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when they're defeated in battle and flee there's a small chance they'll get injured

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How do you injure your wolf?

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09:37:06 Winter

I've got this girlie I shoulda chucked in my raffle -WP Click-

09:13:14 Phoenix~

hola

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hi chat

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doodle are you a therian?? i know i am!! im always looking for other therinans.

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aura-
when they're defeated in battle and flee there's a small chance they'll get injured

08:58:09 He/They pronouns

Vote pretty please :3

-WP Click-

08:44:58 Aura/Pea

How do you injure your wolf?

08:35:10

Okay fire

08:32:37 Aura/Pea

I can see her now!

08:29:52

Think I fixed it

08:26:50 Aura/Pea

It's the same for me!

08:26:04 Husky

-Click-
Tartarus died

08:25:56

She's one with the darkness i guess lol

Night Raven College

08:24:24 NRC/Raven

Yeah she does unless I click her

08:24:22

Strange

08:23:50 tiger\Owl|she\her

yeah for me

08:22:33

Chat does Sakina in my den show up as a black void for yall?

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Hey! 👋

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NRC!

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April 16, 2018 09:07 PM

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Here's the image

https://s14.postimg.cc/4h7dmgk29/Random_Galaxy.png

For some reason, something's been really bothering me about this picture and I can't seem to figure out what.

All critiques are appreciated, or just tell me what you wish was changed

Edited at April 16, 2018 09:43 PM by Embers.

April 16, 2018 09:12 PM

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Maybe more stars? We don't really see them

Except for that, I don't see what could be wrong ^^

April 16, 2018 09:37 PM

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DarkCloudClan said:
Maybe more stars? We don't really see them
Except for that, I don't see what could be wrong ^^

Alright, lemme spam the stars and update the picture XD

Edit: UPDATED

Edited at April 16, 2018 09:43 PM by Embers.

April 16, 2018 11:31 PM

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Honestly, I really like it XD Maybe you need some subtle hue shifts in there? For example, since this art seems to be getting warmer the lighter it is, you should make the highlights a bit more red where the purple is brightest, if that makes any sense?

Or maybe it's because of the front? If you look at it some more, it seems to be more like a cloud in front than part of the galaxy because the stars are brighter around the purple. So maybe you can try to make the stars brighter there? I like it a lot (:

April 16, 2018 11:53 PM

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a m b e r said:
Honestly, I really like it XD Maybe you need some subtle hue shifts in there? For example, since this art seems to be getting warmer the lighter it is, you should make the highlights a bit more red where the purple is brightest, if that makes any sense?

Or maybe it's because of the front? If you look at it some more, it seems to be more like a cloud in front than part of the galaxy because the stars are brighter around the purple. So maybe you can try to make the stars brighter there? I like it a lot (:

XD Thanks, let me update it again

April 16, 2018 11:55 PM

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I really like it! Possibly a couple other colors blended? Lighter blues and brighter pinks maybe. Just a subtle change.

April 17, 2018 12:48 AM

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Maybe if you make it a bit lighter?

April 17, 2018 01:48 AM

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I love It! I don't know much about art, but the purple cloud/nebula looks a little on the denser side.

Still, it's really beautiful! :D

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