-^/)

November 9, 2017 10:29 PM

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It's not really that bad in all honesty.

The tail and maybe the front leg on the side we're viewing could use a little work maybe, though the tail could actually depend on the breed of cat the drawing is of.

But overall it's pretty good

Edited at November 9, 2017 10:30 PM by Destinations End

November 10, 2017 01:28 AM

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The drawing style is cute! I love the anime-style eyes!

I do feel the anatomy could use a bit work. The hocks are too high, and the chest shouldn't be sticking out. Also, given the position of the cat's head, both ears should be facing forwards.

Here's a simple redline:

https://orig00.deviantart.net/8103/f/2017/313/d/4/cat_by_siarczek-dbtagw6.png

I suggest practicing to draw cats by using photos for references- it helps a ton, and over time you'll begin to see improvement in your work through lots of practice.

Keep it up! c:

January 1, 2018 09:11 PM

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Siarczek said:
The drawing style is cute! I love the anime-style eyes!

I do feel the anatomy could use a bit work. The hocks are too high, and the chest shouldn't be sticking out. Also, given the position of the cat's head, both ears should be facing forwards.

Here's a simple redline:
https://orig00.deviantart.net/8103/f/2017/313/d/4/cat_by_siarczek-dbtagw6.png

I suggest practicing to draw cats by using photos for references- it helps a ton, and over time you'll begin to see improvement in your work through lots of practice.

Keep it up! c:

This helps me out! Thank you

January 3, 2018 03:49 AM