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I don't study XDD I'm to lazy
 Hurry
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I think those videos that are like "study with me" are pretty good motivators ^^ Or they can help me measure how much I studied in a day. I usually put on 12 or 10 hours and I don't usually finish them, but I can measure if I studied like 2,3,4,5,6 or so hours in total that day
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Owlstar
I have faith in you ^^ I did 12 hours of study for my tests and ive been nervous to look at the scores and somehow they are the best scores ive gotten out of all of them including my essay!
 Owlstar
07:29:33 tiger\Owl|she\her
just finished the test!! I'm not even gonna look at my grades because I REALLY don't want to know what I got XDDD it's probably fine but no idea
 Xanthia
07:15:43 Vash | Xy
I'm not happy >.< I'm so tired😭 I want to sleep but my mom told me to do the dishes
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Sky
I recall you from last year, Do not recall how bright the palette was definitely a good morning xD
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Heyo
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Hey y'all <3 good mornin
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07:01:51 Juicy Arm Boy
Aight im gonna go :3 bye chat !
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Im clocked in ;--;
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Owl
Oh shit
Uh

Nah you’ll be fineee
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263/400 mushies to get a viti
 Owlstar
06:51:20 tiger\Owl|she\her
I kinda forgot most of the stuff...
 Owlstar
06:51:01 tiger\Owl|she\her
I'm so cooked...
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Psky
Hi ! How are ya?

Owl
Pfft Im sure you’ll do great
 Owlstar
06:49:48 tiger\Owl|she\her
I have to take a math quiz now 😭😭😭 I'm so bad at math 😭😭
 MLadySkylar
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Hi hi ^°^
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Hi
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06:32:22 P'Sky/Sky-kun
I've got to head to work soon,
I'll be on after I get there
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You too(:

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 Owlstar
07:51:14 tiger\Owl|she\her
I don't study XDD I'm to lazy
 Hurry
07:48:29 
I think those videos that are like "study with me" are pretty good motivators ^^ Or they can help me measure how much I studied in a day. I usually put on 12 or 10 hours and I don't usually finish them, but I can measure if I studied like 2,3,4,5,6 or so hours in total that day
 Viotto
07:40:01 Tito
Owlstar
I have faith in you ^^ I did 12 hours of study for my tests and ive been nervous to look at the scores and somehow they are the best scores ive gotten out of all of them including my essay!
 Owlstar
07:29:33 tiger\Owl|she\her
just finished the test!! I'm not even gonna look at my grades because I REALLY don't want to know what I got XDDD it's probably fine but no idea
 Xanthia
07:15:43 Vash | Xy
I'm not happy >.< I'm so tired😭 I want to sleep but my mom told me to do the dishes
 Viotto
07:15:16 Tito
Sky
I recall you from last year, Do not recall how bright the palette was definitely a good morning xD
 MLadySkylar
07:09:43 P'Sky/Sky-kun
Heyo
 Viotto
07:07:40 Tito
Hey y'all <3 good mornin
 EvergreenHills
07:01:51 Juicy Arm Boy
Aight im gonna go :3 bye chat !
 MLadySkylar
07:00:13 P'Sky/Sky-kun
Im clocked in ;--;
 EvergreenHills
06:56:11 Juicy Arm Boy
Owl
Oh shit
Uh

Nah you’ll be fineee
 Sleep
06:53:29 Kneecap stealer
263/400 mushies to get a viti
 Owlstar
06:51:20 tiger\Owl|she\her
I kinda forgot most of the stuff...
 Owlstar
06:51:01 tiger\Owl|she\her
I'm so cooked...
 EvergreenHills
06:51:00 Juicy Arm Boy
Psky
Hi ! How are ya?

Owl
Pfft Im sure you’ll do great
 Owlstar
06:49:48 tiger\Owl|she\her
I have to take a math quiz now 😭😭😭 I'm so bad at math 😭😭
 MLadySkylar
06:49:16 P'Sky/Sky-kun
Hi hi ^°^
 EvergreenHills
06:47:32 Juicy Arm Boy
Hi
 MLadySkylar
06:32:22 P'Sky/Sky-kun
I've got to head to work soon,
I'll be on after I get there
 Night Raven College
06:32:20 NRC/Raven
You too(:




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Help me/CritiqueJune 28, 2018 04:27 PM


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Something isn't settling well with me and this image... Could you guys help?

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Help me/CritiqueJune 29, 2018 08:42 PM


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You did a very good job, but I can see a few things that could be touched up on.

The cat's chest is facing us, but the entirety of it's side is visible. It's back wouldn't be able to twist like this so we should either see only part of the chest, or part of the side and back.

If you chose to keep the back instead of the front-facing chest, I would add a little more exaggeration to the back and maybe lose, or change, some of the fur detail. With cats, the elegant curve of the back is very noticeable.

If you decided to keep the front-facing chest, the back and hind legs would be behind it, though the curve would still be visible, of course.

The legs themselves are a little lumpy, compared to the graceful lines a cat has. The heels should be lower, and at a less extreme angle, while the knees would have a slightly shallower curve that blends gracefully into the body. The hindquarters could be rounder, and shorter to show where the hip bones are.

I've never been great with front-facing legs, but cats have slightly thicker, short forearms, usually. There might not be as deep a dip from shoulder to neck, and the most noticeable joint from the front of the leg would be the wrist curving slightly sloping outwards, thickening before becoming the paw.

The ears could be less rounded, though of course it depends on the breed or OC you were drawing. Cat ears are most often triangular, and I would set them a little higher up on the head while lengthening the cheeks. Cats have slightly round heads.

I would make the tail tuft thick and blend it into the tail more, rather than a separate piece of fur, but that one is more a personal preference.

I would love to draw little bits to visually represent my advice, but my tablet's too scratched up to pick up my pen, apparently. '-_- If I get it working again soon, I'll add some pics.

Edited at June 29, 2018 08:43 PM by The Watch

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