Heyo! I'm looking for some critique on this. It's a gift and I feel it's really off. Thanks!
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Winter Month: 1 
Night 
Blizzard Moon: 
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| The Rat Lord |
| EoE Lol thanks!! Moonfall Yeah same like why does he need me?? |
| Eye of Eternity |
| bjake you have too many albinos /silly he looks so cool though :00 very spooky |
| BJake |
| Guys!! Look at the albino fernweh gifted meeee qwq I just finished adding decor and gear |
| Moonfall |
| Rat Lord the only time I met a bishop was when I had my confirmation several years ago... Why the heck would he want to talk to you? I'm trying to think of reasons for a personal visit and I've got nothing. If it's what Eye is thinking, I'm with them. |
| Eye of Eternity |
| dawn ooh nice :3 we do love a nice community rat lord it better not be a meeting just to tell you to go back to church if it is ill go punch that bishop personally /silly |
| Sir3n |
| New roleplay! -WP Click- The forest is dying... But why? Come join to unlock hidden truths of the isle! |
| The Rat Lord |
| EoE They got smart/silly Evergreen That’s a reasonable thing to go I’d go to church if my grandma was there |
| Black Dawn Den |
| Well, coming from a Baptist...it's pretty chill. I like my church because it's small and I know everyone. I like the bonds I've made with people and the people there are very nice and genuine. |
| Eye of Eternity |
| ive been in a church twice in my life and once was to sing stacy's mom for karaoke so,,, i have no idea what the actual vibe of a church is |
| EvergreenHills |
| I go to church when I’m forced to. The bread is pretty fire ( I don’t know what it’s called D: ) the only reason I like church is so that I can spend time with my grandma though |
| The Rat Lord |
| EoE Nah they know I won’t be there, I avoid church like covid 19 lol |
| Eye of Eternity |
| rat lord yeah thats terrifying having to go to church at 7:30 pm just for a meeting is so stupid though can they not wait until sunday or something??? when you'd already be there?? i assume?? |
| EvergreenHills |
| I genuinely don’t know how to respond to this pm what the actual fuck |
| The Rat Lord |
| EoE Luckily I just have to go to church for the meeting I’d be way more freaked out if he wanted to talk to me in my house |
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| Alliance Battles |
| Challenges |
 | Western Rattlesnake : -2 |
| Marten : -3 |
| Snapping Turtle : +4 |
| Chatbox |
| The Rat Lord |
| EoE Lol thanks!! Moonfall Yeah same like why does he need me?? |
| Eye of Eternity |
| bjake you have too many albinos /silly he looks so cool though :00 very spooky |
| BJake |
| Guys!! Look at the albino fernweh gifted meeee qwq I just finished adding decor and gear |
| Moonfall |
| Rat Lord the only time I met a bishop was when I had my confirmation several years ago... Why the heck would he want to talk to you? I'm trying to think of reasons for a personal visit and I've got nothing. If it's what Eye is thinking, I'm with them. |
| Eye of Eternity |
| dawn ooh nice :3 we do love a nice community rat lord it better not be a meeting just to tell you to go back to church if it is ill go punch that bishop personally /silly |
| Sir3n |
| New roleplay! -WP Click- The forest is dying... But why? Come join to unlock hidden truths of the isle! |
| The Rat Lord |
| EoE They got smart/silly Evergreen That’s a reasonable thing to go I’d go to church if my grandma was there |
| Black Dawn Den |
| Well, coming from a Baptist...it's pretty chill. I like my church because it's small and I know everyone. I like the bonds I've made with people and the people there are very nice and genuine. |
| Eye of Eternity |
| ive been in a church twice in my life and once was to sing stacy's mom for karaoke so,,, i have no idea what the actual vibe of a church is |
| EvergreenHills |
| I go to church when I’m forced to. The bread is pretty fire ( I don’t know what it’s called D: ) the only reason I like church is so that I can spend time with my grandma though |
| The Rat Lord |
| EoE Nah they know I won’t be there, I avoid church like covid 19 lol |
| Eye of Eternity |
| rat lord yeah thats terrifying having to go to church at 7:30 pm just for a meeting is so stupid though can they not wait until sunday or something??? when you'd already be there?? i assume?? |
| EvergreenHills |
| I genuinely don’t know how to respond to this pm what the actual fuck |
| The Rat Lord |
| EoE Luckily I just have to go to church for the meeting I’d be way more freaked out if he wanted to talk to me in my house |
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