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 Eye of Eternity
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rat
thats so cool :0
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Honey
Yes I sew, self taught too!

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Yerp
 Kháos
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Socializing is terrifying. My voice is so quiet right now. 😭
 Eye of Eternity
09:50:19 tern | they/he
hot cocoa at nearly 10 at night cant be a bad idea,,, right?
 Eye of Eternity
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never
awww so cute :00
 Nevermore
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Thank you Ever, it'll be colored in 700 years
 EvergreenHills
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Never
Ooh I love it :0
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I present a sleepy pony sketch before I go to bed
 EvergreenHills
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Sorry I poofed </3
 Eye of Eternity
09:39:28 tern | they/he
honey
oooh that is nice :0
 Honeybee_Falls
09:39:06 Honey
On the plus side, I have enough pretty landscape paintings that I have no more wall space
 Eye of Eternity
09:38:09 tern | they/he
i am so done with will smith hell this is evil
 Eye of Eternity
09:37:19 tern | they/he
honey
ah me too :'3 this is why i do digital- to avoid all the physical clutter (i have enough from never taking down setups for pieces)

rat lord
oooh stuffed animals?
 Honeybee_Falls
09:36:58 Honey
Rat,
Oh my gosh do you sew?
 Lucky Rat
09:36:13 Rat/spooky/(he/him)
Honey/EoE
Y’all just reminded me I also have a graveyard of art and unfinished stuffed animals I need to finish :’)
 Honeybee_Falls
09:35:34 Honey
Tern,
Me too but I have bad deadline anxiety so I end up ditching one to do an important piece for school, competition, friends, or likewise. The piles hurt to look at but I know I’ll finish them or repurpose the piece when time is cleared up
 Eye of Eternity
09:32:49 tern | they/he
honey
ohhhhh i see i see
that sounds like hell honestly i cant stand unfinished projects /semisilly
 Honeybee_Falls
09:29:48 Honey
Tern,
I have a bunch of unfinished ones that hopefully will be completed this summer. However, most of my work is watercolor or acrylic on canvas so I have a massive art graveyard in my room. I don’t do a lot of digital, really
 Eye of Eternity
09:28:54 tern | they/he
*thats why
 Eye of Eternity
09:28:46 tern | they/he
honey
ohhhh understandable :'3 this is why all my drawings are half-finished (or less)

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 Eye of Eternity
09:59:20 tern | they/he
rat
thats so cool :0
 Lucky Rat
09:58:27 Rat/spooky/(he/him)
Honey
Yes I sew, self taught too!

EoE
Yerp
 Kháos
09:51:49 Kaos || Kháos
Socializing is terrifying. My voice is so quiet right now. 😭
 Eye of Eternity
09:50:19 tern | they/he
hot cocoa at nearly 10 at night cant be a bad idea,,, right?
 Eye of Eternity
09:49:35 tern | they/he
never
awww so cute :00
 Nevermore
09:47:02 Never/Nev
Thank you Ever, it'll be colored in 700 years
 EvergreenHills
09:46:28 Juicy Arm Boy
Never
Ooh I love it :0
 Nevermore
09:45:35 Never/Nev
-Click-
I present a sleepy pony sketch before I go to bed
 EvergreenHills
09:45:09 Juicy Arm Boy
Sorry I poofed </3
 Eye of Eternity
09:39:28 tern | they/he
honey
oooh that is nice :0
 Honeybee_Falls
09:39:06 Honey
On the plus side, I have enough pretty landscape paintings that I have no more wall space
 Eye of Eternity
09:38:09 tern | they/he
i am so done with will smith hell this is evil
 Eye of Eternity
09:37:19 tern | they/he
honey
ah me too :'3 this is why i do digital- to avoid all the physical clutter (i have enough from never taking down setups for pieces)

rat lord
oooh stuffed animals?
 Honeybee_Falls
09:36:58 Honey
Rat,
Oh my gosh do you sew?
 Lucky Rat
09:36:13 Rat/spooky/(he/him)
Honey/EoE
Y’all just reminded me I also have a graveyard of art and unfinished stuffed animals I need to finish :’)
 Honeybee_Falls
09:35:34 Honey
Tern,
Me too but I have bad deadline anxiety so I end up ditching one to do an important piece for school, competition, friends, or likewise. The piles hurt to look at but I know I’ll finish them or repurpose the piece when time is cleared up
 Eye of Eternity
09:32:49 tern | they/he
honey
ohhhhh i see i see
that sounds like hell honestly i cant stand unfinished projects /semisilly
 Honeybee_Falls
09:29:48 Honey
Tern,
I have a bunch of unfinished ones that hopefully will be completed this summer. However, most of my work is watercolor or acrylic on canvas so I have a massive art graveyard in my room. I don’t do a lot of digital, really
 Eye of Eternity
09:28:54 tern | they/he
*thats why
 Eye of Eternity
09:28:46 tern | they/he
honey
ohhhh understandable :'3 this is why all my drawings are half-finished (or less)




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Critique?July 30, 2018 05:59 AM


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I was just messing around and I made this:
https://s20.postimg.cc/yhul59mm5/dog_2_red_merle.png
And this:
https://s20.postimg.cc/qaowjlu99/horsem.png
If anyone can't see^ that's a horse on a dark green and black background
I'm just looking for advice and stuff.

Edited at July 30, 2018 06:00 AM by Diggie
Critique?July 30, 2018 02:36 PM


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Horse
I can't see it
But the D ring for your bit is way too big
And the rest of the bridle is way to small
Critique?July 30, 2018 02:46 PM


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Well,for the leopard I would have added more details. The lines look straight, maybe fluff thru up a bit with some fur. For the paws, you could try something like this.
https://s15.postimg.cc/petz174uz/beach.png

Or
https://s15.postimg.cc/5wzblbsij/1532979343133.png
(Lineart by Kekeywolf. Devianart. com)

Then you could go in and give the leopard cartoon like eyes, sorta like the wolf above. Black dots make it look extremely basic and simple.

For the horse:
Well, first, try a lighter background. The animal is extremely hard to see,even with full brightness.

Try fixing the ear. Keep horse atomony in memory. Swoop the ear forward a bit. And the chin needs fixed a bit. Here..just look at this:
https://s15.postimg.cc/q6wn0glxn/1532979820954.png

I would possibly work on mane a bit too.
There is a strip of white by the chin that you should finish coloring in.

However, despite this all,I love your work! I can see great things coming from you in the future ^^

Edited at July 30, 2018 02:47 PM by Astrophel°^°
Critique?July 30, 2018 03:58 PM


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Thanks Astro and Midnight!
The top one is a red merle Amercian Staffordshire though, which is why the eyes are black
I'll change the toes a bit, maybe make the horse's background lighter.
I'll also change the chin, but currently I'm trying to decide what to work on next XD
Critique?July 30, 2018 06:33 PM


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Sorry if I sound rude but... I can't see the horse lol! The dogs paws could use some work, but other than that it looks super cute! Great Job!

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