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12:10:59

I love when that one pack with 3k+ den spaces buys wolves from me lol

12:10:19 Aura/Pea

Bye moons!

12:09:34 renee

@Moonfall
I was getting super lucky with it at first but now I can't even remember the last time I won.

12:09:03 Many moons, one me

See you later Aura

12:08:44 Many moons, one me

Renee
Fair. There's a pack status specifically for the beetle. That's how bad it is lol

12:06:58 Aura/Pea

I think I should go to bed! Bye! 😴 oh crap
It's midnight
Yes
Bye!

12:06:45 renee

the beetle game has me wanting to fight all computers

12:04:44 Andy [he/they]

I think i should make an art gallery

11:55:38

np!

11:55:09 Ash/Nawks

Ohhh I see, thanks!

11:54:22

they're a currency not really an item

11:53:40

@ash
It would show you how many you have in the emporium shop

11:52:44 Aura/Pea

Changed it! 🙏

11:52:42 Ash/Nawks

Hello! I fought another pack in explore and got a lupine claw but it's not in my inventory. Where do I find it?

11:51:30 Aura/Pea

Cwn
Lol
Thanks! I should find a backround for her that isn't so
Dark... XD

11:48:52 ~Cwn~

Her markings are strange but damn is she a nice wolf or what xD

11:45:57 Aura/Pea

-WP Click- Is it me or is she depressing to look at? 😭

11:45:37 Andy [he/they]

Closing my minecraft just to open an art program and spend the next three hours drawing. Im so screentime pilled.

11:44:43 Aura/Pea

Aww! To bad :/

11:42:42 Many moons, one me

Aura
Right? Only problem is I can't use it, I don't have premium. I'm going to put it in my market and hopefully someone wants it

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12:10:59

I love when that one pack with 3k+ den spaces buys wolves from me lol

12:10:19 Aura/Pea

Bye moons!

12:09:34 renee

@Moonfall
I was getting super lucky with it at first but now I can't even remember the last time I won.

12:09:03 Many moons, one me

See you later Aura

12:08:44 Many moons, one me

Renee
Fair. There's a pack status specifically for the beetle. That's how bad it is lol

12:06:58 Aura/Pea

I think I should go to bed! Bye! 😴 oh crap
It's midnight
Yes
Bye!

12:06:45 renee

the beetle game has me wanting to fight all computers

12:04:44 Andy [he/they]

I think i should make an art gallery

11:55:38

np!

11:55:09 Ash/Nawks

Ohhh I see, thanks!

11:54:22

they're a currency not really an item

11:53:40

@ash
It would show you how many you have in the emporium shop

11:52:44 Aura/Pea

Changed it! 🙏

11:52:42 Ash/Nawks

Hello! I fought another pack in explore and got a lupine claw but it's not in my inventory. Where do I find it?

11:51:30 Aura/Pea

Cwn
Lol
Thanks! I should find a backround for her that isn't so
Dark... XD

11:48:52 ~Cwn~

Her markings are strange but damn is she a nice wolf or what xD

11:45:57 Aura/Pea

-WP Click- Is it me or is she depressing to look at? 😭

11:45:37 Andy [he/they]

Closing my minecraft just to open an art program and spend the next three hours drawing. Im so screentime pilled.

11:44:43 Aura/Pea

Aww! To bad :/

11:42:42 Many moons, one me

Aura
Right? Only problem is I can't use it, I don't have premium. I'm going to put it in my market and hopefully someone wants it

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July 30, 2018 05:59 AM

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I was just messing around and I made this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/yhul59mm5/dog_2_red_merle.png

And this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/qaowjlu99/horsem.png

If anyone can't see^ that's a horse on a dark green and black background

I'm just looking for advice and stuff.

Edited at July 30, 2018 06:00 AM by Diggie

July 30, 2018 02:36 PM

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Horse

I can't see it

But the D ring for your bit is way too big

And the rest of the bridle is way to small

July 30, 2018 02:46 PM

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Well,for the leopard I would have added more details. The lines look straight, maybe fluff thru up a bit with some fur. For the paws, you could try something like this.

https://s15.postimg.cc/petz174uz/beach.png

Or

https://s15.postimg.cc/5wzblbsij/1532979343133.png

(Lineart by Kekeywolf. Devianart. com)

Then you could go in and give the leopard cartoon like eyes, sorta like the wolf above. Black dots make it look extremely basic and simple.

For the horse:

Well, first, try a lighter background. The animal is extremely hard to see,even with full brightness.

Try fixing the ear. Keep horse atomony in memory. Swoop the ear forward a bit. And the chin needs fixed a bit. Here..just look at this:

https://s15.postimg.cc/q6wn0glxn/1532979820954.png

I would possibly work on mane a bit too.

There is a strip of white by the chin that you should finish coloring in.

However, despite this all,I love your work! I can see great things coming from you in the future ^^

Edited at July 30, 2018 02:47 PM by Astrophel°^°

July 30, 2018 03:58 PM

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Thanks Astro and Midnight!

The top one is a red merle Amercian Staffordshire though, which is why the eyes are black

I'll change the toes a bit, maybe make the horse's background lighter.

I'll also change the chin, but currently I'm trying to decide what to work on next XD

July 30, 2018 06:33 PM

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Sorry if I sound rude but... I can't see the horse lol! The dogs paws could use some work, but other than that it looks super cute! Great Job!

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