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Because I thought I had pressed 'Breed'
because earlier I had pressed 'Sell'
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by accident

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why is he so majestic oml

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annie 2014 my beloved

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I'm doing good! Feeling oddly energetic even though I didn't get much sleep XD

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Dawn,
I'm doing good, you?

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paws for my pretty boy?
I'm thinking about getting him a tourmaline dye, considering it looks just BEAUTIFUL on him :D

05:59:44 Dawn

DD
How are you :D

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Rody,
yeah I'm so glad it was Winter,
and not anybody else (Well there are a few people I trust alot on here though)

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Dawn,
Hello!

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Hello chat!!

05:55:22 He/They pronouns

that*

Master Darkfire

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Hehehehehehe I am demon 😈

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Darkfire,
I'm scared to click tgat, the numbers are scary

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dark
ok yeah you get paws for that

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wild
honestly, winter is a good person to accidentally sell a wolf to

Master Darkfire

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-WP Click- Paws?

Master Darkfire

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Yay!! Wild you got him back!

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Rody,
yeah I was scared I didn't want to loose him since he was born in my pack lol

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Because I thought I had pressed 'Breed'
because earlier I had pressed 'Sell'
instead of 'Breed'
by accident

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wild
actually that sounds terrifying but at least you got him back

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July 30, 2018 05:59 AM

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I was just messing around and I made this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/yhul59mm5/dog_2_red_merle.png

And this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/qaowjlu99/horsem.png

If anyone can't see^ that's a horse on a dark green and black background

I'm just looking for advice and stuff.

Edited at July 30, 2018 06:00 AM by Diggie

July 30, 2018 02:36 PM

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Horse

I can't see it

But the D ring for your bit is way too big

And the rest of the bridle is way to small

July 30, 2018 02:46 PM

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Well,for the leopard I would have added more details. The lines look straight, maybe fluff thru up a bit with some fur. For the paws, you could try something like this.

https://s15.postimg.cc/petz174uz/beach.png

Or

https://s15.postimg.cc/5wzblbsij/1532979343133.png

(Lineart by Kekeywolf. Devianart. com)

Then you could go in and give the leopard cartoon like eyes, sorta like the wolf above. Black dots make it look extremely basic and simple.

For the horse:

Well, first, try a lighter background. The animal is extremely hard to see,even with full brightness.

Try fixing the ear. Keep horse atomony in memory. Swoop the ear forward a bit. And the chin needs fixed a bit. Here..just look at this:

https://s15.postimg.cc/q6wn0glxn/1532979820954.png

I would possibly work on mane a bit too.

There is a strip of white by the chin that you should finish coloring in.

However, despite this all,I love your work! I can see great things coming from you in the future ^^

Edited at July 30, 2018 02:47 PM by Astrophel°^°

July 30, 2018 03:58 PM

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Thanks Astro and Midnight!

The top one is a red merle Amercian Staffordshire though, which is why the eyes are black

I'll change the toes a bit, maybe make the horse's background lighter.

I'll also change the chin, but currently I'm trying to decide what to work on next XD

July 30, 2018 06:33 PM

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Sorry if I sound rude but... I can't see the horse lol! The dogs paws could use some work, but other than that it looks super cute! Great Job!

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