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 Draconic Moon
09:16:58 Moon, Dracomoon
Lordy
It is T-T when someone asks for constructive criticism I go all in, apparently lol.
 The Rat Lord
09:16:06 Rat lord (he/him)
Moon
God damn that’s a post! 0.0
 Draconic Moon
09:15:21 Moon, Dracomoon
Everred
Ooo, pretty! The background actually looks so nice! Though, I think the balloons may be a bit too bright. I know carnivals are meant to be all kinds of bright colors, but normally for coloring (and I don't know how to properly explain this, so bear with me lol) normally you try to use colors to draw the eye, and would therefore use like brighter or just very different colors on the focal point/where you want a viewer to pay attention to compared to the background. (think, a forest at night with a pale colored character, or vice versa. It doesn't have to be dark v. light though. Color theory is your friend lol). I would suggest making them not so saturated. (I hope I explained that well, but if not, ask me to elaborate. I'll do my best :3) Also for the dragon, the placement of the leg that's holding the ring is placed a bit too forward. You have a side-view of the character, not a 3/4 or other view, so the shoulders should be about the same place either side. Also the poor guy just doesn't have their back half lol. (Which, honestly, is something I'd probably end up doing because sometimes there's just too many details in one spot for my poor brain to comprehend) It might help to space the characters out differently, alter the view, or change the poses if you're having a too-much-in-one-spot sort of issue there! (Honestly though, the only reason I noticed that is because you asked for constructive criticism. I hear that phrase and I just start studying the picture lol) I do think it's a really nice drawing though! The dragon (what are your characters' names?) looks like they're either about to cheat at the game or is just really excited and I love that lol. Go forth and enjoy your rigged carnival games. Also I feel like this is going to be super long and I'm so sorry about that.
 The Rat Lord
09:12:27 Rat lord (he/him)
Hell yeah! Domovoi is apparently good at poker so I just won 5 dog bones!!
 Zeraphia
09:11:14 Captain / Vah
Ever

Rendering is my enemy.

So I do it anyways. >.>
 distant-lands
09:11:06 katy | beetle
ever,
it's a whole scene piece too :'D i try to do one every year for artfight
 Evergreenhills
09:10:33 Juicy Arm Boy
Katy
You got this !! I believe in you !!

Storm
I should I should :0 bye <33

Vah
I’m working on it I swear XD I’m just too scared about rendering and shit like that :’3
 Eye of Eternity
09:10:20 tern | they/he
rat lord
that sounds like something from booktok or the manosphere
 Zeraphia
09:09:24 Captain / Vah
Ever

It takes a lotta practice, I ain't lie lol
 Tikokura
09:09:05 Tiko / call me zap
Anyways, bye guys
 Tikokura
09:08:36 Tiko / call me zap
Ever
You should make a diva version of him
Also I have to read the rules again I forget which abbreviations are allowed :(
 distant-lands
09:08:08 katy | beetle
hey chat ^^
time to lock in and line this piece i sketched. i decided on doing thin-lines.
 Evergreenhills
09:07:16 Juicy Arm Boy
Bye Storm <33 it was soo much fun talking to ya :D
 Tikokura
09:06:55 Tiko / call me zap
I’m going to hop off now, bye y’all
 Evergreenhills
09:06:40 Juicy Arm Boy
Vah
It was soo good <33 genuinely made me stare at my art for a second and just wish xD

Storm
Maybe I’ll make him into a diva one day
 Zeraphia
09:05:06 Captain / Vah
Ever

Hehehe

The symbolism makes me happy
 The Rat Lord
09:04:38 Rat lord (he/him)
Quiz time! If you get it right I’ll give you 10 much! What is this from: “there’s a code amongst men, and it goes like this, I. Saw. Her. First”
 Evergreenhills
09:04:27 Juicy Arm Boy
Eyeguy
It always startles me 😭
 Tikokura
09:04:27 Tiko / call me zap
Ever
XD
I see that now, diva he is then.
 Evergreenhills
09:04:12 Juicy Arm Boy
Eughhh I just spotted a mistake in the drawing that I can’t unsee </3 can’t fix it either because I already submitted it as an attack :’3

