Wolf Play : Critique?

-WP Click- NO i did not think shed die this young :( and a day befor my birth day and of my loved wolf's doing so will be not put in graves till I forgive the rudeness of this action like come 'on really?

Feiella

09:53:35 Pack of Sharp Snap

Serpents
And I sometimes send you names for wolves when I'm more awake and less asleep

Sir3n

09:53:23 Sirens Alluring

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The forest is dying... But why? Come join to unlock hidden truths of the isle!

Vax

09:52:20 a rock in your shoe

what's with these homies possessing my phone

Owlstar

09:52:10 tiger\Owl|she\her

I'm just getting more from the wolf party

Vax

09:52:06 a rock in your shoe

I meant weezed

Vax

09:51:57 a rock in your shoe

i just weezer

Doodle Dragon

09:51:29 He/They pronouns

Anyways, bye chat! I gotta change classes ToT I'll be back around 11-ish? :p

Serpents

09:51:13 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

I have to many snaps Im slowly out of names XD or was to name them named one resent one Asphalt... her mum is tarmac..... im out of pitch black things,

Owlstar

09:49:58 tiger\Owl|she\her

i suck at naming wolves but i still try

Doodle Dragon

09:49:33 He/They pronouns

Fei,
Dang ToT

Feiella

09:49:05 Pack of Sharp Snap

Dragon
I don't know...I think I gave up keeping track.

It's like a damn hydra. Remove some wolves then more replace them. It never ends.

Some even lived to age 23

Serpents

09:47:47 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

been working on naming my unnamed wolves snap and non snap...

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09:56:18 Pack of Sharp Snap

Serpents
Sleep deprived me is not best. You don't want sleep deprived Feiella. I just got it under control

Owlstar

09:56:03 tiger\Owl|she\her

that is young very sad :(

Serpents

09:55:01 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

should get up and get ready

Serpents

09:54:13 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

@demon could use some XD and I mean sleep deprived names may be fun

Serpents

09:53:43 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

Feiella

09:53:35 Pack of Sharp Snap

Serpents
And I sometimes send you names for wolves when I'm more awake and less asleep

Sir3n

09:53:23 Sirens Alluring

New roleplay! -WP Click-
The forest is dying... But why? Come join to unlock hidden truths of the isle!

Vax

09:52:20 a rock in your shoe

what's with these homies possessing my phone

Owlstar

09:52:10 tiger\Owl|she\her

I'm just getting more from the wolf party

Vax

09:52:06 a rock in your shoe

I meant weezed

Vax

09:51:57 a rock in your shoe

i just weezer

Doodle Dragon

09:51:29 He/They pronouns

Anyways, bye chat! I gotta change classes ToT I'll be back around 11-ish? :p

Serpents

09:51:13 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

I have to many snaps Im slowly out of names XD or was to name them named one resent one Asphalt... her mum is tarmac..... im out of pitch black things,

Owlstar

09:49:58 tiger\Owl|she\her

i suck at naming wolves but i still try

Doodle Dragon

09:49:33 He/They pronouns

Fei,
Dang ToT

Feiella

09:49:05 Pack of Sharp Snap

Dragon
I don't know...I think I gave up keeping track.

It's like a damn hydra. Remove some wolves then more replace them. It never ends.

Some even lived to age 23

Serpents

09:47:47 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

been working on naming my unnamed wolves snap and non snap...

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Critique?

July 30, 2018 05:59 AM

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I was just messing around and I made this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/yhul59mm5/dog_2_red_merle.png

And this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/qaowjlu99/horsem.png

If anyone can't see^ that's a horse on a dark green and black background

I'm just looking for advice and stuff.

Edited at July 30, 2018 06:00 AM by Diggie

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July 30, 2018 02:36 PM

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Horse

I can't see it

But the D ring for your bit is way too big

And the rest of the bridle is way to small

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July 30, 2018 02:46 PM

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Well,for the leopard I would have added more details. The lines look straight, maybe fluff thru up a bit with some fur. For the paws, you could try something like this.

https://s15.postimg.cc/petz174uz/beach.png

https://s15.postimg.cc/5wzblbsij/1532979343133.png

(Lineart by Kekeywolf. Devianart. com)

Then you could go in and give the leopard cartoon like eyes, sorta like the wolf above. Black dots make it look extremely basic and simple.

For the horse:

Well, first, try a lighter background. The animal is extremely hard to see,even with full brightness.

Try fixing the ear. Keep horse atomony in memory. Swoop the ear forward a bit. And the chin needs fixed a bit. Here..just look at this:

https://s15.postimg.cc/q6wn0glxn/1532979820954.png

I would possibly work on mane a bit too.

There is a strip of white by the chin that you should finish coloring in.

However, despite this all,I love your work! I can see great things coming from you in the future ^^

Edited at July 30, 2018 02:47 PM by Astrophel°^°

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July 30, 2018 03:58 PM

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Thanks Astro and Midnight!

The top one is a red merle Amercian Staffordshire though, which is why the eyes are black

I'll change the toes a bit, maybe make the horse's background lighter.

I'll also change the chin, but currently I'm trying to decide what to work on next XD

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July 30, 2018 06:33 PM

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Sorry if I sound rude but... I can't see the horse lol! The dogs paws could use some work, but other than that it looks super cute! Great Job!

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