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Good luck on apples prices ;-;

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But maybe you're luckier than I am! So hey, try your luck

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you can buy them and earn them. Buying is the easier option, but you have to pay with real money. You can also bid on apples in Raffles but so manny people do those that your chances of winning are low.

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Snowclan, you can buy them for real money, or for mush in the market, and sometimes there are some competitions or events where you can win them

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How do I get apples?

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I opened the game beetle and the computer already had a body, head, two eyes, one antenna, and a leg.

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Damn, I think 80 is the most I've had (now and on previous accounts)

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101 enemies 😁

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Hi hi

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Tiffy sniffs under a bush and finds a greenhouse.... damn, how small is that greenhouse haha

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I had 50 den spaces when I fell asleep
Woke up to 0

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05:30:36 Red

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thoughts?

05:25:26 Red

i know!!!

05:23:42 P'Sky/Sky-kun

Good luck on apples prices ;-;

05:19:49 Red

But maybe you're luckier than I am! So hey, try your luck

05:19:25 Red

05:19:18

Snowclan, you can buy them for real money, or for mush in the market, and sometimes there are some competitions or events where you can win them

05:16:03

How do I get apples?

05:15:47

sad

Giftofeden

05:15:38 Eden/ Key/ TS

hiya

05:13:36 Red

chat is dead right now <P

05:02:51

05:02:31 Red

I opened the game beetle and the computer already had a body, head, two eyes, one antenna, and a leg.

04:57:56

Damn, I think 80 is the most I've had (now and on previous accounts)

04:55:50 P'Sky/Sky-kun

101 enemies 😁

04:52:14 P'Sky/Sky-kun

Hi hi

04:50:57 Red

04:44:35

04:14:34

Tiffy sniffs under a bush and finds a greenhouse.... damn, how small is that greenhouse haha

03:43:51 P'Sky/Sky-kun

I had 50 den spaces when I fell asleep
Woke up to 0

Destinations End

02:56:27 Toliska, Desti, Coy

@pup
It's not showing any X's?

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Forums > Artwork > Art Help

September 18, 2018 05:13 PM

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So I'm looking for critique of my art

When posting pleade state what peice of art your posting for

Thank you

Huge wolf project [sketch]

https://i.postimg.cc/pXQvpwCQ/Untitled124.png

Hide and Seek [HEE contest]

http://oi66.tinypic.com/rlgox5.jpg

Edited at September 18, 2018 06:54 PM by Moonshire Pack

September 18, 2018 06:54 PM

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new artz added

September 18, 2018 06:59 PM

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Um they both look fine to me xD

September 18, 2018 07:32 PM

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The wolf looks great, but maybe make the belly "bigger" when it gets to its hind legs.

September 19, 2018 03:31 AM

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Thank you :D

September 19, 2018 05:07 AM

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Agreeing with Damian. The body/ belly lines should move down a little or else the legs would look too big, hind legs mostly but front legs too.

Round out the ears a little?

The back hind leg looks a bit off, perhaps move it forward a bit and add a bit of an angle so it doesn't look so straight? Or perhaps it was just the paw.

I can't help on the photo manipulation though. Sorry!

September 19, 2018 08:25 AM

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the belly should be a little bigger near the back, and the nose/snout is quite pointed, I would round it out a little for a more realistic look. Other than that it looks great! Did you use a reference?

September 19, 2018 09:15 AM