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12:04:32 Many moons, one me

I just got into a fight with my mother and now my orange girl kitty refuses to leave my side

12:02:21 evebot

Seems so. Can you please put it in the bug forum?

Siku of Kinapak

12:01:05 Siku

Hmm. Hot spring fed everyone but didn't heal everyone. DH healed to 100 instead of 150. A few other wolves didn't heal at all. Is this a new glitch?

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11:41:39 Toliska, Desti, Coy

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11:12:51 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

@Sir skales thanks may take you up on an offer

Eye of Eternity

11:09:57 tern | they/he

andy
i can imagine :'0
awww poor baby :(

11:04:16 Andy [he/they]

Scooby has been squealing every time I stand up because he was there when i first fell over from the Hypotension -_-

11:03:03 Andy [he/they]

Tern

Yeah it was horrible lol. And thanks!

Eye of Eternity

11:01:00 tern | they/he

andy
ohhh yeah thats a nasty combination
glad youre doing better now though ^^

10:59:03 Andy [he/they]

Tern

Im doing way better now! Low blood pressure and dehydration, pretty much.

Eye of Eternity

10:55:43 tern | they/he

andy
oh geez are you okay?

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10:55:03 Toliska, Desti, Coy

@Nin
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My pms are open if you like

10:54:05 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

@Sir skales maybe and welcome

10:53:59 Andy [he/they]

Just got back from the ER. Woohoo

Eye of Eternity

10:53:54 tern | they/he

i cant tell if i love or hate the moon faced man hes so weird he gives me bad vibes but in such an endearing way??

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10:48:52 Toliska, Desti, Coy

@Nin
Im sorry your only okayish. Do you want to talk about it

Thank you

10:45:53 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

@sir skales eh okayish hope you feel better

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10:42:29 Toliska, Desti, Coy

@Nin
Not very good read now. I am really stressed and in lots of pain.

How are you doing though

10:40:26 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

@sir skales how are you?

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10:40:13 Toliska, Desti, Coy

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12:04:32 Many moons, one me

I just got into a fight with my mother and now my orange girl kitty refuses to leave my side

12:02:21 evebot

Seems so. Can you please put it in the bug forum?

Siku of Kinapak

12:01:05 Siku

Hmm. Hot spring fed everyone but didn't heal everyone. DH healed to 100 instead of 150. A few other wolves didn't heal at all. Is this a new glitch?

Destinations End

11:41:39 Toliska, Desti, Coy

Back

11:12:51 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

@Sir skales thanks may take you up on an offer

Eye of Eternity

11:09:57 tern | they/he

andy
i can imagine :'0
awww poor baby :(

11:04:16 Andy [he/they]

Scooby has been squealing every time I stand up because he was there when i first fell over from the Hypotension -_-

11:03:03 Andy [he/they]

Tern

Yeah it was horrible lol. And thanks!

Eye of Eternity

11:01:00 tern | they/he

andy
ohhh yeah thats a nasty combination
glad youre doing better now though ^^

10:59:03 Andy [he/they]

Tern

Im doing way better now! Low blood pressure and dehydration, pretty much.

Eye of Eternity

10:55:43 tern | they/he

andy
oh geez are you okay?

Destinations End

10:55:03 Toliska, Desti, Coy

@Nin
<3
My pms are open if you like

10:54:05 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

@Sir skales maybe and welcome

10:53:59 Andy [he/they]

Just got back from the ER. Woohoo

Eye of Eternity

10:53:54 tern | they/he

i cant tell if i love or hate the moon faced man hes so weird he gives me bad vibes but in such an endearing way??

Destinations End

10:48:52 Toliska, Desti, Coy

@Nin
Im sorry your only okayish. Do you want to talk about it

Thank you

10:45:53 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

@sir skales eh okayish hope you feel better

Destinations End

10:42:29 Toliska, Desti, Coy

@Nin
Not very good read now. I am really stressed and in lots of pain.

How are you doing though

10:40:26 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

@sir skales how are you?

Destinations End

10:40:13 Toliska, Desti, Coy

Hello Nin :)

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November 9, 2017 10:25 PM

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https://s2.postimg.org/cm6tysat5/Screen_Shot_2017-11-09_at_11.21.15_PM.png

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Edited at November 9, 2017 10:28 PM by Aphmau clan

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November 9, 2017 10:28 PM

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Not bad (\^-^/)

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November 9, 2017 10:29 PM

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It's not really that bad in all honesty.

The tail and maybe the front leg on the side we're viewing could use a little work maybe, though the tail could actually depend on the breed of cat the drawing is of.

But overall it's pretty good

Edited at November 9, 2017 10:30 PM by Destinations End

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November 10, 2017 01:28 AM

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The drawing style is cute! I love the anime-style eyes!

I do feel the anatomy could use a bit work. The hocks are too high, and the chest shouldn't be sticking out. Also, given the position of the cat's head, both ears should be facing forwards.

Here's a simple redline:

https://orig00.deviantart.net/8103/f/2017/313/d/4/cat_by_siarczek-dbtagw6.png

I suggest practicing to draw cats by using photos for references- it helps a ton, and over time you'll begin to see improvement in your work through lots of practice.

Keep it up! c:

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January 1, 2018 09:11 PM

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Siarczek said:
The drawing style is cute! I love the anime-style eyes!

I do feel the anatomy could use a bit work. The hocks are too high, and the chest shouldn't be sticking out. Also, given the position of the cat's head, both ears should be facing forwards.

Here's a simple redline:
https://orig00.deviantart.net/8103/f/2017/313/d/4/cat_by_siarczek-dbtagw6.png

I suggest practicing to draw cats by using photos for references- it helps a ton, and over time you'll begin to see improvement in your work through lots of practice.

Keep it up! c:

This helps me out! Thank you

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January 3, 2018 03:49 AM

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Aww so cool!

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