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 Draconic Moon
09:16:58 Moon, Dracomoon
Lordy
It is T-T when someone asks for constructive criticism I go all in, apparently lol.
 The Rat Lord
09:16:06 Rat lord (he/him)
Moon
God damn that’s a post! 0.0
 Draconic Moon
09:15:21 Moon, Dracomoon
Everred
Ooo, pretty! The background actually looks so nice! Though, I think the balloons may be a bit too bright. I know carnivals are meant to be all kinds of bright colors, but normally for coloring (and I don't know how to properly explain this, so bear with me lol) normally you try to use colors to draw the eye, and would therefore use like brighter or just very different colors on the focal point/where you want a viewer to pay attention to compared to the background. (think, a forest at night with a pale colored character, or vice versa. It doesn't have to be dark v. light though. Color theory is your friend lol). I would suggest making them not so saturated. (I hope I explained that well, but if not, ask me to elaborate. I'll do my best :3) Also for the dragon, the placement of the leg that's holding the ring is placed a bit too forward. You have a side-view of the character, not a 3/4 or other view, so the shoulders should be about the same place either side. Also the poor guy just doesn't have their back half lol. (Which, honestly, is something I'd probably end up doing because sometimes there's just too many details in one spot for my poor brain to comprehend) It might help to space the characters out differently, alter the view, or change the poses if you're having a too-much-in-one-spot sort of issue there! (Honestly though, the only reason I noticed that is because you asked for constructive criticism. I hear that phrase and I just start studying the picture lol) I do think it's a really nice drawing though! The dragon (what are your characters' names?) looks like they're either about to cheat at the game or is just really excited and I love that lol. Go forth and enjoy your rigged carnival games. Also I feel like this is going to be super long and I'm so sorry about that.
 The Rat Lord
09:12:27 Rat lord (he/him)
Hell yeah! Domovoi is apparently good at poker so I just won 5 dog bones!!
 Zeraphia
09:11:14 Captain / Vah
Ever

Rendering is my enemy.

So I do it anyways. >.>
 distant-lands
09:11:06 katy | beetle
ever,
it's a whole scene piece too :'D i try to do one every year for artfight
 Evergreenhills
09:10:33 Juicy Arm Boy
Katy
You got this !! I believe in you !!

Storm
I should I should :0 bye <33

Vah
I’m working on it I swear XD I’m just too scared about rendering and shit like that :’3
 Eye of Eternity
09:10:20 tern | they/he
rat lord
that sounds like something from booktok or the manosphere
 Zeraphia
09:09:24 Captain / Vah
Ever

It takes a lotta practice, I ain't lie lol
 Tikokura
09:09:05 Tiko / call me zap
Anyways, bye guys
 Tikokura
09:08:36 Tiko / call me zap
Ever
You should make a diva version of him
Also I have to read the rules again I forget which abbreviations are allowed :(
 distant-lands
09:08:08 katy | beetle
hey chat ^^
time to lock in and line this piece i sketched. i decided on doing thin-lines.
 Evergreenhills
09:07:16 Juicy Arm Boy
Bye Storm <33 it was soo much fun talking to ya :D
 Tikokura
09:06:55 Tiko / call me zap
I’m going to hop off now, bye y’all
 Evergreenhills
09:06:40 Juicy Arm Boy
Vah
It was soo good <33 genuinely made me stare at my art for a second and just wish xD

Storm
Maybe I’ll make him into a diva one day
 Zeraphia
09:05:06 Captain / Vah
Ever

Hehehe

The symbolism makes me happy
 The Rat Lord
09:04:38 Rat lord (he/him)
Quiz time! If you get it right I’ll give you 10 much! What is this from: “there’s a code amongst men, and it goes like this, I. Saw. Her. First”
 Evergreenhills
09:04:27 Juicy Arm Boy
Eyeguy
It always startles me 😭
 Tikokura
09:04:27 Tiko / call me zap
Ever
XD
I see that now, diva he is then.
 Evergreenhills
09:04:12 Juicy Arm Boy
Eughhh I just spotted a mistake in the drawing that I can’t unsee </3 can’t fix it either because I already submitted it as an attack :’3




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Lapin x RushieMarch 12, 2024 04:48 PM


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Name

Kiri Sulet

Gender

Female

Age

Twenty-two

Species

Werewolf

Sexuality

Bi-sexual

Appearance

-Hair color & Style: Kiri’s hair is a light cream blonde that hangs in slight waves down to her shoulders. Her hair is thick and if she let you get close enough to touch it, it would be soft and fluffy. She doesn’t do much with it and most often just leaves it down. Her hair sheds like a dogs (pun intended) and its a wonder she has any hair left at all.

