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08:26:06 Kros

Fern,

No problem!

08:24:40 Beaver

Kros, now she let me feather xD thank you very much for that Forum link :D

08:23:53 Slowly coming back

@Ezra
yeah one light fallow

08:23:05 ezra, he/him

amor-
damn that's a lot of puppies. got some good ones in there though!

08:20:08 Slowly coming back

I forgot i bred 34 wolves to pop at once...

08:19:09 Nalavara

Beaver,
The wolf needs to be in labor before the toucan feather can work.

08:18:39 Kros

Fern,

-WP Click-

08:18:10 Beaver

Oh ok thats good then! Thank you :D

08:17:42 Vash | Xy

Rip I don't feel like sleeping anymore😭😭

08:17:25 Kros

Fern,

May be too late in labor. I've heard if they are like within thirty minutes of popping, you can't use the feather

08:16:25 Beaver

My wolf isnt letting me use my toucan feather? Is this a normal bug? I tried to do it 3 times :')
-WP Click-

08:13:04 stuDYING <3

Cae 0-0 are you still here? I haven't yapped to you in a while

08:09:54 tiger\Owl|she\her

I made a new song!! It’s called the lava song

08:06:56 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

@echo good

07:59:47 Stalking chat

Ever,
thank you!
I've deffiently gotten better lol

07:58:54 Juicy Arm Boy

Wild
Super cool X3

07:58:14 Stalking chat

-Click-

how we think so far?
I gotta finish up the lines from paint bucket--but how we think?

07:48:34 tiger\Owl|she\her

I love those days

07:37:24 P'Sky/Sky-kun

Senpai
Lol yesh free cp and explore moves

07:34:28 Caesar

oh, bone boom? super soup day? we love that

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08:26:06 Kros

Fern,

No problem!

08:24:40 Beaver

Kros, now she let me feather xD thank you very much for that Forum link :D

08:23:53 Slowly coming back

@Ezra
yeah one light fallow

08:23:05 ezra, he/him

amor-
damn that's a lot of puppies. got some good ones in there though!

08:20:08 Slowly coming back

I forgot i bred 34 wolves to pop at once...

08:19:09 Nalavara

Beaver,
The wolf needs to be in labor before the toucan feather can work.

08:18:39 Kros

Fern,

-WP Click-

08:18:10 Beaver

Oh ok thats good then! Thank you :D

08:17:42 Vash | Xy

Rip I don't feel like sleeping anymore😭😭

08:17:25 Kros

Fern,

May be too late in labor. I've heard if they are like within thirty minutes of popping, you can't use the feather

08:16:25 Beaver

My wolf isnt letting me use my toucan feather? Is this a normal bug? I tried to do it 3 times :')
-WP Click-

08:13:04 stuDYING <3

Cae 0-0 are you still here? I haven't yapped to you in a while

08:09:54 tiger\Owl|she\her

I made a new song!! It’s called the lava song

08:06:56 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

@echo good

07:59:47 Stalking chat

Ever,
thank you!
I've deffiently gotten better lol

07:58:54 Juicy Arm Boy

Wild
Super cool X3

07:58:14 Stalking chat

-Click-

how we think so far?
I gotta finish up the lines from paint bucket--but how we think?

07:48:34 tiger\Owl|she\her

I love those days

07:37:24 P'Sky/Sky-kun

Senpai
Lol yesh free cp and explore moves

07:34:28 Caesar

oh, bone boom? super soup day? we love that

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June 17, 2018 01:25 PM

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Heya, I was hoping for some critique on this!
https://image.ibb.co/my78pd/04_B80_E15_8317_4_AFD_A3_CC_39_B9_AB3_ACB6_C.png

June 17, 2018 01:30 PM

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It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

June 17, 2018 01:31 PM

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ThunderousSymphonies said:
It's totally gorgeous, I feel like the eyes could, since you look like you're going for realistic rather than cartoon, could still feasibly be larger and the nose, the lines are a little unclear for the bridge so it looks a little iffy as to where the wolf is looking. Otherwise it is adorable and I love it!

Thanks! I'm fixing now!

June 17, 2018 01:39 PM

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https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

June 17, 2018 01:54 PM

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It is gorgeous, but to make it more eye catching, I would recommend more shadow and more light.

The shading is very dull, but that can be easily fixed!!!

Other than that, it is a stunning piece of artwork!

June 21, 2018 05:37 PM

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I would make the eyes larger and with a slightly more defined shape, along with the nose, and make the muzzle and ears a little sharper and the chin a little bigger.

https://image.ibb.co/nq4oVT/advice.png

https://image.ibb.co/jZzchy/2036_E323_3_D3_B_4_A1_F_B247_0_C279_BCD761_A.png

By the way, I love your colouring! I can't colour for anything!

June 22, 2018 11:30 PM

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I would just say work a little with the direction the fur flows in, and the lighting on the snout is a little askew (I would suggest a slightly sharper angle]

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