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05:36:50 tern | they/he

these candies suck </3 i like them but they suck

05:32:47 AsStraightAsMySpine

Those gorgeous gorgeous stars

05:31:18

Praise those stars

05:30:54 Will

The stars aligned
All so I could get a vacuum 😂🤌
And I'm very happy about it

05:30:04

Damn five year warranty too?? You got a deal

05:29:49 AsStraightAsMySpine

Will
Oh whattt :0 that was an awesome deal holy cow :0

05:29:32 Will

@Ever

Exactly!
Plus, a five year warranty?? Oh hell yeah I'll take it lol

05:27:25 AsStraightAsMySpine

Will
Ayyy that’s nice :D that’s a huge amount of money saved :0

05:26:45 Will

I got a $300 vacuum for $170 🐌

My family is not impressed 💔
But man I'm so proud and happy I got the deal 😭😭 because no way a vacuum this good/easy to use was in my budget.

05:26:22 AsStraightAsMySpine

Also ignore the contact name that’s not even his name it’s just an inside joke twt

05:25:16 AsStraightAsMySpine

-Click- No he’s alive trust he’s just tired

05:10:35 EGay

Hm maybe not though I wouldn't personally wear it

05:10:21 EGay

Ever, agreed, gimme

05:08:02 AsStraightAsMySpine

Delphine’s outfit is peak

05:04:24

I hate it

05:03:17 tern | they/he

postal
a vampire

05:02:51

The fuck is a Delphine

05:00:40

Ev
Betrayal

04:59:50 AsStraightAsMySpine

Feyfey
I don’t know </3

04:57:10

Ev
How could you 🫪

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05:36:50 tern | they/he

these candies suck </3 i like them but they suck

05:32:47 AsStraightAsMySpine

Those gorgeous gorgeous stars

05:31:18

Praise those stars

05:30:54 Will

The stars aligned
All so I could get a vacuum 😂🤌
And I'm very happy about it

05:30:04

Damn five year warranty too?? You got a deal

05:29:49 AsStraightAsMySpine

Will
Oh whattt :0 that was an awesome deal holy cow :0

05:29:32 Will

@Ever

Exactly!
Plus, a five year warranty?? Oh hell yeah I'll take it lol

05:27:25 AsStraightAsMySpine

Will
Ayyy that’s nice :D that’s a huge amount of money saved :0

05:26:45 Will

I got a $300 vacuum for $170 🐌

My family is not impressed 💔
But man I'm so proud and happy I got the deal 😭😭 because no way a vacuum this good/easy to use was in my budget.

05:26:22 AsStraightAsMySpine

Also ignore the contact name that’s not even his name it’s just an inside joke twt

05:25:16 AsStraightAsMySpine

-Click- No he’s alive trust he’s just tired

05:10:35 EGay

Hm maybe not though I wouldn't personally wear it

05:10:21 EGay

Ever, agreed, gimme

05:08:02 AsStraightAsMySpine

Delphine’s outfit is peak

05:04:24

I hate it

05:03:17 tern | they/he

postal
a vampire

05:02:51

The fuck is a Delphine

05:00:40

Ev
Betrayal

04:59:50 AsStraightAsMySpine

Feyfey
I don’t know </3

04:57:10

Ev
How could you 🫪

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March 23, 2024 10:21 PM

Zeraphia

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Hello hello! To kinda keep the actual story unhindered, comments can go here! Thank you!

Story Link: https://wolfplaygame.com/forums.php?f=45&t=90323

Edited at March 23, 2024 11:27 PM by Zeraphia

March 24, 2024 05:36 PM

distant-lands

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i only have read the first chapter so far but MY GOD?? the way you perfectly set the scene is so good, i could picture exactly where Varian was and how he was feeling D: so goood, i can't wait to impulse read all of it right now

March 24, 2024 05:37 PM

Zeraphia

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OH Geez XD

well, I definitely welcome feedback! Help me get better in writing. :3

imma... go eat dinner. XD

March 24, 2024 05:51 PM

distant-lands

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i'm not a writer myself, just an avid reader so feedback is not my forte xD it looks great to me though! i especially like how you seperate the speech from the other text so it's easier to read.