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Alright, I've got to hop off, see yall later

07:54:19 Sith Happens

Maybe? I dunno, maybe I'm just lucky

07:53:24 Caesar

only one out of four??? insane, considering thats about the same as my good litter rate ;-;

07:52:13 Sith Happens

@cres, I feel like 1 out of 4 litters will be all duds, but that's the chance I have to take...

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07:51:16 NRC/Raven

I log in and the first thing I see is about a curse...

07:51:11 Sith Happens

It's all good winter! Happens to all of us XD

07:50:37 Caesar

noobking, oh my God the green fern curse doesnt work on you?? how does it feel to be Gods favorite

07:50:35 Winter

Anakin
Lmfao i am so stupid

07:50:01 Caesar

LMAO

07:49:43 Sith Happens

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Winter, the DH you gave me forever ago, that's Percy

07:49:06 Sith Happens

-WP Click-

Then this guy got their emerald eyes :D

07:48:56 Winter

Shot not shit lmao

07:48:51 Winter

I want a shit of Percy whoever he is

07:47:37 Sith Happens

I think I did use green fern.

07:46:30 Caesar

no green fern? doesnt surprise me, those are cursed

07:46:29 Sith Happens

I guess dilemma just really likes Percy? Anytime I breed her to anyone else it's always duds

07:45:51 Sith Happens

No idea, didn't use a golden raspberry or anything

07:44:56 Caesar

tell me your secret, master breeder

07:44:43 Caesar

noobking, genuinely, how the heck e.e

07:31:53 Winter

Anakin
What the heck

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07:54:40 Sith Happens

Alright, I've got to hop off, see yall later

07:54:19 Sith Happens

Maybe? I dunno, maybe I'm just lucky

07:53:24 Caesar

only one out of four??? insane, considering thats about the same as my good litter rate ;-;

07:52:13 Sith Happens

@cres, I feel like 1 out of 4 litters will be all duds, but that's the chance I have to take...

Night Raven College

07:51:16 NRC/Raven

I log in and the first thing I see is about a curse...

07:51:11 Sith Happens

It's all good winter! Happens to all of us XD

07:50:37 Caesar

noobking, oh my God the green fern curse doesnt work on you?? how does it feel to be Gods favorite

07:50:35 Winter

Anakin
Lmfao i am so stupid

07:50:01 Caesar

LMAO

07:49:43 Sith Happens

-WP Click-

Winter, the DH you gave me forever ago, that's Percy

07:49:06 Sith Happens

-WP Click-

Then this guy got their emerald eyes :D

07:48:56 Winter

Shot not shit lmao

07:48:51 Winter

I want a shit of Percy whoever he is

07:47:37 Sith Happens

I think I did use green fern.

07:46:30 Caesar

no green fern? doesnt surprise me, those are cursed

07:46:29 Sith Happens

I guess dilemma just really likes Percy? Anytime I breed her to anyone else it's always duds

07:45:51 Sith Happens

No idea, didn't use a golden raspberry or anything

07:44:56 Caesar

tell me your secret, master breeder

07:44:43 Caesar

noobking, genuinely, how the heck e.e

07:31:53 Winter

Anakin
What the heck

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July 30, 2018 05:59 AM

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I was just messing around and I made this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/yhul59mm5/dog_2_red_merle.png

And this:

https://s20.postimg.cc/qaowjlu99/horsem.png

If anyone can't see^ that's a horse on a dark green and black background

I'm just looking for advice and stuff.

Edited at July 30, 2018 06:00 AM by Diggie

July 30, 2018 02:36 PM

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Horse

I can't see it

But the D ring for your bit is way too big

And the rest of the bridle is way to small

July 30, 2018 02:46 PM

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Well,for the leopard I would have added more details. The lines look straight, maybe fluff thru up a bit with some fur. For the paws, you could try something like this.

https://s15.postimg.cc/petz174uz/beach.png

Or

https://s15.postimg.cc/5wzblbsij/1532979343133.png

(Lineart by Kekeywolf. Devianart. com)

Then you could go in and give the leopard cartoon like eyes, sorta like the wolf above. Black dots make it look extremely basic and simple.

For the horse:

Well, first, try a lighter background. The animal is extremely hard to see,even with full brightness.

Try fixing the ear. Keep horse atomony in memory. Swoop the ear forward a bit. And the chin needs fixed a bit. Here..just look at this:

https://s15.postimg.cc/q6wn0glxn/1532979820954.png

I would possibly work on mane a bit too.

There is a strip of white by the chin that you should finish coloring in.

However, despite this all,I love your work! I can see great things coming from you in the future ^^

Edited at July 30, 2018 02:47 PM by Astrophel°^°

July 30, 2018 03:58 PM

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Thanks Astro and Midnight!

The top one is a red merle Amercian Staffordshire though, which is why the eyes are black

I'll change the toes a bit, maybe make the horse's background lighter.

I'll also change the chin, but currently I'm trying to decide what to work on next XD

July 30, 2018 06:33 PM

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Sorry if I sound rude but... I can't see the horse lol! The dogs paws could use some work, but other than that it looks super cute! Great Job!

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