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11:12:51 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

@Sir skales thanks may take you up on an offer

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11:09:57 tern | they/he

andy
i can imagine :'0
awww poor baby :(

11:04:16 Andy [he/they]

Scooby has been squealing every time I stand up because he was there when i first fell over from the Hypotension -_-

11:03:03 Andy [he/they]

Tern

Yeah it was horrible lol. And thanks!

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11:01:00 tern | they/he

andy
ohhh yeah thats a nasty combination
glad youre doing better now though ^^

10:59:03 Andy [he/they]

Tern

Im doing way better now! Low blood pressure and dehydration, pretty much.

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10:55:43 tern | they/he

andy
oh geez are you okay?

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@Nin
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My pms are open if you like

10:54:05 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

@Sir skales maybe and welcome

10:53:59 Andy [he/they]

Just got back from the ER. Woohoo

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10:53:54 tern | they/he

i cant tell if i love or hate the moon faced man hes so weird he gives me bad vibes but in such an endearing way??

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@Nin
Im sorry your only okayish. Do you want to talk about it

Thank you

10:45:53 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

@sir skales eh okayish hope you feel better

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10:42:29 Toliska, Desti, Coy

@Nin
Not very good read now. I am really stressed and in lots of pain.

How are you doing though

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@sir skales how are you?

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10:40:13 Toliska, Desti, Coy

Hello Nin :)

10:38:45 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

hi sir skales

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Ugh.. I hate how shaky my fingers and hand are / are becoming

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@Sir skales thanks may take you up on an offer

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andy
i can imagine :'0
awww poor baby :(

11:04:16 Andy [he/they]

Scooby has been squealing every time I stand up because he was there when i first fell over from the Hypotension -_-

11:03:03 Andy [he/they]

Tern

Yeah it was horrible lol. And thanks!

Eye of Eternity

11:01:00 tern | they/he

andy
ohhh yeah thats a nasty combination
glad youre doing better now though ^^

10:59:03 Andy [he/they]

Tern

Im doing way better now! Low blood pressure and dehydration, pretty much.

Eye of Eternity

10:55:43 tern | they/he

andy
oh geez are you okay?

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10:55:03 Toliska, Desti, Coy

@Nin
<3
My pms are open if you like

10:54:05 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

@Sir skales maybe and welcome

10:53:59 Andy [he/they]

Just got back from the ER. Woohoo

Eye of Eternity

10:53:54 tern | they/he

i cant tell if i love or hate the moon faced man hes so weird he gives me bad vibes but in such an endearing way??

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10:48:52 Toliska, Desti, Coy

@Nin
Im sorry your only okayish. Do you want to talk about it

Thank you

10:45:53 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

@sir skales eh okayish hope you feel better

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10:42:29 Toliska, Desti, Coy

@Nin
Not very good read now. I am really stressed and in lots of pain.

How are you doing though

10:40:26 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

@sir skales how are you?

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10:40:13 Toliska, Desti, Coy

Hello Nin :)

10:38:45 Waterfall,Zane,Pixal

hi sir skales

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Ugh.. I hate how shaky my fingers and hand are / are becoming

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April 16, 2018 09:07 PM

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Here's the image

https://s14.postimg.cc/4h7dmgk29/Random_Galaxy.png

For some reason, something's been really bothering me about this picture and I can't seem to figure out what.

All critiques are appreciated, or just tell me what you wish was changed

Edited at April 16, 2018 09:43 PM by Embers.

April 16, 2018 09:12 PM

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Maybe more stars? We don't really see them

Except for that, I don't see what could be wrong ^^

April 16, 2018 09:37 PM

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DarkCloudClan said:
Maybe more stars? We don't really see them
Except for that, I don't see what could be wrong ^^

Alright, lemme spam the stars and update the picture XD

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Edited at April 16, 2018 09:43 PM by Embers.

April 16, 2018 11:31 PM

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Honestly, I really like it XD Maybe you need some subtle hue shifts in there? For example, since this art seems to be getting warmer the lighter it is, you should make the highlights a bit more red where the purple is brightest, if that makes any sense?

Or maybe it's because of the front? If you look at it some more, it seems to be more like a cloud in front than part of the galaxy because the stars are brighter around the purple. So maybe you can try to make the stars brighter there? I like it a lot (:

April 16, 2018 11:53 PM

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a m b e r said:
Honestly, I really like it XD Maybe you need some subtle hue shifts in there? For example, since this art seems to be getting warmer the lighter it is, you should make the highlights a bit more red where the purple is brightest, if that makes any sense?

Or maybe it's because of the front? If you look at it some more, it seems to be more like a cloud in front than part of the galaxy because the stars are brighter around the purple. So maybe you can try to make the stars brighter there? I like it a lot (:

XD Thanks, let me update it again

April 16, 2018 11:55 PM

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I really like it! Possibly a couple other colors blended? Lighter blues and brighter pinks maybe. Just a subtle change.

April 17, 2018 12:48 AM

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Maybe if you make it a bit lighter?

April 17, 2018 01:48 AM

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I love It! I don't know much about art, but the purple cloud/nebula looks a little on the denser side.

Still, it's really beautiful! :D

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