Wolf Play : Critique?

Oh my goodness I just gambled this cutie

-WP Click-

I wasn't expecting to get anything good, but now I need to give it a good think on if I want to make her an explore wolf or not

Amygdala

12:54:48 Amy/Anpmygdala

Your pup has won in 5 moves.

Well atleast he won i suppose 😅

Siku of Kinapak

12:53:59 Siku

thanks Eve. goodnight to you too =)

SixBears

12:53:09 evebot

Ok, thank you. Have a good night!

Siku of Kinapak

12:52:53 Siku

Nope. It's still glitched.

Siku of Kinapak

12:51:17 Siku

checking...

SixBears

12:50:56 evebot

I want to try something real quick. Can you try to access the wolf page buttons now?

Siku of Kinapak

12:50:06 Siku

I am. But I'm about to log off in just a few minutes.
Do you have another question about the glitch?

SixBears

12:47:13 evebot

Is Siku of Kinapak still on?

Sateda

12:44:12

I don't think a Poor wrestler could've done worse actually.

Sateda

12:42:39

This ExW pup of mine is going straight to the meat grinder when FMC is over. Had me at 3/3 wins the first day and now she's losing 2/3 :)

Serpents

12:42:31 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

keep needing to explore so I can get gear and decor here.... need all the bird decor and the pink gear(pink pansy and stuff)

Ninjago Realm

12:38:19 Waterfall,Zane,Nya

oh I forgot my boy Zane.... XD then again I only have snow... thats all I can think of for him or icy/colder things

Pink kitty🐈

12:38:17 Kneecap stealer

Same for orchid petal

Refresh

You must be a registered member for more
than 1 day before you can use our chatbox.

Challenges

Hourly Damage Variances

	Death Adder : 0
	Alligator : +3
	Sun Bear : +1

Chatbox

Pink kitty🐈

02:18:30 Kneecap stealer

Sje gave duds=her kids are turned into bone soup

Pink kitty🐈

02:03:37 Kneecap stealer

How is mine in labor at 87 hours but yours isn't at 92 hours what-

Pink kitty🐈

02:02:49 Kneecap stealer

After forever of waiting :'D and let's not even mention how much longer I gotta be awake JUST to get enough mush to buy a feather to pop hee

Ghoulish

02:01:45

I’m gonna crash kitty is urs in labour?

Pink kitty🐈

01:59:57 Kneecap stealer

Only took fucking forever

Pink kitty🐈

01:59:47 Kneecap stealer

-WP Click-

Finally

starrii-featherz

01:12:14 starrii, Lucida, Hex

Oh my goodness I just gambled this cutie

-WP Click-

I wasn't expecting to get anything good, but now I need to give it a good think on if I want to make her an explore wolf or not

Amygdala

12:54:48 Amy/Anpmygdala

Your pup has won in 5 moves.

Well atleast he won i suppose 😅

Siku of Kinapak

12:53:59 Siku

thanks Eve. goodnight to you too =)

SixBears

12:53:09 evebot

Ok, thank you. Have a good night!

Siku of Kinapak

12:52:53 Siku

Nope. It's still glitched.

Siku of Kinapak

12:51:17 Siku

checking...

SixBears

12:50:56 evebot

I want to try something real quick. Can you try to access the wolf page buttons now?

Siku of Kinapak

12:50:06 Siku

I am. But I'm about to log off in just a few minutes.
Do you have another question about the glitch?

SixBears

12:47:13 evebot

Is Siku of Kinapak still on?

Sateda

12:44:12

I don't think a Poor wrestler could've done worse actually.

Sateda

12:42:39

This ExW pup of mine is going straight to the meat grinder when FMC is over. Had me at 3/3 wins the first day and now she's losing 2/3 :)

Serpents

12:42:31 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

keep needing to explore so I can get gear and decor here.... need all the bird decor and the pink gear(pink pansy and stuff)

Ninjago Realm

12:38:19 Waterfall,Zane,Nya

oh I forgot my boy Zane.... XD then again I only have snow... thats all I can think of for him or icy/colder things

Pink kitty🐈

12:38:17 Kneecap stealer

Same for orchid petal

Refresh

You must be a member for more than 1 day before you can chat.

Forums

→ WolfPlay is a fun game! Sign Up Now! ←

Forums > Artwork > Art Help

Critique?

June 17, 2018 01:25 PM

Former Pack

Neutral

Posts:0
#753472
Give Award

Heya, I was hoping for some critique on this!
https://image.ibb.co/my78pd/04_B80_E15_8317_4_AFD_A3_CC_39_B9_AB3_ACB6_C.png

Critique?

June 17, 2018 01:30 PM

bluebird

Neutral

Posts:309
#753479
Give Award

It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

Critique?

June 17, 2018 01:31 PM

Former Pack

Neutral

Posts:0
#753484
Give Award

ThunderousSymphonies said:
It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

Thanks! I'm fixing now!

Critique?

June 17, 2018 01:39 PM

Former Pack

Neutral

Posts:0
#753501
Give Award

https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

Critique?

June 17, 2018 01:54 PM

Former Pack

Neutral

Posts:0
#753537
Give Award

It is gorgeous, but to make it more eye catching, I would recommend more shadow and more light.

The shading is very dull, but that can be easily fixed!!!

Other than that, it is a stunning piece of artwork!

Critique?

June 21, 2018 05:37 PM

Former Pack

Neutral

Posts:0
#763399
Give Award

I would make the eyes larger and with a slightly more defined shape, along with the nose, and make the muzzle and ears a little sharper and the chin a little bigger.

https://image.ibb.co/nq4oVT/advice.png

https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

By the way, I love your colouring! I can't colour for anything!

Critique?

June 22, 2018 11:30 PM

Former Pack

Neutral

Posts:0
#766096
Give Award

I would just say work a little with the direction the fur flows in, and the lighting on the snout is a little askew (I would suggest a slightly sharper angle]

Forums > Artwork > Art Help

Refresh