-Skintone: A light beige skin tone covers Kiri’s body. She has thick skin, literally and figuratively. Her skin is the type that doesn’t burn, it only tans. It also takes quite a bit for her skin to start to bruise. Kiri is also known to run hot, due to her lycan blood. In 20 degree weather she could be found in shorts and a t-shirt. She radiates heat like a furnace and is warm to the touch.

-Face & Features: Round-almond, deep-set eyes sit evenly spaced upon her heart shaped face. Her eyes are a bright yellow gold that seem to glow even in the daylight. Her eyes are framed by long lightly colored lashes that are darker than her hair. Her soft arched brows are the same color as her lashes. She has a smaller button nose sitting above medium thick, slightly downturned lips.

-Height & Build: Standing at a height of 5ft 6in she has what you would call a rectangular shaped body. She is pretty straight up and down with minimal curves. She is lean and has an athletic build. She doesn’t appear to be muscularly stong but don't be fooled by appearances. She is twice as strong as any mortal man.

-Other (scars, tattoos, etc.): Kiri has two solid black bands tattooed around her left forearm just below her elbow. The top band is slightly thicker than the bottom one. This is her only tattoo and she had no notable scars.

Wolf appearance

In this form Kiri is not your typical wolf. She stands 4.5ft at the shoulder and is nearly 9ft long from nose tip to tail (yes this is a rideable size) She like the rest of her kind are much larger than regular wolves.

Similar to the color of her hair in her human form, Kiri has a cream colored pelt. Her eyes also stay the same in this form, a bright yellow/gold.

Photo credits to Quite-bliss on DA

Personality

Kiri is loyal to a fault. To her kingdom and its people. If asked she would laydown her life with no hesitation. And it doesn't attribute to her being a werewolf, this is just how she is. Though it could have something to do with the fact that the Alpha and Luna are her Aunt and Uncle. Kiri’s father was the Luna’s brother. Her mother and father were killed by vampires when she was a child. This has lead to a deep hate of the vampire race. She was taken in by the Alpha and Luna and grew up under their care.

Kiri is a very guarded person. She would even hesitate just to tell you her name. She believes everyone has an ulterior motive and is just using her for something. That is not to say that she cant learn to trust someone, it just takes time, and patience. Which is something she has little of. Asking her to sit and wait for something is like torture.

Werewolf info

  • Werewolves are much larger than regular wolves, making them easy to identify.
  • They can only change between human and wolf. There is no half shifting in between
  • Even in human form they still retain their heightened abilities, strength, speed, sight smell, hearing, and even heightened healing.
  • There are no half werewolves. If a werewolf and another species had a child, that child would be either one species or the other.
  • They have complete control over when they shift. With the exception of a night with a full moon. On those nights every werewolf shifts into wolf form and stays that way until the moon sets.
  • In wolf form they still have their human reasoning. They don't turn into complete wild animals.
  • In wolf form they speak directly into another persons mind. And no they can’t read minds.
  • Werewolves live longer than humans do, at about 250 years old.

Kingdom info

  • The werewolf kingdom of Lithelle is centered within the Neuram forest.
  • The current rulers of Lithelle are Dominic Dhara, the Alpha, and Gracia Dhara, the Luna.
  • The Alpha and Luna’s word is law.
  • The werewolf kingdom is made up of 90% werewolves. The remaining 10% are spouses or family of other races.
  • Titles and meanings. Alpha and Luna are the rulers of Lithelle. Betas are the right hands to the Alpha and Luna. there are only two Beta’s. Sentries are the guards of the kingdom, tasked with safety and peace keeping of the kingdom, they remain with in the kingdoms boarders. Warriors are those who defend the kingdom from beyond its walls, they are skilled fighters. Hunters are those who are exceptional and hunting and tracking down prey. They make sure the kingdom has an abundance of food. Scouts are tasked with patrolling the pack territory, and are to warn of any dangers. Each role has a lead person called a Delta.

Edited at March 18, 2024 02:20 PM by Lapin
Lapin x RushieMarch 12, 2024 08:59 PM


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